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Posted: 17 years ago
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Has not left me *sigh*...(The writing one incase you're wondering) and something I read in Opti's fic inspired me; so despite my stupid schedule, I had to penn it down!😆 Now, I've only attempted this once before...so chances are, it's sucky😆 but I plan to improve, so be warned, there'll probably be lots more coming your way.

My Thoughts on Milind and Prachi in a few short lines...

Safar

Ajnabee; Safar Saath Karte Gaye Hum,

Chalte Chalte, Humsafar Ban Gaye Hum,

Judaai Mein, Raste Koh Gaye The Magar,

Ab Seher Pe Pounch Gaye Hum.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Reemz i thaught u too will pen an FF inspired by Opti FF.This time on MICHI.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Liked that one rims. are you planning on penning sumthing for neesha😳 (even though we wont get to see them)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rims, what does seher mean?
Btw, beautiful lines.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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bonito me amor!!!

yeh toh buhot butiful hai yaar. What makes you think its sucky. I especially like the last line.
Sumu even i thought she'd be writing an FF and was all excited..
Rima ur such a tease.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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rims ....wah wah wah....this is beautifully written....
love shayaris....cant wait for the next1...
thanx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Reemz i thaught u too will pen an FF inspired by Opti FF.This time on MICHI.


🤣Sumu, if I'm honest...it did give me a really really good idea for atleast a short FF but I've hung up my FF writing gloves😆wont have the time to commit to it so then this came to mind...😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: fahimataq

Liked that one rims. are you planning on penning sumthing for neesha😳 (even though we wont get to see them)



*Rima rubs eyes*😲Fima???🤗...thank you and Neesha one...Chalo, I'll PM😉😆I owe you a present anyway😵. Might take a tinsy winsy while though😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwww.... 😳😳 i love love love those lines.....uff they r so nice...I love shayari.....
U know it is beautiful...just admit it damn it..... 😡😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ghoom phir ke Michi ikhatte ho hi gaye!!😆 Good job Rima. Now you have to write a poem for Neev who is truly lost somewhere. (in London😉).
Edited by michifanreal - 17 years ago

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