Making a Deal with the Devil(NOTE p.27) Mar.17 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

WOW Good stsrt and Very interesting Story line...

Plueez continue soon or please update the first part today itself.
Lovely Satart and indeed u wrote very very well.
Sumu.

Thank you so much! :) will cont later on tonight

Originally posted by: AH01

wow really good strat. this ff sounds really interesting. cant wait to see what happens next.

keep up he good work and update soon
Aaliyah

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Hey Ada..welcome to the forum...and great start!! Oooh contract marriage :)

Continue soon

Thank you so much for the welcome and for liking the part :) Yes, contract marriage= Michi magic. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: jinc118

We love contract marriages.😆 Isn't that what got all of us here to love this show. Welcome to the forum Ada. And don't be insecure about your writing...Its more than good.

JC

LOL, yep contract marriage is the way to go 😉 Thankk you so much for the welcome!

Originally posted by: indiangirl23

hey Ada pretty good start please continue,😃

-Deepika

Hey Deepika :) Thank you, will continue tonight :)

Originally posted by: blind horizon

I'm loving it already plz continue soon.

Thank you! :)

Originally posted by: Shachi-Michi

nice start darling😳

keep up the gud work👏

will be reading as soon as u update😉😆

plz continue soon😊

Thank you!! Now I really have to make sure I write and update regularly :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks :D hopefully I can keep your interest as the story progresses

Originally posted by: shivgauri

great start! and loved the title! pls continue soon😃

thank you ! 😳

Originally posted by: (**sia**)

hey ada🤗..welcome to the forum...kya ada hai...i meant ur writin style😉...i loooveee contract marriage...it seems t stick better n longer than luv n arrange marriages😆...cool start...cant wait for the next🤗

Thank you so much for the warm welcome! 😳 lol you're right abt contract marriages :) we'll see if this contract turns into love...who am I kidding..with michi, of course it will. 🥱
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Chapter 2 (I)
Pulling herself out of the trip down memory lane, Prachi tried to concentrate on her reports before her. Failing miserably, she got up with an exasperated sigh. She wasn't cut out to be a CEO. There were too many responsibilities, too much at stake. She had to hand the reigns over to someone more competent, but who? Her older siblings were doing their own thing, making their mark on the world. Her sister Ayesha was an up-and-coming civil lawyer, and her brother Alaap had made a name for himself as a political journalist. She was the only one in the family with a business degree, but her interests lay elsewhere. At 25, she was much too young to head a major corporation.
As she glanced out her window, her eyes fell on Milind Mishra's cabin. Though she couldn't see him, she had come to know him well enough to picture what he would be doing. Probably checking and re-checking the figures like an obsessive compulsive freak. Or giving some new employee a dressing down for not doing work that was up to his ridiculous standards. Prachi sighed. She really ought not to think ill of him, he was brilliant if you chose to ignore his uncouth behavior. He had prevented Prachi from making many a business blunders, and though his approach made Prachi want to pull her hair out, she had to admire his insight.
Shah Hotels needed someone like him to lead. Not someone like her. She was too soft, too unsure of herself. She second-guessed herself often, and it landed her in trouble. It wasn't entirely her fault. Her parents always took her life decisions for her. Her siblings' influence over her opinions never gave her opportunities to form her own likes and dislikes. And until now she'd been blissfully unaware of her dependency on others.
She really ought to ask for his help, but then he'd just give her a hard time. Resigned, she sat back in her desk. What if'? She thought. What if she could find a way to hand over the reigns to someone else, someone trustworthy, who wouldn't take advantage of their newly acquired position? Surely she could find hundreds who would be willing to lead the company, many within the corporation itself. But did she trust any of them? How would she be sure that once in power this person wouldn't turn their back on her?
Then she thought about Milind. Could he? Would he? No. The man was way too proud, way too egotistic. He would never agree to work under someone else's name. What if she made him an offer he couldn't refuse? She eventually made up her mind and picking up her office phone, dialed his extension. After two rings he picked up. 'Yes' he barked. Damn. Thought Prachi. He was in a bad mood, and what she was about to ask of him, she was sure his temper would fly through the roof'at least initially. She suddenly froze up, unsure of what to say.
'If you don't have anything to say, why are you wasting my time and yours?' he practically deafened her.
'I..ah..do you have a minute Mil'Mr. Mishra?' Prachi finally managed.
'Prachi?' he sounded positively irritated. 'Why, yes, your highness'your company does pay me to chit-chat and attend to blank calls. Tell me, what can this lesser mortal do for you.'
Take that sarcasm and shove it..Prachi was tempted to say. But she knew she wasn't exactly in the position to make smart-assed comments. Without thinking she blurted out, 'Marry me'
For the first time, in a long time, Milind Mishra was rendered speechless.
Edited by yeh_ada_143 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ada..am speechless too..Prachi proposing to Milind..😆😲 I thought it would be the other way round..!!
Thanks..grear chapt. :Can't wait for Milind's response and reaction..)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲

Closing mouth now.

Brilliant and funny. Keep it coming please. Its wonderful. I am enjoying this so much. hahaha...This Michi sure will be very interesting. I am waiting for the next one already.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
I just can't believe it it's so damn brilliant the magic words "Marry me!!!!" just like that the woman's got courage I tell you. I'm loving this please update soon as in very very soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
u surprise me dear😲

prachi proposing to milis ............ strange😕

very different FF😆

loved it😊👏

plz continue soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
LMAO!!! that was brilliant!! specially the end!🤣 and loved Milsi's comment to her when she asked him if he had time!🤣🤣🤣
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
..Prachi proposing to Milind.............that is v.unique...........But i think you should have wrote "Marry me" in capital letters.....it would have sounded better.

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