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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: AnjaliThapar

😛 Hey; I finally caught up with your fan-fic and it's mindblowing and keep up the good work. 😃

Anjali



Thanks Anjali and I'm glad that you liked it 😳

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvraz-Krishna

Same here I finally caught up with your fan-fic and its mindblowing 😳



Thanks Krishna and I'm glad that you liked it 😊

Nisha


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part – Five - Kasturi doesn't have that much time left.... .... ... 😳


Entire night Kasturi stayed on Robbie's side even fell asleep beside Robbie on his bed while reading her novel, but at the same time she had a dream where she was screaming and screaming for help, but nobody was coming than she saw a huge house with many people dressed in white. Kasturi walks slowly up to the death body and before she could see the face everything turned black and she was looking at somebody's picture….even holding it tight also you could hear many people laughing at her….and also saying – we took away your love, your support and left you with nothing, but tears.

Kasturi wakes up and looks at Robbie sleeping and also kiss his forehead saying "thank god; it was only a dream or else if anything happens to Robbie Sir than I'll die." Kasturi lets go off Robbie's hand and walks over the window and looks for a shooting star so she can wish that nothing can come in-between her love not even death and death as to come than it will come to her first than her love. Kasturi turns away and starts walking back when a shooting star falls down.

Next morning, Robbie wakes up beside Kasturi and smiles at himself than wraps his arms around her and goes back to sleep while everyone is looking for Kasturi, who is sleeping peacefully in her husband's arm.

Nandani: Where could Kasturi be?

Devika: Did you check the kitchen, her room, the mandir and also the garden in-case she went out watering the plants?

Nandani: I checked everywhere except for Robbie's room?

Devika: Why do you thing Kasturi would be in Robbie's room? What if she is in Raunak's room?

Nandani: I just came from Raunak's room and she isn't there except for Robbie's room and if she is there than what….

Devika: Why do you think she will be there? Maybe she is gone to the temple early in the morning?

Nandani: Instead of arguing, why don't we just check his room and if she isn't there than she must have gone mandir or her house.

Devika: Fine….lets check Robbie's room, but I'm sure she isn't there...

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While Nandani and Devika walk up to Robbie's room, Kasturi wakes up and tries to get out of Robbie's hold before anyone catches them.

Kasturi: Please Sir…

Robbie: Please? What?

Kasturi: Please let go of me Sir?

Robbie: If I don't than what?

Kasturi: Than you will be in big trouble by your mom and the Hitler's mom.

Robbie: I'm not scared of my mother or the Hitler's mother

Kasturi: oh really!

Robbie: Yes and now give me my kiss than I'll let you go

Kasturi: And if I don't give you your kiss than what

Robbie: Than I won't let you go…

Sweetly

Understood

While Robbie and Kasturi are romancing around Devika opens Robbie's door and saw Kasturi in his bed, in his arm. Devika was ashamed of herself in-front of Nandani. Nandani looked at Robbie's mother with weird expression than orders Kasturi to come down at once. Kasturi just nods her head, in-front of Raunak's mother and Robbie's mother and before Robbie's mother leaves she gives Robbie and Kasturi a lecture than leaves.

Soon as Devika leaves Kasturi starts crying on Robbie's arm saying "I can't take this anymore or else I'm gona go nuts". Robbie starts wiping Kasturi's tears off and says "don't worry sweetly – just few more days until than please take good care of, yourself…"

Kasturi: You don't understand anything – you aren't going through what I am going through? Each day I'm told the same thing over and over that take care off Raunak and never let him, feel lonely, but nobody cares about my needs and my needs is you and only you. I can't take it anymore.

Before Robbie could say anything Kasturi leaves his room with tears and goes straight into her room and breaks down in-front of Robbie's picture saying "Nobody cares about me or what I want. I'm sick of playing someone else's wife when I'm your wife. Sometimes I feel like screaming and yelling that I'm your wife, but nobody cares for us…nobody not even my own family except for Drishti. (Kasturi feels like nobody cares for them, but only cares for Raunak sometimes she wish Raunak wasn't alive, but than how would she learn that Robbie is innocent in everyway. Only god knows what is going to happen in her life and how long this is going to continue),

(Guys; here is small video of Kasturi's feeling and can't stand the judaai from Robbie Sir)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3EYHPPLtdy8[/YOUTUBE]

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Afterwards she goes down the stairs toward dinning hall where Nandani shoots up many questions at Kasturi, but Kasturi didn't answer any of them until she said that Robbie as to give her divorce. That's when Kasturi speaks up saying "that she is leaving this house for good out of Raunak's life and Robbie's life so it doesn't matter if she or he gives her divorce cause its settle by god that I leave as Robbie's Suhagan. Kasturi goes running into her room with tears and starts packing her bags. Robbie comes into her room and tries to make her understand, but this time Kasturi didn't want to understand anything except for the fact that she loves Robbie and nothing can come in-between them.

Kasturi: Please Robbie Sir; don't make me try to understand because I can't take it anymore; I thought Prem was here to make our troubles end, but nothing like that is happening.

Robbie: I know Kasturi, but we have to give Prem some time and also he was only here yesterday night so we have to give him some more time

Kasturi: But I don't have that much time left

Everything froze between Robbie and Kasturi....

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I think i'll stop over here.... cause I want to leave you guys hanging off and also I need more than three comments to continue.

Nisha




Edited by Nisha_106 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Hey just caught up with it 😃

Do continue....you cant leave it there 😆 😆

Why has Kasturi not got time left?

Waiting for next part 😃

Kay
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
i really like your fan-fic, you are a very nice writer
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
Like Kay said its mind-blowing

Krishna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww just caught up with your 2 parts. wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Yayyyyyyyyy prem is robbies childhood freind.
awwwwwwwwww Kastrui and robbie totally in love lol.
Whats happend to kasturi????????
why doesnt she have enough tym???????????
😕
& Yh uve kept me hanging of deffinately 100%
Now update the nxt part asap pleaseeeeee cnt w8 4 it lolz.
Ppl post more comments so Nisha will continue lolz
Gr8 parts and i love your FF
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww just caught up with your 2 parts. wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Yayyyyyyyyy prem is robbies childhood freind.
awwwwwwwwww Kastrui and robbie totally in love lol.
Whats happend to kasturi????????
why doesnt she have enough tym???????????
😕
& Yh uve kept me hanging of deffinately 100%
Now update the nxt part asap pleaseeeeee cnt w8 4 it lolz.
Ppl post more comments so Nisha will continue lolz
Gr8 parts and i love your FF
👏



Well said even i'm wondering what happened to Kasturi and why she doesn't have time.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
Man I just caught up....its mind-blowing also something different so what's happen to Kasturi.....

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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
I'm glad that you picked Prem as Robbie's friend cause he is cute and also I liked him from Left Right Left where he was Aslo Bhai....just wished Alekh was in this fan-fic because I miss him a-lot after he left "Left Right Left'

Anyways keep up the good work

Anjali

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