Strangers- Complete FF - Pages 136 to 139 - Page 80

Originally posted by: ShubS

Prachi is not the kind of woman I would be a fan of. I like Ayesha types better (the pre-Michi, imaginary Ayesha).
In your DC FF, yep, I didn't like that hiding bit about Prachi, but largely she was nice, likeable.. But your Ayesha took the cake, overshadowing Prachi for me.

Originally posted by: aritha

really liked michis first kiss and how it happened. milind is just soooooooooo adorable. couldnt wait until they got home.😆 Yes, if Sahana had not interrupted them he would have kissed her in the hotel itself! The guy has been dying to kiss his wife.

sahana is so cutie cute. her antics in the restaurant, i felt so happy wen i was picturizing her with her papa. her relationship with him so beautifully written opti. milidn is such a great guy. love him to bits. 👏 for this beautiful piece of work. Thanks Aritha for loving my Milind. Yes, he is a great dad. No wonder his daughter is very fond of him.

thank u so much for giving us this FF. am gonna miss it so much. id love to read it again..

I'll post all the parts together in one place once I am done. If you are keen to read it again, it would be easier then.

umm i knwo its too soon. so greedy of me. is there a chance that u start another one....doesnt have to be in teh near future...but plz dont ever stop writing FFs. u r too good with thsi stuff and i truly enjoy reading them. plz keep up teh good work.

Thanks for the compliment but I seriously doubt whether I'll wirte again because I have no story to tell (this one I had wanted to write about even before I finished DC) and more importantly my effeciency at work is suffering with my preoccupation with writing.

once again thanks for the update. will miss strangers. will be looking forward for teh epilogue. have a good weekend.

Will try to post the epilogue today if possible. I'll have to tie up a lot of lose ends and also cover an important aspect of Sahana's life - the issue of her knowledge of her real father.

Originally posted by: Shabz.

im so glad milsi heard prachi confess her feelings...its a shame she thinks he is in love with ayesha. im off to read the next part...will comment on that in a bit :D

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

akka that was a mag ending..

haha poor michi their date gaterashed by sahana...

but still thy enjoyed themselves,

as i hve readin the story!

hope u continue soon..and write lots more..

hope ur feeling better

Originally posted by: Shabz.

nice to know all prachi's misconceptions about ayesha are cleared, hope ayesha and varun sort things out. i actually feeel sorry for neev, but im glad he has accepted that milsi and prachi are sahana's parents....im sure he will be a doting 'Uncle'.

so michi finally shared their first kiss aww, i liked how milsi covered sahana's eyes to kiss prachi. i love the detail used to describe sahanas antics in the restaurant....she is one cute baby:D michi are finally one and i wish them all the very best.

will u be writing an epilogue?

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

just loved the part opti but me sad😭 wish this ff did not have to end so fast gr8 part cont soon

Originally posted by: aritha

yes! please do post all parts in one page. makes my life much easier. hehe that wud be great. thank u. mm i understand why u cant write any more FFs. its ok. well all the best with ur work.

Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks jyothi. I started this as a short FF. Although it is short by the standards of my DC, still it is pretty long. Couldn't convey what I wanted to within the limited parts so I extended it.