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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank u so much Opti for the info on festival its really nice to know about different culture and tradition and the way u explain festival is really admirable..........Thank u so much dea👍🏼👍🏼............And yes ur Michi are really doin too good.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bidnai

Thank u so much Opti for the info on festival its really nice to know about different culture and tradition and the way u explain festival is really admirable..........Thanks Thank u so much dea👍🏼👍🏼............And yes ur Michi are really doin too good.Yeah, my Michi are relatively uncomplicated (as I like to keep my life uncomplicated!)

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lizzy_de

Opti.......Where is the update???

Just posted it Lizzy. The honeymoon has not yet started.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti something is wrong with the first everytime I open it, the explorer gives a warning for error and it closes off. It's just with your first page.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Munee I have no problem opening the page but I am posting the update here as well. Yesterday Nargis was complaining of the same problem.
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That night Prachi packed her clothes in her bag expecting to leave for Mumbai the next day. She asked Milind who had just come out of the shower what time was their flight and whether they can drop in on Amrita Aunty before they returned to Mumbai. Milind then revealed the surprise honeymoon he had planned for her. They will visit Amrita Aunty the following morning and go around Bangalore in the afternoon. The following day they will leave for Mysore and Madikkeri. They will return to Bangalore after three days and take the night flight back to Mumbai. He told her that he had packed her clothes for the four days in his bag since he wanted to surprise her. Hearing this Prachi excitedly hugged and kissed him.

The next day Milind and Prachi accompanied Ayesha to NIMHANS where her mother was being treated. Amrita, who was very fond of Milind, recognised him immediately and smiled broadly at him. She, however, looked at Prachi in confusion although she has seen her at the chawl on a couple of occasions before. Ayesha had to gently remind her of who she is.

"Mama, this is Prachi. Remember my friend from college? She has come to our house in Mumbai?"

Amrita gave her a faint smile but it was clear she still could not place her.

Ayesha explained to her that Milind and Prachi are married and have come to Bangalore on an official/personal visit.

Milind and Prachi took her blessings. Milind then sat next to her and asked her how she was. Amrita told him that they were taking very good care of her at the hospital. She liked the climate of the city too. Her only grievance was that she had not got an opportunity to move around much. She lamented that Ayesha had promised to take her to Lal Bagh but did not have the time to do so as she was busy at work. Milind told her that he will gladly take her there if she wants. Amrita looked at Ayesha expectantly. Ayesha tried to tell her that they should not be troubling Milind who is on a honeymoon with his wife but Prachi intervened and said that they would love to show her around. Ayesha obtained the permission from the hospital to let Milind and Prachi take Amrita out for the day and rushed to her factory as she was expecting the new boss to visit their unit in the afternoon.

Milind and Prachi then took Amrita along with them to the Lal Bagh gardens. The botanical garden was a huge expanse of greenery where flora was at its best. Amrita was excited to see all the colourful flowers. She tried to pluck a few but Prachi gently restrained her, saying they were not allowed to do so. Milind promised to get her fresh flowers from the florist on their way back to the hospital. Amrita seemed to be satisfied with that and they continued their tour of the gardens. Suddenly Amrita stiffened seeing somebody. She then let go of Prachi's hand and ran after a gentleman, calling out to him, "Monty, Monty....". The man was of medium height and build and had a thick mop of salt and pepper hair. He wore a grey suit. As he had his back to them, Milind and Prachi could not see his face. The gentleman apparently did not hear her for he kept walking and went out of the gate where he was lost in the crowd. Milind ran behind Amrita and reached her before she too got lost. Tears were streaming down her eyes as she kept repeating she needs to find her Monty and tell him that she has been waiting for him all these years and ask him when he will come back to take her. Milind wiped her tears and placed his arms around her shoulder, loosely hugging her. He assured her that everything will be alright. They will try to find Monty but she needs to get back to the hospital as she has to be fit and fine when she meets him. Amrita reluctantly let herself be taken back to the hospital. On the way, Milind dropped by at the florist and bought her a dozen white lilies, her favourite flower.

During dinner that night, Milind informed Ayesha about her mother's behaviour at the gardens. At the mention of the name Monty, Ayesha knew her mother had seen or thought she had seen her father. She wonder whether her father was in the same city but did not know how she will find him if he was. Not wanting to burden them with her family problems, Ayesha remained quiet. She told them that she felt exhausted and needed to hit the bed as early as possible. As Milind and Prachi were to leave for Mysore early the following morning, she wished them all the best for an exciting honeymoon in advance, saying that she may not be awake when they leave.

Lying on the bed, Ayesha closed her eyes wearily. Why did all the unexpected things have to happen on the same day? First shock that she got that day was when she realised who her new boss is. The name of the company should have rung a bell in her mind but somehow she did not make the association. From his expression it was clear he did not recollect who she was. He seemed to have changed a lot. His face was drawn, his lustreless eyes sunken and rimmed with dark circles which indicated he had not slept well for days, maybe even weeks. His shoulders were stooped. He sported a stubble which did not really suit him and he did not seem to care much about his appearance going by the creased suit he wore. He was a far cry from the smartly dressed person she had briefly seen all those months back. What was responsible for this transformation she wondered. They did not interact much as he had to leave for another meeting that day. She briefed him about the functioning of the unit and appraised him of the problems they were facing on the labour front. The trade union was strong and was creating problems about the long shifts the workers were subjected to in the recent months. He wanted her to give him a detailed report about the number of days when the late shifts were operational and reasons for the same. He also asked her to arrange a meeting with the trade union leader the following day. She had to sit late to complete the report and was wondering how the man is going to face the hard-nosed trade union leader the next day. As though the problems at work were not enough, she was made aware of her mother's strange behaviour at the gardens that afternoon. If it was indeed her father she had seen, her mother is not going to rest in peace till she is taken to him. Whatever progress was achieved in the last ten months would go down the drain. She just hoped that her mother would forget that day's encounter but she was not sure. Still troubled by all these thoughts, she slipped into a restless sleep.

(Coming up next: Michi's Honeymoon - I'll post either tonight or tomorrow)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Could Ayesha's boss by any chance be Neeve - only thinking this because Ayesha said he was sporting a stubble that didn't suit him - that reminds me of Neeve from Kayamath. So Ayesha's dad might come into the picture as well? Amrita seems to be a pleasant character, hope she does get better and not more ill as Ayesha fears. I like the way you're bringing in the happenings of the lives of your other characters - like Amrita, Ayesha and her interesting boss. Thanks for the update.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Insomniac

Could Ayesha's boss by any chance be Neeve - only thinking this because Ayesha said he was sporting a stubble that didn't suit him - that reminds me of Neeve from Kayamath. So Ayesha's dad might come into the picture as well? Amrita seems to be a pleasant character, hope she does get better and not more ill as Ayesha fears. I like the way you're bringing in the happenings of the lives of your other characters - like Amrita, Ayesha and her interesting boss. Thanks for the update.

Thanks Nikki. You'll have to wait for the story to progress to know more about Ayesha and her life. From now on I'll pepper Michi's life with that of Ayesha's and Suki's. Amrita is a sweet lady who has had a hard life and could not cope with the pressures of it.
Edited by optimist - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hmm thanks Opti I guess a lot of data on one page is causing the trouble anyways nice update so we have an Ayesha mystery too. Could it be Ayesha likes the man but he has no clue of it keeping in view he hardly recognized her. Was that really Monty in the gardens?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Hmm thanks Opti I guess a lot of data on one page is causing the trouble anyways nice update so we have an Ayesha mystery too. Could it be Ayesha likes the man but he has no clue of it keeping in view he hardly recognized her. Was that really Monty in the gardens?

Yes, there is an Ayesha mystery too. We'll have to wait and see how her story develops. You are asking as though you know Monty well! Well, it could be Ayesha's father or may be not. for now it has got more than one head worrying.
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Posted: 16 years ago
opti is ayeshas dad her new boss gr8 part cant wait 4 the honeymoon cont soon

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