Making a Deal with the Devil(NOTE p.27) Mar.17 - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi!...um okay bye! Enjoy 😆

Chapter 5 (II)
She sat there, gazing at him for a while. Suddenly, Milind opened his eyes and looked right at her. Feeling a bit like a deer caught in headlights, she just stared back, unsure of what to do.
"What?" he asked annoyed.
"What?" she repeated lamely.
"What what?" his anger rose.
"N..nothing" she stammered.
Saying so, she scurried off the bed, and into the bathroom for a quick fresh-up. Her first order of business: getting back into her own clothes. She sauntered out of the bedroom to go find Sukriti. Milind simply rolled his eyes and went to get ready himself; he had a long day at work ahead.
"Sukriti" Prachi tried to be as quiet as possible. The last thing she needed was her father-in-law or the house servants to see her in Milind's kurta. After a few minutes of knocking, a sleepy Sukriti opened the door. One look at Prachi, and she was wide awake.
She cocked one eyebrow and stated cheekily, "Damn Bhabhi, that's a good look on you" and winked. Prachi turned crimson.
"Sukriti" she said in embarrassed urgency. "It's entirely your fault. You forgot to send my suitcases up to the room, and I had to wear your brother's clothes for the night"
"For the night? Bhabhi, I'm not 8 years old, mujhe pata hai suhaag raat mein kapdon ki zaroorat nahi hoti" Sukriti chuckled, which earned her a glare from Prachi.
"Accha, Bhabhi, Bhaiyya likes his tea brought up to the room for him, he gets very agitated if he doesn't have it right after he showers. Also, he likes to read the paper while he's having his tea. So why don't you do the honors today, and I'll send your suitcases up myself"
Tea right after shower. Newspaper with tea. Hmmn, could anyone say anal? But Prachi merely nodded. Tea right after shower it'll be. As Prachi turned to leave, Sukriti added, "Oh and Bhabhi do you have earplugs?"
When Prachi looked at her confused, Sukriti merely smiled. "Nothing, you go on."
Puzzled, she walked into the kitchen. It took her a while to find all the ingredients necessary, but she managed. Finally, she took the tray and walked to the bedroom. Opening the door, she walked in, nearly dropped the tray when she heard it.
It. The most horrendous singing she'd ever heard in her life. Completely off rhythem, out of sync with the tune, and just completely miserable. For a minute, Prachi thought there was an intruder in their room, but then she realized the criminal singing was coming directly from the bathroom, and that her hubby dearest was the perpetrator. No wonder Sukriti had asked her if she had earplugs.
Groaning inwardly, she put the tray down. She was to be subject to this crime against music every morning. Wasn't there a clause against cruel and unusual punishment in the Indian constitution?
Prachi busied herself with sorting out her clothes, as Milind continued on, in all his glory, "Main zindagi ka saath nibhata chala gaya…har fikr ko dhuye main udata chala gaya…" She heard the water turn off. Milind walked out seconds later, wiping the remnants of water droplets off his chest, still humming his tune. He froze when he saw her, and she him.
He looked devastatingly handsome wrapped in a plush white towel, his damp chest taut with defined pectoral muscles. It rose and fell as he breathed, creating a strange rhythm which Prachi could feel resonate through the room.
He was embarrassed she'd heard him sing. Baba and Sukriti were the only ones who knew about his quirks, and he wasn't yet ready to include Prachi in that inner circle. It's not like he had a choice though.
"I'll go get ready" Prachi said quietly. At least she hadn't laughed at him. He suddenly noticed the tea, and his paper. Odd, he thought. Ramu Kaka doesn't arrive 'till 8, and it was only 7.30 still.
"Prachi, did Sukriti bring up my tea?" he questioned her.
"No" she said quietly. "I did"
It took Milind a minute to register that. "You…you don't have to do that" he insisted. What was she up to?
"I know, Sukriti asked me to" with that, she turned and walked into the bathroom.
Prachi Shah is one-of-a-kind Milind thought, as he sipped the tea, pleasantly noting that she had somehow manage to make it just how he liked it. Strong, and lightly sweet. Kind of like Prachi herself, he added as an after thought.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Been waiting for this since morning. Will read and get back with my comments.
Mind blowing, from start to finish from the analogy of "deear caught in head lights" to "stong and lightly sweet" like the tea. I simply loved every bit of it.
All I can say is keep it coming.
Edited by optimist - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh damn Ada now did you have to stop here my Lord you'r a tormentor this was so damn good I didn't want it to finish so soon. You know you'r the prepetrator here addicting me to this and then giving me morsels for updates.... I hate you.... but you know I love you too na. Loved all of it from Prachi staring him to him getting irritated. The real kick was his singing man I loved that bit don't tell me Prachi made his tea still donning his kurta. Suki that naughty girl teased her rightly this is gonna be one hell of a wonderful marraige with her making just the right blend of tea.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Been waiting for this since morning. Will read and get back with my comments.

I hope it was worth the wait 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ada have added my comments in the previous page. Would like to add tht I love your tone deaf Milsi too.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Been waiting for this since morning. Will read and get back with my comments.

Mind blowing, from start to finish from the analogy of "deear caught in head lights" to "stong and lightly sweet" like the tea. I simply loved every bit of it.
All I can say is keep it coming.

Thank you!!! :) I am glad you enjoyed it..Milind had to have some flaws...so i made him a bad singer..he cant be perfect now can he ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ada, just a piece of advice. Since your fic is spilling over across pages can you give the index of your parts (giving the page nos) in the first page? It would be a ready recokener for people who may have missed an update or two in between and would like to locate it.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Oh damn Ada now did you have to stop here my Lord you'r a tormentor this was so damn good I didn't want it to finish so soon. You know you'r the prepetrator here addicting me to this and then giving me morsels for updates.... I hate you.... but you know I love you too na. Loved all of it from Prachi staring him to him getting irritated. The real kick was his singing man I loved that bit don't tell me Prachi made his tea still donning his kurta. Suki that naughty girl teased her rightly this is gonna be one hell of a wonderful marraige with her making just the right blend of tea.

Thank you sooo much for such a sweet comment :) haha all i can say is sabr ka phal meetha hota hai 😉😆 Yeah Prachi had to make his tea in his Kurta only :P...:)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Ada, just a piece of advice. Since your fic is spilling over across pages can you give the index of your parts (giving the page nos) in the first page? It would be a ready recokener for people who may have missed an update or two in between and would like to locate it.

Good Idea! :) ill do that now
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Posted: 16 years ago

Sukriti's line about the Suhaag raat was damn hilarious and naughty. 😆 Me looking forward to see how Sukrit and her bhabhi's equation will shape up. Please bless Prachi with some ear plugs in the next update..poor thing..😆 😳Lovely update.

Again thanks for the regular updates.

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