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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: rosie111
lovely update now its canbe intersting because of milind jealousy but it was nice update wating for the next one thankyou

😃thanks alot dea...........😆😆milsi is way too jealous.........thank u so much dea.........yes dea shall update soon😉

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JnJ....resh

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: kountheya
i go on outstation work, starplus is not available there, they do not know about forums, i narrated your fanfic to my colleagues there, they burst out laughing and cursing themselves for living in such a place.

My colleague has narrated the same kayamath story and also your fanfic to her friends and sisters, they all enjoyed very much and all were happy. they were praising you for writing the story in a different angle. they thanked me also for entertaining.

ALL CREDIT GOES TO YOU. They all are well educated but does not have internet facility . The place is very interior. They all are calling and asking me, whether the fanfic is updated. i have cleared them till last part.

SO PLEASEEEEEE UPDATE FAST.

thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u this the best compliment i have ever recieved this is just to overwhelming thank u so much...........i m so sorry due to my exam i couldnt update but shall do it soon and honestly me very touched thank u once again to u and all ur colleagues.😃😃😃

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JnJ....resh

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Posted: 16 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: cbkola
very nice.

thank u so much dea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: MichiDespo
update update soon plueez.

Yes sumu dea me plannin on it shall update it soon😃

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JnJ....resh

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Posted: 16 years ago

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PART-14

Milind and Neev were working but their was complete silence.Milind had great urge to find out more about Neev and his wife relation but then he didnt do so sensing this would only make Neev suspect him.Neev also had a great urge to ask how did they both got married but then stopped himself thinking this might make Milind suspect on him.He already had made a mistake once by telling her 'i thought you would wait'and again one more question on Prachi he would have full doubt on him and right now he didnt wish for that.Milind and Neev worked out for late and finally it was time to leave they together left the office and once reached the parking both got inside the car when suddenly Neev called out,So i guess i wont be coming tomorrow.Milind looked at him confused.Seeing the confuse look in Milind face Neev replied,you forgot i have a lunch date with your wife tomorrow and gave out a sweet smile.Then and their Milind had a great urge to punch him hard on his face that he would completely forget about this lunch.But still he couldnt do so,so softly said yes.
Neev acting very innocent,then can u please tell her to get ready i will pick her up.Milind was about to tell him when he drove away.Now this was the limit,first he takes my myyyyyy so call wife for lunch and on top of that plans on picking her up.Why dont we have cars?Dont we have drivers?he was completely outraged with anger and jealousy.Oh!ya by the way why m i thinking so much about it and it wasnt only Neev in it my sweet little innocent downmarket wife also readily agreed.Meet you tomorrow for lunch,Neev,how dare she flirted in front of me i will show her just let me reach home first.Thinking so all the way he drove back home.
Finally he was home,all seemed to be sound sleep.He was walking up to his room when he remembered he had to talk to Prachi first.Opening the door of her room got inside very slowly making sure he didnt wake up his father otherwise he would get scolding for nothing.When he reached inside he saw Prachi sound asleep,he went close to her and he couldnt take his eyes of her she looked beautiful he kept on thinking how could a person play two character at the same time,she looked like an angel when she was asleep and how come she becomes a devil the moment she gets up thinking so he softly giggled.Prachi was shaking due to the cold wind from the window,seeing her shiver Milind slowly placed the blanket on top her closed the window,and went to the door,he didnt know what made him do so but he slowly turned back and went near her bed slowly kissed her on her forhead and softly murmurred,Goodnight my devil.And he slowly closed the door.....
As usual Prachi did her daily chores.As usual she went to Milinds room with the aarti in her hand but what seemed really unusual today was Milind was missing usually he sleeps till late but today he seemed to be real fast.But Prachi really didnt care,Well finally the good for nothing has started some good habit in life,thought Prachi.She went to her room to get ready for lunch she was very excited about meeting with Neev he was her best friend and they were many things she wished to share with him and many things she wanted to know about him.She wore a simple peach colour saree which was the first gift neev presented her on her birthday and she had really kept it nicely.Though the saree was simple she looked beautiful.Milind had finally arrived when he saw Prachi and his sister talking,and didnt know why but he felt happy,happy for his sister it was after many years he had seen his sister so happy and like it or not it was because of his middle class wife.He was just about to cross them,when Sukriti teaseing told her,So bhabhi who gifted you this saree its really very nice,sukriti told so thinking it was given to her by her bhaiya and she wanted to tease them both,when suddenly Prachi told her that it was a gift given to her on her birthday by her best friend Neev.The mention of Neev from Prachis mouth made him more than angry,he was burning with anger and he felt like killing Neev then and their but giving Prachi an angry stare he went to his room.
Oh!so madam is wearing her boyfriends gift.Ya why not have to do it for her darling boyfriend saying so he banged his fist on the wall.But no my dearrrrrrrr wifey not so soon i will not let you get to ur boyfriend so soon what fun will it be if you get him so fast before that i really need my revenge from you and that is why my dear dear wife i will do anything.
Prachi was really happy and seeing the happiness in her face Milind was equally pissed.He kept on looking at his watch and then at the door.Finally the door bell rang Prachi was so excited that she even didnt wait for Ramukaka to open the door she ran straight to the door and opened and was shocked and suprised to see what she saw in front of her,tears filled her eyes she was so happy more then she was to meet Neev because her father was standing just in front of her she couldnt believe it her father had come to meet her for the first time after marriage,happy tears started to flow from her eyes she couldnt control herself as she sobbed.Inder was also very pleased too see his daughter and the smile that he saw in his daughters face when she opened the door made him more then content.He was so pleased.Just then her father-in-law called out,Prachi beta arent you going to bring your father in?Prachi suddenly remembers that she was hugging her father for so long that she didnt realise they were not inside the house.Come in papa come in she called him excitedly.Inder saw his friend and hugged him and then he even hugged Milind.Milind excused himself for the moment.
Prachi was very happy to see her father but didnt understand how he showed up all of a sudden,papa aap i mean all of a sudden.Inder noticed the confusion in her face,Beta Milind had come to our house today in the morning i was as suprised as you were when i saw him then he told me how much you are missing me and then he asked me to come over lunch in the house so that you would be happy and he wanted all this to be a suprise for you beta.Prachi,i m really happy today i m totally satisfied that i made no mistake in finding the right guy for you who loves you so much,replied a proud Inder.
After hearing her fathers story thats when she realised were her good for nothing husband had disappeared early in the morning but what she failed to understand was why he did so.

Ok guys i have updated all my three ff today but it aint happening always😆😆😆.........Hope u enjoy it😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

#376

Haha this was good really good I'm so damn happy so Milsi went and fetched Inder lol.... Prachi can't go meet Neev why am I so happy yaar. This ff is so lively and nice love you for it Bidnai.

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JnJ....resh

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Posted: 16 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: blind horizon
Haha this was good really good I'm so damn happy so Milsi went and fetched Inder lol.... Prachi can't go meet Neev why am I so happy yaar. This ff is so lively and nice love you for it Bidnai.

😃😃i m so happy dea u enjoyed it dea.......i m equally a gr8 fan of ur ff and to know u liked my ff it really feels gr8 dea............😆😆😆very smart move him dea let see what prachi does.......😳thank u so muchhhhhhh mune dea thank u very much.🤗love u too mune dea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#378

I hate Neev in this FF.

Really loved the way Milind stopped that stupid Dinner of Neev and Prachi.

Milind is falling for Prachi but Prachi when will she realise she loves Milind.

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JnJ....resh

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Posted: 16 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: MichiDespo
I hate Neev in this FF.
Really loved the way Milind stopped that stupid Dinner of Neev and Prachi.

Milind is falling for Prachi but Prachi when will she realise she loves Milind.

😆😆😆Dont dea tthe more he will try seperate them the more they will get close😆😆..............😆😆😆milsi was lucky to save the lunch😆😆...........yes dea but his ego is big dea then his loveeee........it will take time surely a long time😃😃😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

#380

awww tht bedroom scene was so romantic.. dude is so madly in love with her but doesn't realize it
Neev i guess will be playing cupid unknowingly😆 Dude is all set to get Prachi, unknowingly making Milind all the more determined to keep her with him😆😆
love the names they have for each other 'good for nothing husband' and 'dear downmarket wife'😆😆😆
continue soon hun😃😃😃

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