Kaisey Kahun Chp 1 - 22 - Page 9

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Aye haye sorry sorry Goldy meri jaan.... mixed you with Luv Shabbo that's Janki... sorry sorry sorry. 😊

Munee, your Inder-Prachi relationship is the exact opposite of what the show had. Poor Prachi, the neglected child despite all the wealth around her. So is it going to be wealth and loneliness (Prachi) versus poverty and love in your story (Milind)?

Hey Munee...wonderful part..well-written and detailed. 😳 My heart went out to Prachi having been deprived of her father's love Uh oh..the ending :((

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

Hmmmmm mujhe lagta hai tumne bhi apni aankhein kiraye par di hain??? 🤣🤣 Oh Munee just finished reading part 1 and this line just cracked me up..... Great going.....this ff is just GREAT.... love the whole setting... Rich and lonely Prachi and poor n not so alone Milind.... He loves his dad so much......😳

Ok gonna go n read the part 2....😃

Aankhain nahin dimagh kiraye per diya hai... 😆 I'm so glad you liked it so much. Yeah rich and lonely Prachi but not so lonely Milind though both are alone in their own respects. 😊 Milsi loves his dad very much but you'll get to know more about him in the next update.

Originally posted by: cbkola

very nice Thank you.

Hmm yeah thanks for reading it. 😊

Munee please do cpmment on mine,opti and yas comments.

Originally posted by: optimist

Munee, your Inder-Prachi relationship is the exact opposite of what the show had. Poor Prachi, the neglected child despite all the wealth around her. So is it going to be wealth and loneliness (Prachi) versus poverty and love in your story (Milind)?

Yes Opti it's very very different from the serial story line. Inder- Prachi relationship is the total opposite of the one in the serial. yeah Prachi is quite neglected despite all the affluence. Well lets see if it's wealth and loneliness versus poverty and love though the initial idea was that hope I can keep you people glued till the very end. 😊

Munee why must you even make a mention "can i keep you ppl glued" Its a given.

Wah meri doll ko tumne itna lonely bana diya. 😭 Me crying buckets. I feel like giving her a huge jadoo ki jhappi. Ab iss Thapppad ka kya reaction hoga Inder the great se. Maybe he'll send her away again and this time to India where she can meet a certain someone who'll care that she is human.

😭this was just too touchy dea.........cant believe in every ff inder shah seems to love his fav daughter Prachi but this one seems quite different and honestly though harsh love to see this father daughter duo just m too impatient when will michi meet and yes thank u thank u so much for such a wonderful and fast update mune dea........u simply awsome

OMG menee jaan .........Inder hates Prachi................God i feel like crying...............Hope Michi meet soon.