Kaisa yeh junoon (epilogue) pg 97 28/11(MP ff) - Page 75

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Posted: 16 years ago

Munee where r u.

How dare to end the FF. now as My friend Kat did just PM the story what u wrote to the friends who want to read .
But dont get upset i know it is easy for me to say but how hurt u r i can understand.
But darling MICHI have to struggle a lot....But we have a way ...so just write what u feel and just PM them to us.
Munee reply us...Me waiting for ur PM.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Muneee..listen...there are maybe certain members here who want to be moral police😆😆not even knowin the meaning of "morality"..!!! Munee for Godsake..Post the epilogue!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Munee where r u.

How dare to end the FF. now as My friend Kat did just PM the story what u wrote to the friends who want to read .
But dont get upset i know it is easy for me to say but how hurt u r i can understand.
But darling MICHI have to struggle a lot....But we have a way ...so just write what u feel and just PM them to us.
Munee reply us...Me waiting for ur PM.



No sumu..why should munee PM us...has she done or written anything offensive???Noway!!Munee post it here!!! Sumu...more we give in...these socalled "Moral" policewomen would dance on our heads not even knowing the defination of vulgar!!Munee please post it here!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Grateful Dead



No sumu..why should munee PM us...has she done or written anything offensive???Noway!!Munee post it here!!! Sumu...more we give in...these socalled "Moral" policewomen would dance on our heads not even knowing the defination of vulgar!!Munee please post it here!!



Dunno if I should post it or not..... since I don't want to be termed as vulgar.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon



Dunno if I should post it or not..... since I don't want to be termed as vulgar.....



Please Muneee..u and i know whts Vulgar..
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Posted: 16 years ago
Fine I'll post it..... rest is upto the readers and if this is vulgar then God help me....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Epilogue.
"Shubha will you stop your son he's destroyed my lawn" Prachi had implored to a happy Shubha who watched on as her son contently pulled out all the flowers from their stems. "What now you don't like my baby playing what's with your precious flowers they're not made of gold or something. Get your husband to have the lawn fixed I'm not stopping Suhaan from having a nice time." Shubha had told Prachi. Both were together for a dinner at Prachi's place while their husbands chatted on stock markets they had taken to the lawn. Shubha's two year old son had scampered off wreaking havoc on the bluebells and morning glories Prachi had so lovingly planted. Fuming inwardly Prachi had let the naughty child uproot her flower bed smiling sweetly at Shubha all the while who couldn't get enough of her little one. As they waved goodbye to the couple at their front door Prachi had heaved a sigh of relief now she'd have to get the gardener to get new bulbs for her. Later that night as Milind entered the bedroom he saw Prachi poring over a book "Tips for gardening" it had read... "Hun what are you reading?" Milind had asked getting in to bed beside her. "A book sweetheart it's on gardening... wanna read" she had offered. "No I still have to finish my spiderman comic" he had grinned. "Did you ever read Biology by chance" Milind had asked gently playing with Prachi's hair. "Wasn't very keen at it" she had confessed not getting him at all. "What do you think about reproduction?" Milind had questioned passiontely kissing her neck. "I think it's necessary for new flowers to grow" Prachi had answered still engrossed in the book. "I think I should go get a bulb then atleast it'll result in some sort of offspring" Milind had muttered angrily turning away from Prachi. "I don't think you'd be able to get that sexy a flower darling" Prachi had smiled. "As if you'r sexy enough" Milind had retorted not looking at Prachi. "Don't you think so?" Prachi had asked softly turning him to face her. "No I don't and now let me sleep" he had told Prachi shutting his eyes. "Sure of it..." Prachi had whispered taking off her night gown and placing his hand on her bare body.


"Yes I'm sure" Milind had replied letting Prachi guide his hand to her thighs softly kissing his lips. "Fine I won't disturb you then" she had smiled trying to move away when he had pulled her close to him. Rolling her under him he had kissed her passionately making her his own. Much later as she lay against him he had run his fingers across her lips "I thought you promised you'd make me a proud daddy someday.... any chance of that happening any soon?" Milind had whispered in her ear as she pressed her lips together stifling a laugh he looked so sexy then bare and very much hers. The reason she had ignored his advances earlier because she wanted him to get mad it made him more wild and demanding just the way she liked it. "And how do you propose we get on with it to make it soon" she had draped her hands around him as he cocked his eyebrows at her. "I thought you were reading the freaking book" he had commented huskily planting kisses along her jaw. "The book didn't say you felt so good" she had whispered raining soft kisses on his chest. "I'm sure it didn't even tell you how beautiful you are darling wife" he had smiled before placing his lips on hers. Prachi had looked up at him as he lay cuddling her "When did you fall in love with me Milind?" she had asked him. "I don't know I guess I was too overcome with desire to think of it then I'm still not sure though if it's love or....." he had grinned.


"Really ..." Prachi had sit up in astonishment. "Do you not love me now?" she had inquired thoroughly maddened clutching the bed cover to herself. "You wouldn't have had to seduce me then" Milind had cried out laughing. "I don't believe you at all" Prachi had stated pulling away from him. Going to the washroom she had slammed the door shut behind her how dare he make love to her and tell her he didn't love her. Opening the shower she stood under it trying to soothe her anger wiping hot tears when she heard a sound behind her. She felt him stand beside her joining her under the water. Turning to face him she stood still suddenly overcome with shyness she'd never been so exposed , she tried to rush away when he had held her firmly to him. The water rained drops on them soaking their bodies alike. "You still think I don't love you" he had inquired looking at her water dripping down his wet skin. Prachi had averted her eyes away from him when he gently tilted her moist face kissing her on the mouth his hands discovering her anew. Prachi had gasped reeling with newfound passion all her anger had been washed away by his love that was showered on her as freely as the water that cascaded down the faucet above. Turning off the shower he had wrapped her in a towel before picking her up in his arms "Any chances of making that baby you promised" he had whispered carrying her to the bed. "Promises are meant to be kept and I intend to fulfill mine" Prachi had murmured letting him cover her like a blanket with the night as sole witness of their union.
Edited by blind horizon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
i am so glad tht u posted... and u know ur fanfic is not vulgar, so i don't think u shud stop writing it!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri

i am so glad tht u posted... and u know ur fanfic is not vulgar, so i don't think u shud stop writing it!



I guess being I writer I felt degraded because I try to make my stories aesthetic not sick. Anyways at least this one's finished now I'll try wrapping the other two soon too suddenly I'm tired of writing.
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was beautiful....not even close to vulgar.....
wonderful epi..sweets....

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