FF: Forgiveness Part12: Pg37: 21/09 - Page 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

BC, have you forgotten about the FF? 😒

Update soon :)

Sorry guys, know an update is long over-due. Just got sidetracked by other stuff. Yas, I love your avatar pic. I saw that pic on Friday and thought they looked so gorgeous in it and loved seeing them in the Oscars.
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Posted: 16 years ago
BC...............when will you do the update???
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Posted: 16 years ago
BC part 8 is wonderfully written, looks like the divorce is going to go through :(
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Posted: 16 years ago
tht part had me chocked up!! specially the part where michi are talking abt Kshama and wht it wud have been if she had started school... really beautiful and very sad.. and i'm glad tht they are able to talk abt Kshama like tht... and loved Milind picking up Asha just like tht.
and it kinda amazes me how they had named their daughter 'Kshama'😛
Edited by kuku.. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Awwe BC I've just read your FF from parts 1-10 - Superb work. Packed with emotions and heart rending scenes - My heart pains for Milind and Prachi – The worst fate for any parent to have to endure.

Milind must stop blaming himself so much and begin to trust in himself. I'm sure if he had spoken to Prachi at the time and even now she will not hold him completely responsible; I think she herself feels that it was fate and tragic circumstances; her anger towards Milind is more because of her belief of his infidelity. It seems that he wasn't unfaithful but what is the big secret that he won't deny her allegations so that they can begin to console each other and move on? - Something they should have done 2 years back. They love each other so much - probably more than they ever did before.

Love this FF

Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: _angel_

hey me first😃

thank u pam....will come back with comment once I read it hun.

Angel, you never did come back with your comments. Still waiting a month later. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ShubS

It hurts. It hurts so much to read about this Milind and Prachi.
Both still have so much longing for each other. Why can't they look back once?
I think Milind needs to forgive himself before he takes a step forward towards Prachi. And Prachi needs to listen to her heart forgetting the past.
I hope they both will be blessed with comfort and happiness soon.
thank you BC for the update. Looking forward to the next one.

All of your wishes are soon going to be answered. 😊 Thank you for reading.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Just managed to catch up

Wow those last few chapters portrayed their emotions perfectly, all the sorrow, anger and hurt they are still experiencing
I understand why Millind feels he will fail as a father and husband as he hasnt fully come to terms with his childrens untimely deaths
This FF is so sad, I was holding out hope that they would delay the divorce further but now Millind has said he has signed the papers, I think it will be another major blow to Prachi even though she was the one who wanted the divorce
You have written this exceptionally well, so well done and keep up the great work 👏
Aaliyah

Thank you so much, really appreciate the comments. Yes Milind doesn't want to fail again as a father and husband, so he feels it's better he doesn't even try.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Opti

Another wonderful update which beautifully portrayed the emotions of Michi. I had already told you how much I love this fic because these two really tug at my heart.

Thank you, that means a lot coming from you.
I hope seeing the signed papers wakes Prachi up finally to what she really wants.
Yes, it does.
I do not think Milind will ever reveal what is in his heart. He has not yet got the closure for his daughter's death. It has to be Prachi who looks beyond what meets her eye and find out what is in his heart. She need to tell him she forgives him and assume part of the responsibility for her daughter's death. She has to let him know she reposes her faith in him to allow him to move on. I hope she does that soon for both their sakes.
Well, Prachi is the one who has to pull through for both of them. Milind is too shattered.
How many more parts are you planning to write. I know it is very difficult to write an emotionally painful fic like this one but please do update more frequently. I do want to see these two get back together soon.
Maybe 3 or 4, not sure though.
P.S I think there needs to be a major catastrophe where Milind rescues Prachi and Asha, maybe from an accident. This will make him realise he can be trusted with their lives for he will never let anything hurt them, if he can help it. He would not hesitate to put his life in line for it, if need be. If Prachi can point out to him how wrong he was in assuming otherwise, I think he will come to terms with his past and move on.
Nice suggestation. 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
bc, will u be updating tonight?

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