FF:Destiny's Children (Pgs 1 to 5) Also ck Pg 84

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: optimist
I'll continue the story on this thread from now on Munee. That is why I have reserved some posts for it. Hopefully I will not require more than this to complete my fic. Actually I am pretty fatigued by now.

Hahaha I know the feeling.... reason I simply couldn't write KK but am over with my break and hope I finish it off soon. 😊

Quote

Kashish

@..kashish..

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#42

hey akka!...love what u hve dne...must hve taken u ages!...

but thanks for doing it!...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Kash, I was getting tired of the complaints, as I really did not know how to address them. So decided that this was the best option. Yes, it took me some time but I guess I owe that much to the people who want to read the fic but are unable to do so because of the browser problem. Hope that they do not have a problem now.

Quote

jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#44

wow opti gr8 idea will wait 4 u to cont ands thanks 4 taking so much of trouble

Quote

Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Posted the next part. It is on Page 4.

Quote

gawker

@gawker

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#46

neesha's great to read - the creatives missed a great opportunity of working on this couple. they'd have rocked. i don't think prachi would take neesha too badly - she has so much to look forward to herself now, the past would have little hold on her - i'd think.

Quote

Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: gawker
neesha's great to read - the creatives missed a great opportunity of working on this couple. they'd have rocked. i don't think prachi would take neesha too badly - she has so much to look forward to herself now, the past would have little hold on her - i'd think.

Thanks Manu. The creatives could have developed Neesha track instead of focusing on Michi union and seperation. Jai also would have stayed back.

Coming to my fic, we'll have to see how Prachi takes this one. It is not so much the disappointment of not marrying Neev because she soon realised that she did not really love him, but she still holds him responsible for losing her father. Given Prachi's nature though I too do not think she can hold a grudge for too long.

Quote

Isa_de

@Isa_de

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Found your new post..............So milsi knows abot ayesha moving in with neev. when will Prachi come to know for all this???

Quote

Delena

@Delena-cious

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#49

hey opti...its great that u had made ur fic this way...itl be easier for the other readers now!!
ok comin to the update...neesha's part was extremly cute. good thing that Milind got to knw abt neev from ayesha...i hope prachi and neev meets soon and clear the grudges soon but i knw...it wont be easy for her as it was because of him she lost her father
fab one...continue soon🤗

Quote

GoGreen

@GoGreen

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#50

Opti nice update.

Milind and Ayeesha interaction was very nice just as friends and how a friend is concerned for anather best friend.

even ayeesha moved into MICHI house they never have made ayeesha uncomfortable.

May be if prachi have know about ayeesha being thrown out of chwal she might have asked PL to help ayeehsa in this matter.

PL loved ayeesha as her own daughter so ayeesha might have felt very comfortable with sukruti and PL.

Neev ,,,,,feeling jealousy hearing ayeeha meeting her old friend for lunch.

Milind did got the intution that ayeesha is in love with neev.

the main thing what will be prachi reaction after she comes ot know that milind knows ayeesha moved with neev as a paying guest. i am sure she will be so mad.

In this condition i dont want prachi to meet neev and dig the old wounds....let her give birth to the triplets...let her enjoy her pregnency with out any neev thaughts as she will remember how her father died.

Quote

1 ... 3 4 5 6 7 ... 73

FF:Destiny's Children (Pgs 1 to 5) Also ck Pg 84 - Page 5

Related Topics

Explore Topics