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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: may268
Omg that was a wonderful update
can't believe papa helped you know!

Anyways I can imagine the baby,it looks so cute

Sahana again!!

Ok now I think Prachi won't leave!!

so are you ending it soon.

Thanks Mayuri. hope it was not too graphic for you to wish never to have a baby. Your Papa will always step up in need. Yeah, Sahana is very very cute and everyone's darling right now. Well I guess there may be three more parts before the conclusion of this story.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: ShubS
I hope Neev comes into the picture only after Michi have confessed.

Well, as of now just keep your fingers crossed. I'm not telling you any more. Be prepared for some emotional roller coaster before things settle down.

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madhavi_v

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Posted: 16 years ago

#423

Part 8:
Can fully understand Milinds state of mind..poor guy he is madly in love with her and cant tell her b'coz she might think its his symapthy for him..Hope he gets the right time to let out her feelings too..and even Prachi..

wow..i simply loved rehana's gallis...it was hillarious..though could understand her pain..i remember one of my colleagues had a baby few mons back..she had no complications during her Pregnancy at all...she got admitted in the hospital and everything was fine she was progressing well but all off a sudden she wasnt able to breath .she couldnt hear and the doctor was like we need to do a c-section...poor gal when she came bck she was like i experienced the pain of normal delivery and the pain of c-section..she was like it was terrible..

Hopefully this would be the last set off gallis that Ali has to hear from his wife..since he has got for what he wished for a baby girl..

Milind is already worried..thinking that Prachi will have to go thru the same pain..

So Milind expressed atleast his feelings (in words) towards the baby by saying it as "OUR" baby..and gues she did not even realise he said that..and he also felt the baby kicking..

wow Lakshman Rekha is gone..hopefully all the other barriers b/w them would also be removed...

Part 9:
So Milind wasnt able to take his eyes off his beautiful wife in godh Bharai...

OMG Milind just delivered the baby..Never expected this..but im glad you had written it..b'coz this just brought out the the strong bond that he shares with the baby..

Poor prachi could understand her dilemma...the way you had written i could easily understand the feelings of Milind and Prachi..It must have been a hell for him when the Dr had told him tht he had to deliver the baby... I should give a round of applause to your Milind..he did a great job in bringing sahana to this world by keeping aside his own tensions & worries..and focussing on what he had to do..

So Milind has chosen the name Sahana for his daughter..nice name..i guess even in the tamil serial the baby name was Sahana right...and also the father daughter bonding was brought out really well..

And finally you do deserve applause for writing it so beautifully..and bringing out the emotions so perfectly..

Looking forward for the next update..though i dont know why i feel there might b some trouble coming in michi's way..

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Asmi2013

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Posted: 16 years ago

#424

Wow ! Doctor Milind!

Loved it.

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Heeba

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Posted: 16 years ago

#425

Opti...i read part 8 last night....but was too sleepy to post a comment...and now that i came back to write...i see that u have posted a new update...ur back with ur daily updates...cant wait for the twists...is neev by any chance going to make an entry

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367852

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Posted: 16 years ago

#426

I think you have still not understood the story. Milind did not start off by sacrificing. Initially he started this off as a two-way deal where he wanted to perpetuate a lie he told his father and escape from marriage. When he realised he could not, he thought he can break the marriage at will. Prachi did not trick him into marrying her. It was he who suggested they marry.
I understood that bit.

As to Prachi's life, none of us have thankfully gone through what she has so I guess we cannot really appreciate her trauma.
i understand her situation though i dont feel 4 her.
It is easy to pass a judgement on her now but thankfully Milind is not so judgemental because he had already fallen in love with her.
I do appreciate milind understood her n helped her.Since I have one fixed image of milind which i cant relate to this one.Practically speaking Milind is a successful businessman with high social status,hot,handsome,sexy etc more than a girl dreams. He wants to enjoy his bachelor status.What I cant understand how can such a perfect guy who has girls around him fall 4 a girl who's poor,has no family n get physically abused then give birth to illegitimate baby.prachi practically is inferior to milind n his society.
if milind was average working class or chawl guy and fell for prachi dat wud hv made sense to me.
but here milind is sooo perfect n good dats why milind prachi combination is very odd.
As to her character, he has seen enough of it to realise that she is a good, considerate and caring human being who tries her best not to come in the way of his happiness.
i think prachi did come btwn his happiness n freedom.prachi's presence forced milind to accept her n take responsibility of her sin. rather than good i find prachi very unsmart n inferior who cant stand upto herself.
what i find unfair is prachi getting a good husband who's clean n virgin. on the other hand prachi is a used girl. If any average looking guy n middle class guy fell 4 him dat wud hv been reasonable. But milind is more like a top model who's rich n handsome.Even if u show them as happy family but in reality milind wud hv gone through humility bcs of prachi. girls like prachi can get good husband but not someone like millind.
Part 3 examines the tussle that she was going through. So I will not repeat it here. Milind who did not want a woman in his life has become much happier with the arrival of Prachi and the baby in his life and that is what matters to him.
yes he sure did.its a new experience.with arrival of prachi he got different happiness but i think he also gave up meeting nicer girls than prachi.like i said milind is very warm hearted.he will never hurt anyone's feelings; so by accepting prachi he gave up getting better girl than prachi.
though in ur story milind's social circle evolved around ali n rehana but in a wider prospective milind do hv better friends n high class business associates;where prachi doesnt fit there.
i'm sorry if it hurts ur feeling but i dont mean to hurt you.i find ali n her wife cheap.the words n slang she was using while delivering that didnt match up to respectable class n educated ppl. Prachi is well fitted in their environment but milind being with prachi,ali,rehana doesnt fit with their standard. i've mentioned b4 uve set milind so high thats why i cant understand the equation among milind,ali,rehana.
even in da serial milind wasnt shown much with his chawl friends.
i hope u dont get upset.i dont mean to insult u.i really like milind's part of the story but cant understand the social relationship btwn them.
i hope u dont misunderstand me.I'm more related to milind's social background n i very well know attitudes like ali is quite cheap.Maybe i'm wrong in indian perspective since i'm not aware of them.
b4 u get offended let u know I'm Lebanese. That's why my thinking is different.thats why i love milind so much bcs i can relate to him n i love to analyse tid bits of his character.

What will happen in future? whether Neev will come and is he good or bad, you'll come to know later.
i dont care abt neev.prachi had sex with neev...its enough 4 me to defy them.
but i wud like to see prachi consider going back to him n leave milind bcs she's impure.atleast she shud hv dat guilt in her she commited sin hving sex with neev.she shud keep low profile rather than thinking milind as her husband.milind deserves better.

As I said this story is not straightforward. It is sensitive and complex. So unless one is mature enough to understand the intricacies involved one cannot appreciate it. I wouldn't blame you for you are barely 17-18 years old. At that age even I saw this world as black or white but there are several shades of grey and nothing in life is as simple. People are shaped by the circumstances they are in. I guess you will understand these things as you see more of life. I have nothing more to say.
i know life is not easy n u dont get everything but social status and class is also important in ones life.
opti,dont misunderstand me.I'm not aware of indian class n society.I like milind so much that i want everything to be perfect 4 him.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: Heebs
Opti...i read part 8 last night....but was too sleepy to post a comment...and now that i came back to write...i see that u have posted a new update...ur back with ur daily updates...cant wait for the twists...is neev by any chance going to make an entry

You'll have to wait and see Heebs. One twist will come up in the next update.

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#428

"what i find unfair is prachi getting a good husband who's clean n virgin. on the other hand prachi is a used girl. If any average looking guy n middle class guy fell 4 him dat wud hv been reasonable. But milind is more like a top model who's rich n handsome.Even if u show them as happy family but in reality milind wud hv gone through humility bcs of prachi. girls like prachi can get good husband but not someone like millind."

Angelcake, sorry to have interfered between yours and Opti's conversatoin. But since I too have been following this FF, just wanted to say, emotions and relationships are beyond sex, looks, money and class.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#429

Angel, I will not respond to your comment line by line because I dont see any point in doing so.

I dont feel offended. I only feel like laughing because here you are presuming so much about a character which I dreamed up in my mind. The character for Milind you are picturising is just run of the mill guy, a guy who will go for girls in his social circles. But my guy is not that character. If he was he would be happily merry making by now with some rich girl.

What you are looking is skin deep. I am looking at something beyond. My Milind is not one who gets bogged down by class, money, power, so-called 'virginity' and the likes.

For someone who has serious reservations about my characters, I am amazed that you are still reading this FF. If I were in your place and I absolutely detested the characterisation of the author, however much I like Milind I would still not read it because my image of Milind is conflicting with that of the author's. But I guess you are different. Anywway this is the last time I will try explaining my characters to you because I see that there is no point in doing so. You can think what you want.

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367852

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Posted: 16 years ago

#430

no its ok i understand.
i never mean to offend or hurt anyone but 4 some reason here indians find me wrong.
i read all the ff whether i like it or not but read only interesting part n leave da rest.
ur destiny's child was very good but also same time boring with too much ali,rehana stuff which i left unread.
though i detest prachi here still i'm reading it cs i still find interesting n funny n also sad 4 milind.
i'm trying to understand indians emotions by reading ff though its difficult 4 me to understand.It looks like emotionas n class is 2 diff thing in india unlike lebanon.

Originally posted by: Opti
Angel, I will not respond to your comment line by line because I dont see any point in doing so.

I dont feel offended. I only feel like laughing because here you are presuming so much about a character which I dreamed up in my mind. The character for Milind you are picturising is just run of the mill guy, a guy who will go for girls in his social circles. But my guy is not that character. If he was he would be happily merry making by now with some rich girl.

What you are looking is skin deep. I am looking at something beyond. My Milind is not one who gets bogged down by class, money, power, so-called 'virginity' and the likes.

For someone who has serious reservations about my characters, I am amazed that you are still reading this FF. If I were in your place and I absolutely detested the characterisation of the author, however much I like Milind I would still not read it because my image of Milind is conflicting with that of the author's. But I guess you are different. Anywway this is the last time I will try explaining my characters to you because I see that there is no point in doing so. You can think what you want.

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