Making a Deal with the Devil(NOTE p.27) Mar.17

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GratefulDead

@GratefulDead

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

"You're free to move around the room, you know" he said, half amused.🤣..

Ada...your oneliners are just tooooo good!😆😆😆

I just loved the way Milind was admiring Prachi's Dimples😆.."God damn, the woman had dimples. Deep ones carved right into her left cheek. How had he never seen them before? Wait, what was he thinking? Composing himself.....",😆😆😆..Just Brilliant!!

This Update was far from Boring!!! The most intriguing and entertaining Cnights!! i was like ROFL..when Milind raised his eyebrows. "Prachi, hasn't anyone told you it's rude to stare?" 😆😆

very pleasant update with a brilliant touch of wit!!

Im just loving your FF ..please update regularly and soon😳

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Ada lovely update.

These two r so attracted to eachother and snapping put from the trance thinking they doing something vert vert grave mistake.

But i am sure Prachi is the one who may take inciative and suprise all of us along with Milind.

May be Hurricane Prachi was so tempted by Milind seeing him sleep shirtless beside her....Milind why cant we consummated our marriage as we dint have any clause in our contract that we cant consummate out marriage....First Milind will be shocked as he was when he heard Prachi praposing marriage to him later as he consented to marrigae he may say yes after sulking for sometime.

On the whole this Prachi never fails to amuse me.

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Misfit_

@Misfit_

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: rosie111
hi very nice update thanks

Hi :) Thank you!

Originally posted by: blind horizon
I loved it Ada and who said it was boring it was just the sort of thing i was expecting I'm glad you made it appear so beautiful. Hmm revelation i loved the part God damn the woman's got dimples..... very very true that's just the sort of thing Milind would've noticed in her. She in his kurta God he must've been tempted and he semi naked atleast they've got an idea of how they'd look sans clothing if atleast even a bit. Hmm so well they're sharing the same bed that's very very smart of you it'll help hastening the process of getting to know each other I hope. I'm in love with your ff and your pace of updates so kindly let it keep rolling.

Thank you! :) Hehe Milind's gonna notice a lot more abt her now that she's in his room...:) thank you so much for liking it :)

Originally posted by: Shachi-Michi
ya u r ri8 darling most boring suhaag raat in the history of suhaag raats😉😆

plus u updated so small dear😕 ........... but i loved it👏

oh they look so cute even on a boring suhaag raat😳

plz continue soon sweetie😃

haha..i know it's small..sry :( But I'm glad u liked it :)

Originally posted by: (**sia**)
who said its borin?? its damn cute...they seem to be doin chori chori droolin over each othe😆r...luvd it wen milind said damn she'd got dimples...i was ROFL..beautiful suhaagraat...continue soon hun🤗

Aww thank you so much!...for now they have to do everything chori chori only 😆

Originally posted by: kim02

great part! please con't soon!

Thank you! I will :)

Originally posted by: angel's life
OMG!!u called that boring?may I know why?because it's anything but boringggg dear....... read it love it and it was fantastic superb in my book not boring.....thank u so much hun for another beautiful part👏👏 me really fallng in love with this nice and slow Michi😊
I can't believe Milind told her it's rude to stare.....oh my god I'm😳for her😆
thank u once again hun.

haha, I dunno...I didnt know if that was what u guys were expecting :) Thank you for reading and liking it :)

Originally posted by: shivgauri
ohmigod! that was one of the cutest SR i have read!! so cute!! and both can't help admiring each other!
the part where Prachi thinks'Oh I cud get used to it' and Milind notices her dimples were so funny!
pls continue soon😃😃😃

haha thank you! :)

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#124

gr8 part Ada, love ur one liners. the suhaag raat was written beautifully.

plz update soon:D

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Misfit_

@Misfit_

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: blackcurrant
I love the parts about Prachi not bing able to keep her thoughts away from the gutter and getting used to seeing Milind half naked. Makes her a normal red-blooded woman. 😆 I sometimes wonder about the one on the show. 😕 Anyway, it was anything but boring, quite unique actually with Prachi having nothing wear. Well, they certainly sorted out the sleeping arrangements easily enough. This FFis just tooooo good. 😃 Can't wait for the next part.

Thanks BC! Prachi in the show makes me wonder sometimes, too...😆 Thank you so much for liking it :)

Originally posted by: shali
thanks sweets....
lovely update....I don't mind it's boring cause the attraction is there....

Thank you! :)

Originally posted by: bidnai
Just read ur ff gr8 work.......so michi on contract marriage seems quite interesting this was the most cute suhaagraat ever known to me .........lovely ff plz do update soon.

Hey Thank you for reading! hehe keep reading

Originally posted by: AH01
great part
continue soon

Thanks !

Originally posted by: Grateful Dead

"You're free to move around the room, you know" he said, half amused.🤣..

Ada...your oneliners are just tooooo good!😆😆😆

I just loved the way Milind was admiring Prachi's Dimples😆.."God damn, the woman had dimples. Deep ones carved right into her left cheek. How had he never seen them before? Wait, what was he thinking? Composing himself.....",😆😆😆..Just Brilliant!!

This Update was far from Boring!!! The most intriguing and entertaining Cnights!! i was like ROFL..when Milind raised his eyebrows. "Prachi, hasn't anyone told you it's rude to stare?" 😆😆

very pleasant update with a brilliant touch of wit!!

Im just loving your FF ..please update regularly and soon😳

Milind can be quite the joker, cant he? :) Thank you so much for liking it :D

Originally posted by: MichiDespo
Ada lovely update.

These two r so attracted to eachother and snapping put from the trance thinking they doing something vert vert grave mistake.

But i am sure Prachi is the one who may take inciative and suprise all of us along with Milind.

May be Hurricane Prachi was so tempted by Milind seeing him sleep shirtless beside her....Milind why cant we consummated our marriage as we dint have any clause in our contract that we cant consummate out marriage....First Milind will be shocked as he was when he heard Prachi praposing marriage to him later as he consented to marrigae he may say yes after sulking for sometime.

On the whole this Prachi never fails to amuse me.

ty ty ty :) Prachi's the one who proposed marriage...it wouldn't be too far off the mark for her to propose you-know-what 😉

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Misfit_

@Misfit_

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: shabzc1
gr8 part Ada, love ur one liners. the suhaag raat was written beautifully.

plz update soon:D

Thank you! I will cont tonight :)

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Monu-SunNaa

@Monu-SunNaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Ada, Fab update and if I read one more time, you saying 'its boring'..😡😆 the update was anything but boring, I loved it. 😛 I found Milind to be adorable in the last chapt at his witty best.

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Mrs.Edward Cullen

@.Angel

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#128

are u updating 2day dear?

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Misfit_

@Misfit_

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Ada, Fab update and if I read one more time, you saying 'its boring'..😡😆 the update was anything but boring, I loved it. 😛 I found Milind to be adorable in the last chapt at his witty best.

aw thank you! :) I promise I wont call it boring from now on 😆