Dil Aashna Hai.milind/prachi part3 updated..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, guys I am new here but I am going to try my hand at writing a fan-fic It?s a story about 5 couples 😛who have never met each but when they do meet each they start to wonder if they were meant to be together......please comment

They name of fan-fic:

❤️ Dil Aashna Hai ❤️

.........when they fell in love...........

Dilip khanna: a great father own a chains of hotels one of the biggest business man in america?.always there for his kids, encourages them to do new things... .also one thing he says to them is always be yourself.

Gaythari khanna: an amazing housewife and truly what you call a perfect mother..allows her kids to what ever they want but reminds them to never cross that ?seema? of their culture.
Milind khanna: 27 years old oldest of the siblings works at his dads office?never disobeys his mother?.always there to help his brothers and sisters..never thinks about himself always thinks about his family and friends first as for him they are his first priority .


Angad khanna: 25 years old second oldest?. A rock star??sold 5 albums all of them are hits?.singing is his passion?.. doesn?t believe in loves??.and loves his family very much.

aditya khanna: 23 years old 3rd oldest total playboy can be with one for more then a week?in his last year of university..a total ?A: student but bunks classes half of the year a mystery how he gets ?A?..loves to bug his sisters?.but them also very much.
Mukti khanna: 22 years old 4th oldest very charming and quiet person doesn?t talk much keep her feeling locked inside but she hurt u can read it her eyes..doing a teaching course ?because she loves kids when she is around them she becomes on of them, loves her family?. She is currently dubai finishing her course.
Riddhima khanna: 20 years old the jaan of her family very bubbly but very shy also..can talk for hours if u don?t stop her?.she is in her 2nd year of university doing a medical course?want to be a doctor same university as aditya. She can anyone laugh?loves to make friends very fragile because she becomes emotional on little things?.her family pa,pers her so much?loves her bhais and di very much.

2ND FAMILY

Mr Bajaj: lives in India owns highest music record companies?very rich?..loves his family

Mrs Prerna Bajaj: loves her husband and kids very much??..a role model for her a kids and a excellent housewife. She never discourages her kids for anything.


Prem Bajaj: 26 years old, very arrogant and sometimes very sweet, keeps his cool on everything. helps his dad in the record company?loves his sisters and brother very much feels very protective towards them and loves his parent .

Arman Bajaj: 24 years old Good sense of humor Very very charming. Very good looking...Basically everything you want in a guy, second last year of university studying to be a doctor?..very protective of his sisters but plays pranks on them to?he doesn?t believe in love but has a new girlfriend every week.

Prachi Bajaj: 25 years old very sweet and caring sister but very shy around strangers?loves her family very much?doing a course in fashion?believes in love but hasn?t found anyone?.loves to boss around arman because he annoys her very much. She is very traditional keeps her sisters from doing the wrong things in life.
Maithali Bajaj: 23 years old following her older sisters footsteps to become a fashion designer?very cultural?..learns it from prachi loves her family to death very sweet and innocent outside the house but at home she ,kripa and prachi love annoy both brothers.
kripa bajaj: 21 years old ?.loves to sing in last yearof her music academy??.they cutie of the family loves to annoy everyone loves to make friend?..can fool people easily?.because of her innocent look😆??.very sweet and cute .she is like the baby of the family everyone is very protective towards her. She getting ready to record her first album.

There the introduction??I need at least 10 comments before I post first part. Please forgive me for any mistakes new at this ?sowwie???..:) ...please tell me if it is good or bad......if is hould continue or not????
Edited by kelly789 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds interestin...plz continue😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds good continue👍🏼

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Posted: 17 years ago
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seems intersting continut but i doubt i will be here to read ur fanfic
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Posted: 17 years ago
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First part

In America it's morning 7 am……Gaythari is in the kitchen making breakfast dilip is getting ready for office….

Milind first to come down for breakfast.

M: good morning ma

G: good morning beta, come have breakfast your papa will come in few minutes

M: nahi ma mein late ho raha hoon mujhe office se pehle kahin jana hai okie bye love you or un dono ko universty nahi jana kya….. aur angad kahan hai

G: nahi aaj unki chuti hai woh kahin ghoomney ka plan ban rahey the tu bhi ja unke saath office tere papa smabal leinge …aur angad recording ke liye gaya hai,ata hi hoga

M:nahin papa akele nahin kar paynge main unkko help karna chahta hoon ….aur un teeno ke saath mein kahin bhi nahin jaana chahta…mein usey ghusa hoon……ok main jara hoon bye ma

G: haan bye beta

Dilip comes they have breakfast together and he leaves.

D: acha gayathari mein chalta hoon

G: theek smabhal ke jayiega bye

At 9:00 am

We see a room that colored a maroon color with two beds with a lot of stuffed animals and a lot of angad posters on the wall…then we a small figure lying on the bed wearing pink pyjamas hugging a teddy bear which mukti gave her on her b-day…

The alarm rings and the figure starts to wake up…

The camera gets closer and we see it riddhima….ridz for short that what every1 calls her.

R: get up ridz itz 9 and you still have to wake up your bro..so come on get ready..okiee

After we see she is wearing a modern red colored kurta with jeans ties up her hair puts on red colored earings and wears black heels short one.

Living/dining room

R(grabs a apple from the dining table) good morning mumma..kya dehk rahi hain

G: good moring jaan ….kuch nahi bas mukti ka interview araha hai news mein who dehk rahi thi……main use bahut miss kar rahi hoon.

R: mumma di ko mein bhi bahut miss kar rahi hoon…di keh rahi thi ke who aaj phone karien gi by 10:00 toh wait karien ek ghante mein baat kar lena….acha mumma adi or angad bhaiya kahan hai

G: angad ka call aya tha who 2 minute mein ara hai aur adi soo raha hai..tu kyun pooch rahi hai

R: (mischievous grin) wasie hi…..(hmmmm adi bhaiya sleeping…..well not anymore says it in her mind)…ok mom mein ahbi ayi

G: theek hai

Upstairs

Adi and angad room painted dark brown has big screen tv on the wall…..and sofa converted bed for guests or friends staying over walls have angad posters and hot girl posters. two huge beds one bed empty other adi sleeping in it…..ridz cums with buket full of water

R: haiiii….bhai you are sleeping so peacefully well not any more(say it loud)

( doesn't know angad is standing behind her)ridz is about to throw water on adi….when

An:Ridz jaan wat are you doing??? With a buket full water(pretending to not know anything)

R: bhaiya who wohhh…mein apka floor wash karne ke liye paani lekar ayi hoon aap dekiya kitna ghanda hai…

An: ohhhh how thoughtful of my sister.ok then u better start cleaing I'll just supervise so u don't get hurt..(about to burst out of laughter any second seeing ridz like this)

R: okie bhai I'll start cleaning (thinking where have I landed myself about to cry)

An: (seeing she is about to cry) ridz sachi batoa panni ke saath kya karna tha???

R: (stammering) wohh..woh mein adi bhaiya ke upar bhenkne waali thi…..(thinking plz don't get angry)

An: that's it you should have told me I would have done it for you personally…I have to get back at him for something he did last week….

R: (surprised) realii(very exicited).okie ready 123 throw and lets run

Angad and kripa run away….

Adi wakes suddenly to see him self wet..

A: mein gila kyun??(thinks did I wet my bed ……….no way r u in ur sense ur to old to do that)thinks a little more,after he gets up he hears giggling outside they he realize who it was.

Next update: does adi get angry and what about milind y is he angry???

Get all your answers in the next update…….

The in the 3rd update I will introduce the other family and how the couples will meet..

Please comment …..and forgive me for any mistake still new at this ……I did edit but there still might be a lot a mistakes….also should I write in hindi or English….or both..telll me answers..plzzz

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good start Kelly,please continue soon. Love the title of the FF
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Posted: 17 years ago
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luckily i got to read it good one please continue as soon as possible so i can read b4 i leave
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start but too many characters I'll lose track of who's who very soon please write their surnames with the forenames so it's easier to differentiate between the two families.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jdots

good one please continue

thank -you will continue very soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Good start Kelly,please continue soon. Love the title of the FF

thank-u sweet emma ...i kno i luv the title too........starting to write secondpart will post it tom night.hopefully.plzz keep on commenting😛

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