FF:Love Or Hate: Marriage Fixed : Pg 39 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Dt was really gud.They dd get in truble and u gyv dm d punishment as well.Cnt w8 2 read d nxt part and c wat hapenz.And d dance competition lol.

Thank you and lol...loads will happen at the dance compition!😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
🤣
This part is so funny 🤣 🤣 also very nice part 👏

Tumhari wajah se mere pett meh dard ho raha hai ab mujhe tablet kaun dega 😆

But thanku my dear itna hassane ka 🤗 🤗

Yee bilkul sahi hai ki robbie bander hai 🤣 🤣 my god robbie cafe ko saaf karta huya kessa lagega 🤣 pant fold karke haath meh jhardu 🤣 🤣

ab dekte hai ki yee dono couple dance karte hai yaa drama 😆

Hey shef jaldi se likho yaar am waiting 😛

manpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sahib29

🤣
This part is so funny 🤣 🤣 Really? also very nice part 👏 Aw...thanx

Tumhari wajah se mere pett meh dard ho raha hai Sachi?? ab mujhe tablet kaun dega 😆 Sorry, main waha nahin hoon..na...agar hoti toh main dediti!😆

But thanku my dear itna hassane ka 🤗 🤗 Anytime!

Yee bilkul sahi hai ki robbie bander hai 🤣 🤣A cute bandar though...I always had a soft conner for bandarss...especially like Robbie!🤣 my god robbie cafe ko saaf karta huya kessa lagega 🤣 Just imagine!😆pant fold karke haath meh jhardu 🤣 🤣 Actually, agar tum socho...toh phir..woh bahut cute lage ga!😆

ab dekte hai ki yee dono couple dance karte hai yaa drama 😆 Um..todha drama todha dance!😉😆

Hey shef jaldi se likho yaar am waiting 😛 Acha..ok

manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
Part 5 comming in about 1 hour.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85

Part 5 - RoKa fight!!

While in classes, Kasturi avoided catching Robbies eye and quietly went to all her classes. But during every single class that was left, she cursed, cursed under her breath to not make guys like Robbie anymore. She cursed Robbie.

R to herself: Khud toh maara aur saath mein mujhe bhi marwa diya!
Voice: Oh, what did u think? I would let you go that easily? No..no..no

K turned around to find Robbie on the seat behind her and that he had wispered that into his ears.

(K angry): You?? How dare you?
R: Just chill. It won't be bad after all.
K: Bad? You say Bad but it will be the WORST days of my life!!
R: Just take chill pill!

And by this time, Kasturi was on the full swing of spasing at Robbie.

K: Caferteria tak to tik tha but dancing? And that too with a bandar like you??? No way!
R: Who are you calling a bandar? Can't you see such a handsome guy standing infront of you??
(K sarcastically): Oh really? A handsome guy??(Pretends to look): I can't see him anywhere! Can u?? (Turns to look at Robbie): Oh! I can't see him anywhere.
R: Oh just shut it. And for your kind info, I also don't see a beautiful girl sitting in front of me!
K: Oh, but I never said that I was beautiful!! U said it yourself!...And that too..a girl like me!!

This time, K had gotten R right. She had never said that she was pretty. It was him. He had said it. But what could he do?...Kasturi was pretty..she was pretty not because she wore jeans..or anything...but it was her inner beauty and her simlicity that attracted him...her simplicity...and with that, Robbie started staring at Kasturi in the same manner as SRK did to Shushmita Sen in Main Hoon Na. Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga song is what Robbie starts to sing...out loud...

Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Jaise khilta gulaab
Jaise shaayar ka khwaab
Jaise ujli kiran
Jaise van mein hiran
Jaise chaandni raat
Jaise naghme ki baat
Jaise mandir mein ho ek jalta diya
Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Robbie sings the song out loud and keeps on staring at Kasturi.

Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Jaise subahon ka roop
Jaise sardi ki dhoop
Jaise veena ki taan
Jaise rangon ki jaan
Jaise balkhaaye bel
Jaise lehron ka khel
Jaise khushboo liye aaye thandi hava
Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Kasturi is unable to make out what the heck Robbie was doing and keeps on staring at Robbie with her mouth wide open.

Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Jaise naachta mor
Jaise resham ki dor
Jaise pariyon ka raag
Jaise sangdal ki aag
Jaise sola sighaar
Jaise rasti fuhaar
Jaise aahista aahista badhta nasha
Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga .

RoKa keep on staring at each other unable to make out what had just happened. Suddenly, Tanya, one of Robbies girlfriends...well say ex girlfriend snaps RoKa out of their dream. RoKa were shocked at to what had just happened and look around to find, evry single person in that class, staring at each RoKa. RoKa felt embarssed and instead of the word 'Sorry' comming out of their mouth...

RoKa: Did we kiss?

And looked at each other disgustingly.

Tanya shook her head. RoKa had a sigh of relief but not for long as K and R started to fight again.

K: Bandar, what the heck did u think that u were doing??
R: Chipkali, I was doing nothing!
K: Why the heck did u call me chipkali??
R: Because...You are one!
K: Find than, than u are no less than a clown in a circus either!
R: U called me a clown so than...u are a beegi billi!
K: Monkey!
R: Witch!!
K: Chipkalay!
R: Bandri!
K: What? Bandri??
R: Oh..well...that is a female monkey!
K: What??? Fine...Chimpanzee
R: Bili!
K: Billey!

Tanya who was getting rather annoyed at the convo, was turning bright red seeing Robbie paying more attention to Kasturi and not even noticing her.

Tanya: STOP IT!!

RoKa stop and stare at Tanya.

Tanya gets angry and goes near Kasturi and starts saying things to her.

T: What do u think of yourself??
K: Why? What happened?
T: What do you have that I dont? Why does Robbie pay more attention to you and not me??
K: Look...there is nothing like that between me and Robbie.
T: Oh yes! That is what u always say b***h! You look like something from the outside but from the inside...u are a big w***e! U pretend like you don't care about Robbie but from the inside I know what u want! U want Robbie to notice you! You stupid simple type girl!

And by this time, Kasturi had tears trickling down her eyes, and Robbie could no more bear Kasturi being this insulted and tears rolling down her eyes and he gets angry. Ro gets angry and gets up. Robbie than stands up to face Tanya and gives her a tight slap!

*SLAP*

R: Stop it! Kasturi had no fault in this! And its not her who is the b***h but you! Yes Tanya! U are the real b***h! And you know what...you what I like about Kasturi that u don't have...I like Kasturi bcz she is different from u all...u all and especially you Tanya who can do anything to get my attention! Kasturi has a simplicity..that attracts me towards her..that u...will...or never have! Get it?? Now GET OUT!

Tanya runs out of the classroom and Robbie walks over to Kasturi. Kasturi by this time had tears running down her eyes. Robbie touches Kasturis hand and feels bad for her. Kasturi than gets up from her chair and gives Robbie a tight hug. Robbie hugs K back. And after that, Kasturi runs away crying.

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago
-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
Come on...this part cant be this bad...can it??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87

First i want to hug u 🤗🤗 cos u give us a lovely part 😳

Hey dear wonder ful part 👏

I really liked this part cos ismeh fight ,love,aur care sab hai 😳😳😳

Fight toh tum janti ho ki ek dusre ko kis tarah billy aur bander bol rahe hai 😆😆😆

Love aur care mujhe last part meh nazer aaya tanya ke bura bhalla bolne par robbie ne ek kass ke lagaya 😳😆😆

They both are confused 😆 but they love each other 😳

Thanku dear cute and lenthyyy part post karne ka 😳

ab jaldi se next part am waiting 😛

manpreet

Edited by sahib29 - 17 years ago
-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
^^K...but dont forget to comment aswell!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
Awesomeeeeeeee lovee the lovebetween them soo cute and robbie liek shahrukh soo cute!! U GO GIRL!!

uPDATE SOON!!
GIA
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90

One thing i understood from ur FF is, both RK are going to land up in one biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig mess full of confusion.... In other words, They are soon going to become confused souls😆😆😆

I cud imagine Robbie having tat saxophone wenever he sees Kas just like how SRK had in Main hoon naa🤣

luved the song selection but didnt go well with the rock star image of Robbiee... Ooohh wait, Robbie is still a student now naa.... Sooo chaltha hai then😳😳😳

And iam verymuch thankful to Tanya now😆. Becos of her RK hugged tightlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 😆😆😆.. Gud work Tanya, Do something useful like this always😉😆

Continueee sooooooon shiff, cant wait to read the story now😳

P.S: Thank u for the lengthyyyyyy parts😳

Krishi

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