Revelation(epilogue) pg 37- 25/10 (short Michi FF) - Page 4

English Translation pleazeeeeeeeee! But Part 1 was brillant, I read it twice. Prachi can be confused for now but very soon, I want to see her begging Milind to take her back.Sadistic, I know. 😆 Like Sumonto and Milind's bonding, no matter which direction the series takes, that how I want their relationship to be. Please continue soon, can't wait to see how Milind extracts his revenge since going to be quite a few weeks, if at all before we see that on KYM.

munee ....whaooo what a rocking FF.....

Muneee..your writing wonderfully captured what we want to see in the future....i hope they have a revengeful Mr.Mishra than a crying one in the real story!

Munee,
I took a deep breath after I finished reading.

You have very well described Milind's anger, frustration and pain. I could not help but feel deeply sorry for him.

And Prachi, I wish for once, she analyzed what she wants in life, what's called happiness and I wish she could once speak her heart out to herself and Milind. I wanted her to go and find Milind, confront him rather than hiding.. but it's Prachi.. we can't expect it from her.

It's in Milind to give out anger away first no matter what the other layers of emotions he has buried deep...
Whatever he does to Prachi, can he ever hate her? I guess NO.

So, he is going to take his kid away.. It's good. I don't want Chinnu bachcha to grow up with Proteek. Yes your Proteek seems to be better than the real one. But the kid belongs to Milsi... hope he takes him out right away.

Prachi has to now beg, repent and regret big time.

thanks Munee....

Originally posted by: (**sia**)

yayyy me first🥳...n that also for the first time😛😆

wonderful update hun....gud make prachi suffer to hilt..she deserves it....m luvin it

dn u think ur short ff is gettin too looong😕?? maybe u shud re-name this ff n make it one full fledged one😉😛...cuz i want mooooreeee

Originally posted by: shabzc1

brilliant muneeza,👏 i love the dialogues and the angry, revengeful milsi. i hope sandy shows us something similar.

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

English Translation pleazeeeeeeeee! But Part 1 was brillant, I read it twice. Prachi can be confused for now but very soon, I want to see her begging Milind to take her back.Sadistic, I know. 😆 Like Sumonto and Milind's bonding, no matter which direction the series takes, that how I want their relationship to be. Please continue soon, can't wait to see how Milind extracts his revenge since going to be quite a few weeks, if at all before we see that on KYM.

Originally posted by: shali

munee ....whaooo what a rocking FF.....

this is what we want....

Originally posted by: panache

Muneee..your writing wonderfully captured what we want to see in the future....i hope they have a revengeful Mr.Mishra than a crying one in the real story!

Originally posted by: *Natasha*

Great Part!

Please update soon!