Dastak Dil Se Pt 8 PG 22 - Page 15

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Posted: 17 years ago
hi robina
great you updtaed so fast the ff is getting really intersting iamlooking forward when kasturi is going to join robbie as her boss
well comming to the aort it was awsome i liked the part was qiet long
and you described robbie feeling toward jp and hos family
so robbie is a nice guy at heart
tannu divya are ultimate character of the ff if they are sent to jungle then all animals wil have toe leave the jungle.they should joing wrestling
thank god robbie did not doubt tanu for her lie but the way kasturi and tannu are meeting defintely the lie wont last ;long
i liked robbie and raunak are good buddies and robbie felt like slapping raunak for kasturi
and what is this robbie thinks tannu and kasturi lesbian oh my god this is too much
ab jaldi si update karna and whisper too
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Posted: 17 years ago
Absolutely wonderful part.........😃

Divya is an absolute brat but i loved the way you described the real her thru robbie's eyes..........now she doesn't seem to be bratty at all.......just a normal teenager......😛.....hers & tannu's exchange of words are fun to read.......😆

Loved the entire ROKA interaction.........both are attracted to each other & feel something for each other on a deeper level but i guess its going to be a long time they admit it to themselves let alone to each other........
It was cheeky of Robbie to approach kasturi & tannu & make that preposterous comment.......😆 😆

Aww Robbie is guilt ridden abt his business decisions regarding JP.............the guy's got a heart of gold.....😳

its nice that robbie & raunak are such good friends.........reminded me of the time when they were friends during the beginning of the show.......😳

so kasturi's plan is underway........waiting to see how she gets hired by robbie.....😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey diiiiii
Ok i read your comment about you imagining me to be Divya.........and iv just realised that means im.........Robbies SISTER 😲 😲 😲 Diiiiii how could you.........im going to run off and cry for a bit now.......... 😆 im only joking hehe (i hope you were too lol)
anyway back to the part.....what an amazing part theres so much to comment about
Absolutly loved the teaser....my god Robbie thinks Tannu and Kasturi are lesbians haha 🤣
Wow Robbie is up for auction on a date! Why do i get a feeling Kasturi will win the golden opportunity 😉
Tannu and Divya need to grow up...but still its funny how they hate each other....loved Robbie thought.....he is such a sweetheart to think Tannu like his sister and to feel bad about JP and the business deals
wow you brought Raunak in this part....his conversation with Robbie was so funny and cool......but i hope he stays away from Kasturi! Liked Devika aswell......she cares for both of them
RoKa interaction was so funny...both clearly attracted to each other....but wont admit it hehe......lookign forward to see who figures it out first
really looking forward to the rest of the ball.....and RoKa dancing
Great update diiii..........iv had such a ball reading it lol
Kay
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: muneefah

1-i loved da divya+tannu fight..

2-kasturi thinks robbie's eyes r cutee....yayee
3-robbie!!!bad boy..two girls close to each oder arent lesbo's yaar..come of it
u r a stupendous writer di....u deserve every word of praise.......i m so addicted to ur FF.........its a total treat to treat dis FF..ur descriptions r just perfect..........................
Hiya Muneefa...thanks for the glittery sign, and it really means sooo much to me that you enjoy reading dastak...and think of it as a treat...THannkkkk youuu i luvv the sign.. your wayy to kind..and you humble me with your words...😳 glad that you like tannu and divya..(their my comic relief ) and yeah can you blame kasturi for noticing robbie's eyes, their soo expressive...😉 thanks again for dropping by your thoughts...di
Rock on wid ur fabulous writin

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: FunkyChick

Hey di just read the part and it was awsom ur such a creative writer

Hiya Mariam.... thanks for such kind words...all the girls here are wayyy to kind i feel...too bad none of you were my eng. proff..😆 otherwise i would have aced English Lit...oh welll
I liked Kasturi and tanu they are sweet
Glad you like them, i luv the sister bond, for your sister is the other half of youuu..(if you have a sister )😃
robbie thought kasturi and tanu were lesbians 🤣
glad you got a good laugh at it, cause let me tell you robbie is about to stick his foot in his mouth over and over again...😆
divya and tanu fight was funny they seriously hate each other robbie and ranauk friendship was sweet. Ranauk auction Robbie he he keep up the great work di
I luv writing about divya and tanuuu, they are my fav...and yeah they have some serious growing up to do..
and ronauk and robbie are totally opposites of tannu and divya...i wanted to have a lot of differnt type of relationships portrayed in dastak..glad you approve..thanks so much for indepth comments...really enjoyed reading your comments..thank diii
Update Soon

Love Mariam xx

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: annu08

hi robina / hiya Annu

great you updtaed so fast the ff is getting really intersting iamlooking forward when kasturi is going to join robbie as her boss
okay.. thanks for letting me know that, cause i'll have to tell you its gonna be at least another 2 parts before kasturi joins robbie at work...but soon...i promise...
well comming to the aort it was awsome i liked the part was qiet long/ aww i'm soo glad you like long parts i thought it was wayyy too long and people would find it borrrrring..
and you described robbie feeling toward jp and hos family so robbie is a nice guy at heart
glad i was able to get across that feelings robbie has...he really is a very sweet kind hearted guy...thanks for saying it soooo😃
tannu divya are ultimate character of the ff if they are sent to jungle then all animals wil have toe leave the jungle.they should joing wrestling
ahah you have me🤣🤣🤣 seriously well said annu..these two should go to the jungle and have it out..thanks for the idea...😉
thank god robbie did not doubt tanu for her lie but the way kasturi and tannu are meeting defintely the lie wont last ;long
Robbie thinks she's lyin about kasturi being a friend, not about being a lesbian...because noone corrected him...so for me this misunderstanding is goonna be lasting for awhile...
i liked robbie and raunak are good buddies and robbie felt like slapping raunak for kasturi
and what is this robbie thinks tannu and kasturi lesbian oh my god this is too much
yeah well remember the 3 rules, now robbie wont feel so uncomfortable with kasturi when she joins his office, cause he'll believe she isnt interested in men AT all..🤣🤣🤣 and foresure i'll try to update asap...thanks for such wonderful comments make my writing worth while...take care annu...bye for now diii
ab jaldi si update karna and whisper too

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: swan20

Absolutely wonderful part.........😃/ hiya Swan thanks a ton for saying soooo...it really humbles me when people like my writing...😳

Divya is an absolute brat but i loved the way you described the real her thru robbie's eyes..........now she doesn't seem to be bratty at all.......just a normal teenager......😛.....hers & tannu's exchange of words are fun to read.......😆

awww shucks soo happy that you liked the way i portrayed how robbie knows his sis...but yeah teenage years are a bit harder on girls then boys (maybe its cause of our hormones...) but soon tannu and divya's relationship will grow...and evolve...but its always fun to have a little fun on the road to adulthood..😃

Loved the entire ROKA interaction.........both are attracted to each other & feel something for each other on a deeper level but i guess its going to be a long time they admit it to themselves let alone to each other........

yipppeee glad you liked roka's interaction cause i think the road to one's love story is always so much more fun to write about then when they realize their love for one another. so yeah your right it will be awhile..sowwwiiii😳 hope you enjoy it still...


It was cheeky of Robbie to approach kasturi & tannu & make that preposterous comment.......😆 😆
yeah robbie's got tons of attitude and not afarid to voice his opinion...since he believes what he has to say is of the utmost importance most of the time😆 but well said, swan it was indeed a Preposterous comment..well said...👏

Aww Robbie is guilt ridden abt his business decisions regarding JP.............the guy's got a heart of gold.....😳
glad you felt for robbie's turmoil of emotions..and yup he's all heart..of gold😃

its nice that robbie & raunak are such good friends.........reminded me of the time when they were friends during the beginning of the show.......😳
yeah i liked that part of the show too and how i wish ronauk hadnt turned into a diabolical maniac..

so kasturi's plan is underway........waiting to see how she gets hired by robbie.....
yup that is what the next part will be all about..thanks for some indepth and interesting comments, always luv to hear from you, its a total pleasure.. hope to read from you more..take care swan

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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 7 (lucky one) Robbie watched kasturi's small body defy its delicate purportions by pulling Tannu all the way to the other side of the ballroom...He shook his head and actually felt disappointment, Geeze i should lay of the alcohol tonight he thought to himself, hating where his feelings were taking him tonight, what happening to me, Robbie Saberwal, never feels remorse (bad ) over girls. Just then Anita something or the other, (what is her last name he thought to himself and then couldnt care less cuase she's just another airhead in the loooooongggg line of girls dying to win his attention. ) He turned to her and smiled his 10,000 mega watt smile and watched her slip on those high heels as she reacted to his smile, or should i call those poor excuse for shoes death trap instead, and he smiled even more deeply at his inside joke. As Anita came up close to him , Robbie took a step back, he's always hated people in his personal space, God how he hated people touching him..its been a phobia, he had since childhood. She ended kissing the air, where robbie's cheek had been but a second before he very cunningly moved the very last second.😆
Robbie: Anita... how are. (he asked in his very deep sexy voice)
Anita: Robbie i'm fine now, would you like to dance?
Robbie: Anita i'm a bit old fashioned that way, and I usually like to ask the lady.
Anita and Robbie stood their with a uncomfortable silence, as Ronak walked up and put his arm on Anita and said: so did you get turned down yet again Anita? tsk tsk...bechaari Anita start playing hard to get and you atually might end up catching more of Robbie's attention if you stopped chasing him. or better yet Robbie you should implant one of those GPS chip with in yourself and that way all the girls will know where you are... so that way they wont have to chase after you anymore. and he 😉 Robbie.
Robbie: Ronuak, mujhe yeah samajhe mein nahin aatah, mein tumhain, bardaashe kyun kar raha hoon..
Ronauk: Cause i'm diabollically brilliant..Now i'm off to ask the bomb for a dance.
Robbie smiling now, because he understood the "Bomb" Ronauk was referring to was Kasturi and the "bomb" was indeed about to blow up and turn him down..
Robbie smiling said: haan jaaou jaaou..us bomb se milkar aaou...
Ronauk: mera bonus kaam to nahin karou ga?
Robbie: actually if you get her to dance with you Ronauk i'll give you a 15% increase on your xmas bonus...thats how giving i feel tonight. and he laughed..
Ronauk smelling something very fishy asked: tum haas kyun raha hoi? (why are you laughing)
Robbie: its ummm kuch nahin Ronauk, now go and and ask your bomb to dance..
Anita tired of being ignored took off without looking back, Robbie Saberwal was just plain old full of himself, she honestly didnt think there was a girl "Perfect " enough out there made for " the perfect Robbie Saberwal" as she was passing to her left she noticed Divya Saberwal walking into the ballroom, wearing a silver figure hugging long gown with straps that criss crossed on the back of her dress. Wow, what was that an armani creation or a canali one, defintely Italian designer wear...uggg these Saberwals.... 🤢😡 she thought. Divya's diamond earrings winked back as the lights reflected on them as an answer to Anita's disgust..
Robbie followed Ronauk and went to position himself close enough but not obvious enough to anyone that he was intensely watching and listening to the scene unfolding on infront of him. Ronauk was about to get turned down...big time...😆 he laughed to himself.
and crossed his arms across his chest.
Ronauk walked up to the beautifully dressed girl, her glossy thick hair was long, it hung below her delicate shoulder blades.
Ronauk cleared his throat and said: Excuse me?
kasturi turned around at hearing the light but humourous voice and said: yes?
Ronauk: hiya, i'm Ronauk Singhania. ( and he streched out his hand)
Kasturi ignored his hand and asked: Hi I'm kasturi.
Ronauk: Why does it feel like the most beautiful girl in the world is in this room?
Kasturi rolled her eyes and laughed out, her voice was sweeter then he could have ever imagined.
Robbie hurt her fairy voice laugh and felt like someone had punched him in the gut.
Kasturi: that is the most cheeziest pick up line i have ever heard.
Ronauk looking shocked and hurt at the sametime said: aww come on, as pick up lines go that at least deserves a B+.
Kasturi: heck no, that sucked and you know it.
Ronauk: okay i agree it sucked, care to dance?
kasturi: no not really.
Robbie smiled deeply as his dimples showed on his face.
Ronauk: aww please?
Kasturi: no seriously i'm a horrible dancer, but thank you for asking.
Ronauk: okay would it help if i told you i'm New Dehli 2nd most eligible bachlor? and that I'm CFO of Saberwal Inc.
Kasturi realizing that this just might be the chance she and Tannu we're waiting for..she thanked her God quitely and said: well when you put it that way, how can a girl say NO.
Robbie's smile immidiately disappeared and he frowned deeply. What? How could she say yes? Ohhh Of course he thought she has to keep up pretences.
Just than Tannu walked past him and he felt bad for these two, they would probably have to hide their relationship from the world, especially JP saab.
ohh well..you cant fight what you are now can you. Robbie went to go see where he was sitting, feeling pretty lousy cause he would have to fork over more money to ronauk, not because kasturi had said yes to dancing with ronauk. Or that was what he kept telling himself.
Ronauk led kasturi to the dance floor and danced to the song : tujhe dheekha to yeh jaana sanam..... Ronak held kasturi in his arms and was surprised that he didnt feel anything, nothing clicked with this beauty in his arms, he felt kinda bad, cause he would luv to find the girl that was made for him, oh well he'll keep searching. so he asked her about herself: So kasturi tell me about yourself, for i know I havent seen you before.
Kasturi: ohh i've come home to reconnect with my roots. I'm looking for a job, cause i dont have alot of money and I hate having to stay with my friend Tannu Chawala.
Ronauk: so tell me about your educational background?
Kasturi: why are you willing to hire me?
Ronauk: well that depends on what type of background you have?
Kasturi had finished her degree in finance, so at least she didnt have to lie about that.
Ronauk: oh..
Kasturi: so does your company have any openings, can you hire me?
Ronauk: not right at this moment there isnt anything that come to my mind.
Kasturi feeling totally dejected and feeling that her and tannu's plan was doomed to fail even before it got off to a start.
Ronauk continued: however Saberwal's CEO, is looking for temp to hire, as his Personal Assistant.
Kasturi looking up relieved :such mein?
Ronauk liking how her voice sounded so full of hope said: yeah, infact the CEO is here tonight, if you want after the dance I can introduce you to him.
Kasturi knowing he meant Robbie said: Oh would you. I'd owe you big time.
Ronauk smiled and said: consider us even. (he didnt bother to tell her that his bonus just got bigger thanks to her.) with the song comming to its end he led kasturi to where Robbie was sitting.
Robbie watched Ronauk and kasturi dancing, the way their heads were touching as Ronauk said something to her, and her face fell, and then it lightened up like a tree at christmas time. What the hell is he saying to her, robbie wondered. Robbie's hand clenched tightly and then he unclenched it. Hating the feelings he was having, why was this 5 foot simple girl playing with his head. and why in God's name am i feeling anxiety over her dancing with Ronauk??? Kyun?
Robbie picked up the knife next to his plate and twirled it in his strong sleek fingers and tried to make sense of his feelings. Fustrated with not understanding what he was feeling and why, he looked around his table to see who he was going to be sitting with, that was when he noticed the normal names except for one. Where Divya usually sat with him, her name was no where to be seen and one white card with a golden border around it caught his attention, but it wasnt the card but the name written in calligraphy that shocked him, it was Kasturi's name. This night was getting very strange very fast he thought, and looked up to watch kasturi being led towards his table by Ronauk, Robbie thought about stabbing Ronauk as he noticed Ronauk's arm around kasturi. Thats when robbie realized what it was about kasturi that had him acting soo unlike himself, it was his alpha male hormones reacting to her, seeing her as a challenge, she was a challenge from the second she had sat down on the seat next to him on that plane. Now that he knew she was off limits his body was reacting to her as a challenge, to see if his exceptionally handsome self could make her feel something for him. OF course that was all it was. a challenge as old as time. He felt relieved to realize that it wasnt anything deeper then that. Thank god he thought.
Ronauk smiled at robbie and said: Robbie, meet kasturi , kasturi , robbie.
Robbie: hum already mil chukey hain.
Ronauk: Really, oh yes the B factor..right robbie and he winked.
Robbie: No the T factor Ronauk, geeze buddy your memory sucks.
Kasturi confused about the lettering asked: I'm sorry what is the T or B factor.
Robbie smiled : Nothing, just an inside joke.
Ronauk saw kasturi's name card and said: oh what a coincidence, your sitting with us at this table.
Ronauk pulled kasturi's chair out and she sat opposite Robbie and next to Ronauk.
The other people sitting on the table was Vikas to Robbie's left and Anita to his right. Kasturi had only changed her name card with Divya, who was now sitting next to Tannu on a table on the opposite side from them.
Just then the MC for the evening spoke into the mic asking for people to take their seats as the program for the evening was about to begin. He thanked the corporate sponsors that made the charity ball possible, and the one name that stuck out in kasturi's mind was Saberwal Inc.
The MC continued with what was going to be the next event for the evening. He asked for the audience to take out their ticket stubs as the Raffel was about to begin.
Kasturi took out her stub and the MC stated: ladies and Gentelmen the raffel for the first item up for auction is from a very Prominent Family of New Dehli.
This year the charity committee has decided that i'll pick out the ticket stub and read out the number and that person will come up on stage and we will then reveal what they have won. Okay here we go.
The MC picked up a ticket stub and read out the number:456, would the lady or gentlemen holding the ticket stub with the number 456 please come up on stage. Everyone looked around in anticipation to see who had won.
Tannu jumped up and said, MEEEE i MMMEEE i mean i have ticket stub Number 456...YIppppeeeeee...she ran up to the stage all excited to claim her win.
The MC took her stub and confirmed that she had indeed won the first item that had been auctioned off..And he began to tell her what it was....
Ticket holder number 456 you have won :A day of shopping with Divya Saberwal: YOU will be entitled for a shopping spree with her at her fav stores , and ending the day off at her fav. spa retreat and dinner. Congratulations.... and everyone began to 👏 Divya couldnt believe her luck, this was awesome she thought as she walked up to Tannu on stage as she got on to stage.
Tanuu stood there like the guy had just sentenced her to death, her face was turning a dark shade of blue from the lack of oxygen going into her body.
Tannu totally upset said: kya? kya kaha tum ne?
MC: I said you have won a Day with Divya Saberwal.
Tannu taking her stub back from the MC and ripping it up said: I thought you said i WON something? Are you joking with me? Is this some sick JOKE?!!!!
MC totally confused at Tannu's behavior: No ma'am this is no joke you have won a shopping spree with divya Saberwal..
Divya had finally walked onto the stage, as Tannu glared at her.
Tannu: stop saying that!!!! i dont want it, infact this isnt my ticket stub. mein ne kisse aur ka ticket stub uthaa li ya tha.
Divya: Tannu your a fashion disaster. This is the best thing that has ever happened to you.
MC getting alittle upset at her for her public behavior said calmly: be it as it may Ma'am you have indeed won a day with Divya Saberwal.
Tannu ignoring the MC said: Divya your whole life is a disaster now leave me the hell alone.
Divya grabbed the Mic and said: Tannu thanks me from the bottom of her heart and is soo very very greatful, and honored to be spending a day with ME..and hopefully she will finally get her makeover that she so badly needs. thanks and have a great night everyone.
Tannu grabbed the Mic and said: Tannu Chawala, is so very greatful and honored to be able to spend a day with Divya so she can finally show her how shallow, mindless, and inconsequential and meaningless her life really is. Thank you everyone and good nite.
And tannu and divya left the stage pushing one another.
The MC totally taken back from that whole scene, cleared his throat and said: Well then lets move on to the next winner. and he picked another number.
MC called out: the next winner is ticket number 342, will the winner with ticket number 342 please come on stage. everyone waited to see the next winner.
Kasturi looked down at her ticket and couldnt believe her luck, it was her ticket, she looked up and giggled, and softly said: aww thats my ticket..
Robbie shivered when he heard her giggle.
Kasturi got up and walked towards the stage to claim her win.
The MC said: this beautiful younge lady has won:
You have won a date with New Dehli's most Eligible Bachlor Robbie Saberwal. Your date will include a dinner and dancing at the Paradise Point Hotel and Resorts. Furthermore, Robbie being the fine outstanding gentlemen that he is, has also offered a dance tonight and to drive you home.
kasturi froze listening to what she had won, OMG wow Thank you God... now i know i'm doing the right thing, for my family, you've given me this opportunity to get close to him.. thank you... dad this one's for you.
Robbie walked up onto the stage kasturi wasnt even paying attention to him, she showed no emotion what so ever, robbie felt hurt, she really is a Lesbian..any normal girl would be jumping up and down like they won the lottery. yet look at her, she's got her eyes closed and she looks like she's praying?? got what is wrong with HER???
He reached her and reached into his tuxedo jacket and pulled out a single rose and handed it to her.
kasturi looked up and smiled at him and said: thank you and took the single rose from him.
Robbie: your welcome.
the MC soo relieved that this winner was at least calm and graciously accepting her win.
Robbie reached for kasturi's elbow and guided her back to their table. As he was walking back robbie felt a chemical reaction within the pit of his stomach. and he thought to himself: this is not good, NOT goood at all.
Edited by nrasheed - 17 years ago
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Hi di,

first of all, congrats on 20 pages

just finished reading part 7...

I LOVED this part!

OMG! Anita here? Uff! I hate her🤢

lol... Raunak after Kasturi😆... too funny

hehe... poor Robbie... feel bad for him... his mixed emotions made me laugh😆

LOL... bechari Tannu she won a day with Divya... good luck Tannu 😉

OMG! Robbie and Kasturi on a date? WOW! I'm looking forward to that! omg! Paradise Point here too? Oh I love that hotel! 😛

ROFL.... Robbie thinks Kasturi rly is A l*sb**n 🤣

plz update fast and PM me when u do! thx😃

Edited by shanu333 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!
wat a part
i love robbie's inner feelin
u know like

As he was walking back robbie felt a chemical reaction within the pit of his stomach. and he thought to himself: this is not good, NOT goood at all.


n so on

robina di-mein appki jitni tarrefey karo kam hai
u r just too good for words
u r one marvellous writer
thanku for writin in dis forum
i owe u dis one

Edited by muneefah - 17 years ago

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