Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 25

Finally RK meet formally! 😳 they managed to talk with out shouting at each other then 😆 😆

Hai i can imagine how handsome Robbie must have looked at the party 😳 😳 im a bit worried about Kasturis knee high red boots.......Robbie keep your feet tucked in!! 🤣 🤣 😉

Prag you ended at ajay observing Robbie.....abh kya hoga? 😕

Waiting for next part!

Kay

Ok as usual gr8 part 👏
Wow wat a part. Awwwww taht is so sweet when Divya loses how robbie consoles her. His so sweet. 😆 😆
Finally ROKA meet formally lolz.
Now update the next part soon pragz di.
Waiting for it 👏 👏 😆

Pragz once again excellent part 👏 👏 👏

all i can say is you have learnt BT art of stoping the part at the very suspense momemnt 😆

now when are you updating again 😉
i want to know A's reaction 😆

hmm is Robbie going to work for chawla's
very interesting 😉

Pragzz,
Woww !!! You are such a sweetheart !! You got both of them to the party..It was superb..That was the best part that too after the crappy episode yesterday!
Thankyou so much for making my day..I love you.. 🤗
What to say of Robbie now…You projected his appearence so well that I could see everything happening in front of my eyes ....
Ronak is sooo sweet in the FF , he is THE best frnd of Robbie in ur FF. I love Ronak's character here.. 😳

Do write the next part as soon as possible !

Sofia

that was lengthy 😲 why didn't i feel so 😉 😆. alright, so the part was really nice. robbie consoling divya and then shivani too. and then sat in the middle, that's an ideal brother, man. that everyone wants to have. well, not just only a brother, but their bf too, the way u described him dressed up for the party. and i'm really shocked the way u described kasturi in ur ff. it was really hard for me to imagine her in that dress 😆 but u know what i like this refreshment in ur ff. kasturi is completely different with so much attitude, man. i loved that. and also, even though robbie belongs a middle class family he wasn't that offended the way she was dressed up instead he was glad to see her. tells us how broad minded he is. i love both of the characters here. yaar hamesha aisa mat chhoda karo hume beech bichale ladkata huya 😆 .
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i got my answer, that robbie too is attracted towards kasturi the way she was during the hockey match.😃

love
harman 😛

Pooja : sach kahaa aapne,.....bhai ho toh aisa! I agree that his current devdas form is hurting our eyes a bit 😆 😆


Thanks Rosy!! 😃 I am glad you liked all the characters and the humor in the part!!! 😃 Sometimes I feel this Robbie is too good to be true!!! 😆
Come back quickly....I will be waiting for you!


Mannu.......rulaane ke liye maaf kar, lekin yeh accha hua ke tujhe apnaa bhai yaad aa gayaa!!! 🤗
Haan.....Robbie is very intelligent!
More than looks I have always paid greater importance to brain and so invariably that will reflect in the characters too!
Thanks for liking it Mannu.......next part Sunday shaam tak post kar doongi!

moon : Thanks a bunch for saying it!!! 😃 I do write one more curently, in a different section and I see that Mannu has already provided the links 😃 (Thanks maanu 🤗 ) Do check them out if you can!


Kay : they sure did 😆 😆 but abhi woh scene khatam nahi hua hai!!! 😉 Aage dekho kya hota hai! 😆
🤣 that was too funny about Robbie's feet!!!! Aur Ajay ke baare mei ghabra mat...abhi abhi koi problem start nahi hoga! 😃

Paddu : I am relying on many memories of mine to write this FF 🤣 🤣 I appreciate your liking the humor. About the Chawla business, he will find out soon. And yes Raunak is a great guy. Sorry.....could not send him to singapore as of now..... 😆
Kasturi beer aur wine dono peeti hai 😆 😆 😆, place ke hisaab seh!!!
Yes I will post one more over the weekend. I think by Sunday afternoon.

Jima.............the dress drescription was specially for you!!! How can I forget that you asked??
Kiss??? Pehle let them fall in love nahi toh yeh baar Kasturi ke sandal Robbie ke gaal pe padengi!!! 🤣

Humaira : Thanks for liking it sweety....next part will be up on Sunday!


Shara : Thanks dear!!! So you say I have learnt it from BT, huh?? 🤣
You will know Ajay's reaction on Sunday!! 😆 😆

Sofia dear............thanks a lot! Raunak is very good but Robbie keeps him at a distance, he tries to be reserved. But I am sure you will enjoy how the characters will grow and mature! 😳 Next part will be up by Sunday! 😃

Harman!!!!Thanks for liking it! As you said, Robbie is the perfect brother!!!
I understand imagining Kasturi is a little touch in that outfit but she is a rich girl who is very fast and who has lot of freedom.
Actually about Robbie..........don't draw a conclusion yet, the next part will clarify his stand about her! Robbie is absolutely attracted to her but the question is will he do anything about it!!! 😃

@Pragz -
Gia is one smart cookie. And loved the reference to being in love with the idea of love 👏 - that was brilliant.
Is Robbie going to end up with a black eye? Isn't it incredible how protective big brother's get? I cannot wait to see how Robbie reacts to Ajay oogling at Alana. So who's Raunak meant for? Gia? Shivani?

I loved the Hockey match scene descriptions - very very vivid.

And I feel for Kasturi for the statue.. I probbaly would've reacted in a similar fashion :)

Keep writing girl :)

Cheers
Anju

@ Pragalbha: I hv read a bunch of ur Ffs...n gotta say...TAKE A BOW...plz...ur a grrrrr8 writer...u had me hooked esp. with kashmakash....n now kaarvan....

luv da fact dat Ka keeps hurting Ro's leg...he he he...in the future she will b really srry for it...n mayb massage it for him....he he he...

altho....i guess it wld hurt a lot

but, keep up da gr8 work...n update soooon!

@pragalbha, fantastic part, the way you brought robbie and kasturi face to face had me amazed.. awesome job👏

okay start with the beginning you had me crying with divya's loss, i luv tennis and the loss was soo close to a win...😭 but i thought the lesson that you were trying to send out was very powerful and hats off too youuu👏

Okay next part is the statue ever going to be fixed? and i luve the kurti look on jeans... great style sense pragalbha...

and ronauk and robbie's entire conversation was class personified i liked how robbie handled himself very professional...and ronauk's attitude was just pefect, not at all condescending or over the top.. came out very genuine...really liked this part alot..

and i wanted to say that you've reminded me of my university days.. so that was a very nice thank youuu. i remember worryin about recruiter coming to campus..😃

and of course the last part was so cute how they were looking at each other, for they are naturally drawn to one another.. their connecting on a level perhaps their not even aware of yet.. but i think kasturi will fall for robbie first or shall i say she will realize she luves robbie first.. thats my prediction lets see what happens, cant wait..

and i luved the ending robbie coming face to face with ajay after giving his sister these sly looks... now please hurry and update.. waiting impatiently..

thanks alot

robina