FINALLY mimiiiii, i'vebeen waiting 4 like weeks or it felt like it....reserved ......๐ Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!! LOL I think it's been about a week or so since I last updated! hehe, dii you're soo cutee ๐ณ Can't wait to read what you thought!
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Woooowwweeeee sunshine i wasnt let down, i loved each sentence, the way you moved the story from a not interested kasturi..to robbie's persuasive song, and then you took me on an emotional roller coaster with roka's conversation about how they felt about their parents had me all teary and ๐ญ.
OMGGGG nooo way!!! Diiii- did you really, seriously like it? ! ๐ฒ ... thank you... oh my gosh.. I had YOU teary! I'm smilin g right now, although I shouldnt be, because I dont ever want you to be upset- but the fact that my writing brought in some emotion ... and coming from you, thats like the BIGGEST/BEST compliment a writer could ever ask for!
okay let me explain in detail, (saying this after calming down a little, very emotional part Mimiiiiiโญ๏ธ)
Oooh Dii, that one paragraph was enough!! Your comments mean the world to me! You cannot imagine how I managed writing opposites when you were gone
I loved how kasturi, just told robbie how she feels, she never bothers to sugar coat it..thats soo important to have honesty as their foundation in any relationship.
Hahaa, Nope! She's never there to sugar coat anything! She likes getting to the point. And I'm so glad you found that as a good quality in her, because I know from personal experience, that being too blunt is considered rude. And I, personally, am very outspoken... I speak my mind, but sometimes it hurts people, which I then try to control. I hate it when somebody is hurt because of me.. :(
and ohhh i soo agree now adays alot of songs have me ๐ฒ with their lyrics,
LOL oooh diii, I can so imagine you and your shocked face after hearing some of the songs they play nowadays... hahaaaa
but your song that you choose was truly beautiful and it had tremendous amout of depth of emotion, i couldnt imagine a more perfect song for robbie to sing to kasturiii...
Really?!!!! ๐ฒ Omgggg thank you SO much diiii! I didnt know how everyone would react to this song, because, firstly, not a lot of people like Nickelback the first time they hear their songs. I know I didnt. And I wanted to get a different song, but for some reason I needed to put this one in my FF. I'm just SO happy you liked it! Nickelback is my FVOURITE band! =D
awwww that had me soo floored talk about one beautiful moment, and i found their first special moment very innovative on your part...Robbie singing to her alone...awwwww.
Aweeeeeeeeeee thank youuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! Heheee, I know this must've been the most different "special" moment you've ever read about, but dii- this is the result when a person is out of ideas and cannot write a story to save her life! ๐
Oooh , and I was reading your reply on Dastak- <3 represents a heart. Tilt your head to the right, you should see it ๐๐
Superb sunshine...okay i'm quoting you this time cause i just found this damn down funny...the proposal joke was awesome...๐คฃyour sense of humour is second to none mimiiiii
๐ฒ You're quoting... ME?! WOW! This is like the third-ish timee.. and yet I cant get over the adrenaline rush everytime I see your comments ๐ And dii- my sense of humour S-U-C-K-S! I dunno what you're talking about! Your little inside jokes always have me rolling on the floor laughing!! ๐
Robbie: Why, are you planning on sending a marriage proposal, because if you are, I'm not planning on being committed any time soon.
Kasturi gave him a dirty look. "And what makes you think I'd want to get married to you?"
Robbie: C'mon, who wouldn't? (chuckles)
Kasturi: Me.
and robbie calling devika Crevilla deville..uggggg robbie and his hatred for his parents, had me thinking that yeah sometimes parents mess up big time that cause thier kids so much hurt that their children end up hating them.
Diii- I was SO scared to post this part because of the whole Parent Issue. I knew you and Shumi di would relate to it from the parents POV. I know that it seems like Robbie hates his parents more than anything, but trust me- he doesnt hate them like that... there are certain reasons behind his feelings towards them.
Parenting really is such a delicate job. but yeah you portrayed robbie's spoiled attitude really well, and the way kasturi blasted him had me ๐๐ cause robbie was wayyy out of line. no matter what parents do deserve a certain amount of respect always...
Oooh diii.. Im so honoured! Thank you for liking that part. It was just another way to show how Opposite RoKa really are. While Kasturi can do anything for her dad, Robbie isn't grateful for having them.
and i just cried alot when i read the following line:
Aweeee... diiii... Im so sorry, I never wanted to make you cry ๐ญ
"BECAUSE MY MOM IS DEAD! She is NEVER coming back! And my dad-, who I love more than my own life, is DYING of blood cancer! EVERYONE I CARE FOR IS LEAVING ME- and here you are, the most unsatisfied, ungrateful person I have EVER met!"
this part was just soo touching and full of hurt, i could feel her hurt it was soo sad Mimiii
Aweee diiii... Im SO happy that you could connect with what Kasturi is going through! Makes me think that I am doing a pretty decent job portraying her as a character.
and i felt soo bad again for JP having to live each day that brings him closer to his death and kasturi having to life each day watching her father die alittle everyday is just soo heart breaking..๐ญ๐ญ
๐ญ Oooh diii... that right there just basically summerizes everything that both JP and Kasturi have been going through. It's not just JP's battle, but it's Kasturi's too. It's their battle against death! And sadly, soo many people are diagnosed with such illnesses, if not- worse. Take my Grand Dad for instance, he had cancer... and I never got the chance to get to know him.. *emotional moment*
your a very intense writter mimii, i realize that when you write your totally connected to your emotions, which really captures a reader and pulls them into the story itself...
OMG... diii... wow! Thats soo hugee... thank you! I guess I know how you feel towards Whispers, when you begin to write a story, and your totally into it... somehow, the characters become part of you. And everything connected to them affects you. Thats how I feel towards Opposites. It's crazy, but it's like my baby ๐ณ
so hats of to you little one..
hehee, little one! ๐ณ Reminds me of one of my favourite shows I used to watch when I was 5-6... "Little Bear" ๐
for being such an emotional writer, something i have just now been able to do, i bet when you get to my age you'll be something untouchable...
NO WAY DIII! Whispers has made me cry more than the show itself! Pleasee don't ever bring your writing down.. it's just amazing and uncompareable! I'll always mark your words diii.. they means so much to me!
sooo wayyy proud of youuuu, thank you for writing opposites, its offered me a very close link to one of my fav. people YOUUUUU. luv diiii
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh my GOD!! Everytime you say that, I go on blush attack! Making you proud? Thats like a DREAM! Diii... you're my favourite person, and Im so happy I was able to connect with you through both Opposites and Whispers/Dastak ๐ณ
and i luved your teaser you cant do this too meee. payback truely does suck big time...please continue soon and sooner then a week, no more looong waits...
Heheee, yeesss ma'am!! And I'm sure you'e heard the saying: What goes around comes around ๐