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Posted: 17 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: white star

veryyy nice part hun 😛
ahhh feel sooooo sry for kasturiii 😭 poor kasturi 😭 robbieee😡
okkk i wont say continue soon cuz ur obviouly gonna post it tomm 😳

n heyyy u named r ff.... i really liked named of ur ff😳



after a great search i got thhis name yea i like it tooooooooooo😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
misselegent thatz a awesome job.. keep it up.. wonderful mindblowing... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: misselegent

oh thanx guys
haan ekta tu sirf viewers ko sarati rehti hai paka deti hai rona dhona dikha ker
yaar but i m feeling bad only three reders my hardwork is just being waste bcoz i havn't hav many readers
plz read my ff
its so necessary for me
dil toot gaya mera update kerne ka mann nahin ho raha ab

but manpreet n white star ur too gud ur my regular readers

😊 😊 😊

@manveenjan welcum to my ff

ahh dear dont worry im sure veryy soon u will have lots of and lots of readers... u've just started writing it so it will take time for pple 2 notice ur ff ...n bout me haha i will always be there 2 read n comment 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#24

Arre yaar, y do u worry😛.. U will get many readers as the time goes and as the story progresses..

So continue with the story and u ll get ur share of readers😉

Coming to ur FF, Iam luving the story so far.. And i really want to see how u r going to make RK fall in luv😆😆😆

Soooo Continueee sooooooooooooon😳

Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@T_fari thanx for liking

@white_star yaar yah sorry yesterday i was shattered to see my ff lonely lonely but no its ok it will progress so writting new part 😊

@krishi thanx dear for reading my ff yah i got it it will progress soon
Edited by misselegent - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
part 4

next day in ss mansion

kasturi asks d servant robbie sir uthe k nahi
servant:nahin abhi tu nai
ka:oh abhi tak nai uthe main unhain uthaon (usko kal ka yaad ata hai kis tarah ro ne usk saath misbehave kia )
ka:kia karoon unk room main tu nai jaongi kia karoon meeting bhi buhut zaroori hai yes i got an idea ye theek rahe ga ink liye she had a mischievous smile on her face

ro room
roobie kharrate mar ker so raha hai achanak alarm bajta hai robbie uthk band kerta hai phir doosri side ka bajta hai use band kerta hai phir ek bed k neeche bajta hai phir sare kamre main jaga jaga k alram bajne lagte hain ro gusse main uthta hai uar hall ki taraf jata hai

in hall
devi:kasturi beta tumne robbie ko uthaya
ka:mam bas uth hi gaye honge gay ate hi honge
devi:beta wo aise nahin uthega pata hai na kitna sone ka shok hai use
ka:in mind mam aisa intizam kerk ai hoon k unk tu phooppa bhi uthain gay
ro:mom mom yeh kia hai
devi:kia kia hai
ro:mom mere kamre main itne sare alarm kis ne lagae hain
devi:look at ka n got it its kas trick to awake him she has a smile on her face toooooooo
ro: mom aap hans rahi hain aur mere dimagh main dard ho gaya ek ek alarm ko band kerte kerte
ka:ka apni hasi ko qabu main nai rakh pati she laughed loudly
ro samajh jata hai ye ka ki harkat hai
ro:oh ab main samjha ye kis ne kia hai
ka:sir apko uthane ka yehi ek tarika tha
ro:tum samajhti kia ho apne ap ko
ka:sir ab uth gaye hain tu tayyar hi ho jayain we r getting late
devika ye sab khamoshi se daikh rahi hoti hai wo tu kuch ur hi soch rahi hai
ro:oh sht up bas buhut ho gaya tum apna hisam chukta karo mom ab main ise bardasht nai ker sakta mom ab bas i fed up
ro: mom main ap se keh raha hoon kahan kho gayi hain
devi:haan haan kia
ro:mom ab is kasturi ko main ek minute bardasht nahin ker sakta is ko nakial kion nai detin
devi:ro bas ab koi behais nahi jao aur tayyar ho jao tum late ho rahe ho
ro:but mom...........
devi:robbie
ro ki mom k age ek nahin chalti so wo ka per ek chubhti nazar daal k chala jata hai
ka:ok mam main chalti hoon office k liye
devika:ok beta jao
hmmmmmm ye main ne pehle kion nai socha isse achchi larki tu robbie ko mil hi nahin sakti haan she is perfect per woh gadha nahin manega use kia pata asli heera ki qadar hmmmmmmmm usko manana hi parega
nandani came bhabhi kia soch rahi hain
devi:nandani main khamakha idher udher lerkian dhoondh rahi thin aur heera tu hamare paas hai
nan:ji bhabhi kaun
devi:kasturi kaisi rahe gi robbie k liye
nan: are wah wo tu buhut hi achi larki hai per kia robbie mane ga
devi:usse baat kerk daikhti hoon
nan :bhagwan kare ro man jaye
devi:hmmmmmmmmmmmm manega kaise nahin manega

at night devika ro k room main jati hai
devi: beta r u busy
ro:mom apke liye tu main free hi free kahye koi khas kam tha
devi:ro main aj jo tumse mang rahi hoon tum inkar nahin karoge
ro:mom keh bhi dain curiosity kion phela rahi hain
devi:tum shadi ker rahe ho
ro:mom phir se start ker diya ye topic
devi:beta aj nahin mana karoge i m serious
ro:mom main abhi ready nahin hoon main apko bata chuka hoon
devi:main haan sunna chahti hoon aur lerki bhi main ne pasand kerli hai
ro:wah mom main shadi nahin kar raha aur ap lerki bhi daikh chuki hahaahahaha
devi:robbie mujhe tum buhut dookh de rahe ho
ro:got emotional mom ap bhi tu kaisi batain kar rahi hain
devi:ro mujhe lagta tha k tum mujhse buhut pyar kerte ho
ro:wo tu main kerta hoon us main koi shak
devi:tu uska saboot bhi to do
devi:meri akhri khuwaish samjh lo
ro:mom plz ok bolain kaun lerki chuni hai main tayyar hoon shadi k liye ap se barh ker tu kuch nahin hain na
devi:buhut khush ho jatio hai mujhe pata tha tum meri baat nahin talo gay
ro:maan kaun hai wo jisko mere maththe bandh rahi hain ap
devi:achvha wada karo jaise shadi k liye maan gaye ho waise hi is larki ko bhi kabool ker laina
ro:mom bata rahi hain ya
devi:beta daikho ye larki jo main ne tumhare liye chuni hai tum uski khubsurati na daikh pao shayad abhi per beta main door tak ki soch rahi hoon wo hi tumko sambhal sakti hai
ro:mom bol bhi din
devi:wo 'kasturi' hai
robbie pe tu jaise koi pahar hi gir gaya ho 'wat' kasturi mom apko kia ho gaya hai no mom ye nahin i hate her so much aur ap ne use meri marzi k bagair secretary banaya maine kuch nahin bola but ye shadi aur ka se never mom apne dimagh se ye khayal nikal dain no never he leaves
devika:beta main bhi tumhari maan hoon shadi tu tumhari kasturi se hi hogi

devika nandani k room main jati hai
nan:bhabhi ap koi kaam tha
devi:han buhut zaroori
nan:ji bolain
devi:ro ne mana ker diya ka se shadi se
nan:mujhe tu isi baat ka dar tha ab kia hoga
devi:kuch nai shadi tu ka se hi hogi
nan:kaise
devi:nan apko mera saath dena ho gaek natak main
nan:ji bolain
devika sara plan batati hai
nan:nahin bhabhi ye buhut ziada ho jayega ro pareshan ho jayega
devi:ye zaroori hai issi se wo age ki parishanion se bach jayega
nan:ok bhabhi ap jaisa theek samjhain
devi:tu bas theek hai plan ka 1st step ro ko phone karo
nandani makes a call to robbie
ro:ji aunty kia hua
nan:crying beta bas na poocho k kia hua
ro:pareshan ho jata hai aunty bolain
nan:beta devika bhabhi ko heart attack aya hai tum jaldi se ghar a jao
ro:kia kaise main abhi ata hoon
robbie jaldi ghar pohanchta hai
devi ne dushant purushatam raunak ariv vikas sabko apne plan main shamil kar lia tha
ro:mom apko kia hua mom ankhain kholain
puru:beta sambhalo apne apko
ro:mom kuch bolain mom plz plz
devika ankhain kholti hai
dev:beta achcha kia k tum a gaye main ne tumko ek nazar daikh liya bas ab aram se mar sakoon gi
ro:mom kaisi baatin kar rahi hain
dev:kia karoon ji k tum mujhe ek bahoo aur poton ki khushi nahi de sakte kia karoon ye bore zindagi ji k
ro:mom plz ap theek ho jayain ap jo bolain gi jis se bolain gi main tayyar hoon usse shadi kerne k liye
devi:sach bol rahe ho
ro:haan mom
devi:bas ab mere ander phir jeene ki umang peida ho gai
ro hugged devika n devika sab ko ankh marti

ab next step kasturi k ghar waloon se baat kerna tha thore din devika aram kerne ka natak kerti ahi k kahin ro ko shak na ho jaye after 1 week she goes to ka house


preview:kasturi is shocked n kaushalya thinking about this proposal .................... in ss mansion preparations for rk marriage starts


somya



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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 devika's plan worked 😆 😆 yayyyyy [:D/] [:D/] [:D/]
ummm wonder how kastur is gonna react 😕
hun waiting for da nxt part 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Somyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Awesome part yaar.. Luved Devika's plan.. I cud imagine Rob;s shocked expression wen Devika told him abt Kas😆😆😆

And Devika is aankh maarofying to everyone, tats soooo sweeetttt😳😆😆

Continuee soooon yaaar... Luving the pace of ur FF👏

Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey ayasha nice part 👏

OMG shaadi ki tayyari bhi shuru ho gayi 😳

yaar tumhari FF meh devika bahut hi aachi hai kaash serial meh bhi itni aachi hoti

wonderful part dear ab next part pard kar batati hoon ki kessa laga 😛

manpreet



Edited by sahib29 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
@manpreet i can understand 😊

@krishi yaar i was laughing while writing the devika's aankh marying scene she looks cute i think yah i luv to write diff diff scenes b/w roka u guys just read it n i m gonna write 😃

@white star yaar kasturi goona say 'no'😕 just wait wat she will do

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