pyar to hona hi tha-part 42 pg 64 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
🤣 hahahahaha 🤣
omgg misselegent dis part was sooo funny 😆 😆 😆
neways i lovvv itt how kasturi gives it bk rob 😛
soo wat if da idea was stolen ..i think ur ff is gonna rock ... it seems really intersating ...n im sure ur ff will be a veryyyy veryyy good 1 😳
n veryy well written hun 👏
lookin farward 😍 n waiting impatientlyy 😳
dooo continue soon hun 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

@misselegent well done, and your fanfiction is very cute, i luved the ending to part 2 way to go and waiting for your nxt part so write sooon please!1!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ...u have a nice thinking power of dialogues and Specially the noke-jhoke..... 👏 👏
wow u r so gud...plz post next part sooon .....I am waiting 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmm ...
just love it ..!!brilliant ..!!
hmm ... chalo abb koi tou daily basis par update kare ga ...!!
hmm ... waitin 4 tomorrow den ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@manpreet i wish real serial main bhi kasturi itni hi aqalmand hoti 😉

@aksn sure next will b great i m writing ritenow

@white star oh thanx yaar for appreciating thtas funny i know

@robina thanku yah updating 😃

@parth garewal oh thanx for liking my dialogues thanx thanx

@robinblue91 yah i update it regularly bcoz i hate readers waiting n waiting so enjoy another part is coming guys


note:
u can tell me wat u want in this ff i will make the scenes n write it so pla inform me about ur likes n dislikes n future story tooooooooooooooooo
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 3

At SS mansion
RA is standing in a hall area kasturi came n ask raunak sir aap aj office nahi aye mujhe ap se sign karani thi buhut zaroori
ra:oh haan kasturi mujhe urgent folk studio jana par gaya tha tum ne inform nahin kia tu main office ka ek chakkar tu laga hi leta
ka:sir mujhe idea tha k app kahin zaroori kaam main phans gaye honge tu main ye file ghar le ain thin sign karane k liye
ra:u r so smart kasturi
ka: wo tu main hoon hi
ro: interfered n say making bad face wo tu main hoon hi
ra:oh aj tera moon kion sara hua hai dude
ro:haan aj subah subah is kasturi ka thobra jo daikh liya tha
ka:feel bad
ro pani lene k liye kitchen main jata hai
ra asked kasturi:ise kia hua
ka:ra ko sab kuch batati hai
ra zor se hansta hai aur ka n ra tali marte hain peeche morte hain aur stunned bcoz robbie sab sun leta hai
ro:u u uuuu tum ne mujhe fool banaya main tumko nahin choron ga he wsa about to throw that glass but ra stopped him n said kia ker raha hai ro pagal ho gaya hai
ka:scared wo tu wahan se bhag jati hai
ra;cool down cool down tumhare bhale k liye to kia tha
ro:yaar ye do kori ki larki dimagh pe charhti ja rahi hai iska kuch kerna hi parega

in ro room robbie is busy in flirting sonya( sonya buhut khush kismat hai k robbie aur uska pyar 3 din ka ho chuka hai pehle wali fs 1 ya do din hi chla patin thin)
ra: abe robbie yaar mujhe teri help ki zaroorat hai
ro:oh oh chup yaaar sonya hai phone per
ra:who is sonya............. sonia gandhi
ro:yaar sonya main tumko abhi baad main phone kerta hoon is duffer se nipat loon haan bol kia mara ja raha hai
ra:ye kon thin
ro:kaahn thin
ra:haan wohi tu pooch raha hoon kon thin
ro:kaahn thin
ra:robbie oye bata kaun thi
ro:oh kia bataon raunak she is so hot sexy n bomb item piece hai ekdum
ra:not interested in this discussion chal chal
ro:really ra ager tu isko daikh le na tu ye sadho ka roop chor ker tere ander bhi ek emran hashmi jag jayeaga
ra:mujhe tu dor hi rakho in sexy nat khat hasinaoon se tu hi paal inko
ro:haan main kisk samne sir phoor raha hoon haan tu to mama's boy hai jahn shadi fix kerdain gi tu sir jhoka k qurbani ka bakra ban jayega
ra:acha acha bas
ra:yaar i need ur help
ro: kia help?
ra:mujhe urgently teri car chaye
ro; hain car? kion
ra: yaar bas sawal na ker key do
ro:per raunak meri jaan jahan tak main tumko janta hoon tumko tu sports car main koi interest nahin hai tu kiko impress kerne ka hai
ro:tu sawal buhut poochta hai yaar de na
ra:koi lerki werki ka chakkar hai kia
ra:yaar ab de bhi de aur ye sawal phir kabhi me getting so late do na
ro;ok rok lata hoon
ye duffer kia kar raha hai mujhse kia chupa raha hai khair pata laga hi longa abhi de deta hoon bachche ko chabi
ra; thanx robbie i luv u
ro:plz plz i m not that kind of guy mere liye larkian hi kafi hain
ra:ohf ho ur too much
ro:n u r magarmuch(sorry guys its a bad joke sorry bear it)
ka enters in the robbie's room n says robbie sir wo a///////////////////////////
ro:no no not again he didn't listen wat kasturi saying he make a call to sonya n totally neglected kasturi
ka:ab ye tu nahin sunne wale mujhe inke concert ka sab set kerna tha
she knows robbie is not listening but she says 'bye sir' afterall sanskari jo tehri

at kasturi home:
kasturi returns to home kaushalya says a gayi beta buhut thaki hui lag rahi ho
dada ji:puttar idher ao humare pass bhi baith jaya karo kabhi jab se ye job shob ja rahi hoo hamare liye waqt hi nahin tumhare pass
ka:nahin dadaji aisi koi baat nahin hai bas masroofiat itni h jati hai na tu
dadaji: kaushalya bachchi ka khayal rakho daikho kaise ankh k niche gadhdhe par gaye hain bichari itna kaam kerti hai
ka:nahin daadji wo bas aj kal concert per kaam chal raha hai is liye bas warna tu koi problem hi nhain hai
dadaji:beta khana peena achcha rakho apna
navneet:ji dada ji kasturi di ne sab note ker liya hai ab tu unhe jane dain
daadji:oh chup badmash zaroor koi kaam hoga didi se jo unki bari khatir ki ja rahin hain
navneet:dadaji apko kaise pata chala
dadaji:beta dada hoon ye b......... tanu interrupted
tanu ye baal hum ne dhoop main safaid nahin kiye humne hana dadaji yehi kehna chahte the na ap
ka nav n tanu laughed n dadaji chal badmash buhut taiz ho gain hain ye sab kaushalya puttar kaushalya was laughing toooo
navneet:di ap mere saath kamre main ayen na
ka:cahlo
ka nav n tanu entered in the room nav says:di mujhe thore paison ki zaroorat hai wo college main friends sab picnic ja rahe hain tu main bhi jana chahti hoon
ka:bauji se poocha aur maan se
nav :haan pooch liya per main un se paise nahin lena chahti
ka:main de dongi khush
nav:oh di ur so sweet
ka: achcha achca bas ab makhkhan na laga

At SS mansion

robbie in devika's room
ro:maan ab apki tabiat kaisi hai
devi:hmmmmmm ab behter hai per sahi tu tab hi hogi jab nanhe nanhe robbie ko apne hatoon main na le loon unko paloon na
ro:mom ap bhi na wahin atak gain hain aur bachchon k liye shadi kerne ki kia zaroorat hai wo to
devi:chal badmash ro plz maan jao na meri akhri khuwahish hi samajh lo
ro:mom agar apne ainda aisi baat ki to main ap se kabi baat nahin karonga apko nahin pata ap mere liye kia hain he hugged her n say 'i luv u mom '
ka enters in d room n ask mam apki tabiat kaisi hai
devi:hmmm bas zinda hoon ji rahi hoon (she wants to get robbie emotional but wo bhi aera hai ek dum uski dum to terhi ki terhi hi hai)
ka:ji kion
devi:achcha choro ye sab ye batao robbie ke concert ka kaam kaisa ja raha hai
ka:mam woh woh.......... she knows agar usne bataya k robbie sir ki kam chori n sonia sahiba k khumar main robbie saab ne concert ka kuch practice nahin ki hai
devi:kia hua kasturi batao sab theek tu hai na
ro: mom ap aram karein sab ho jayega
devi: ka main ne tumse kuch poocha hai na aur robbie tum chop raho
ka: woh mam robbie sir bilkul bhi interest nahin lay rahe hain is concert ko le kar woh bilkul bhi theek kaam nahin ker rahe hain rehersal start nahin ki financers se bhi abhi meeting set nahin hui kasturi ek hi sanns main sab kuch bol deti hai aur wo robbie ki taraf dekhti bhi nahin hai
devi:ro ye main kia sun rahi hoon
ro:mom ap bhi kis ki batoon main a rahi hain ye tu aise hi shikayatain laga rahi hai isko tu bas mauka chaye mujhese badla lene ka he looked her angrily kasturi ghabra jati hai
devi:ro bas karo main bhi tumko buhut achche tarah se janti hoon mujhe ab koi shikayat ka mauka nahin milna chaye aur kasturi tum mujhe har robbi ki harkatoon se agah kara kario robbie tum kia ker rahe ho tumko nahin paat ye concert kitna important hai tumahre liye aur agar tum mujhko khush daikhna chahte ho tu ye concert superhit hona chahye
ro:mom ab bas ap daikhiye ye concert blockbuster hit hoga i promise u
devi: hmmmmmmmm best of luck
ro achcha maan ab ap aram karein main rehersals pe ja raha hoon
ka:ok mam cu
ro kasturi per ek chubhti hui nazar dalta hai aur room se baahr nikal jata hai kasturi devika mam k room se nikal kar staircase per ati hai than sumone pulls her n put her against d wall its ro sir ye ap kia ker rahe hain
ro:buhut maza a raha hoga na tumko mom se meri shikayat laag ker
ka:sir plz leave me ur hurting me
ro:hurt aur jo tum ne meri mom ko hurt kia wo kuch nai
ka:sir main unko kuch nai baat rahin thin unhon ne mujhe force kia baatne per
ro:oh shut up u middleclass girl
ka:sir plz leave me its hurting ah ah plz sir she is about to cry bcoz her hand got all red she felt like shouting its really hurt her
she just push him back n runaway
ro:oh my god ye mera ghussa bhi na he feel bad wat he was doing to kasturi but jaldhi wo isi laiq hai maere matters main kion ghusti hai aj ka sabaq achcha raha usk liye ab mere matter main ghusne se pehle das baar tu zaroor soche gi he had an evil smile on his face
kasturi mansion se bahar ati hai dorti hui road per nikal jati she is so scared of robbie her hand is in pain she wants to cry but cant she is on road robbie sir ekdum janwar hain unko larkion se baat kerne ki bilkul tameez nahin hai main yahan job kion ker rahi hoon main yaahn ab nahin aongi buhut bura kia hai aj unhoon ne wo insaan kehlane k laiq nahin hain oh buhut dard ho raha hai achank usk zehen sab batain ati hai bauji ka ilaj karana hai aur aur mam devika bhi tu mujh per kitna yakeen kerti hain nahin main ye job nahin chor saktin aur robbie sir tu yehi chahte hain k main ye job chor doon aur wo ye sab isi liye kertye hai no kasturi u hav to b so srong n face this word wid courage bas ab main nahin darongi robbie sir jo chahe kar lain

kasturi enters in the house n hide her red hand koi pooch na le ye kia hua kasturi sab ko pranam kerk jaldi se apne room ki taraf jati hai kionk agar kisi ne ye nishan daikha tu mushikil ho saki thi aur agar inko bhanak bhi par gayi k robbie ye sab kerta hai tu naukri tu koi kerne nai daiga nahin main kisi ko pata nahin lagne dongi is bare main
maan:kasturi betra khana to kha lo
ka:nahin maan bhook nahi hai main kha k ai hoon
ka jaldi se apne room main jana chahti hai k koi uska red nishan na daikh le
maan:putar ek cup doodh hi pi le
ka:nahin maan bilkul jaga nahin hai
ka enters in her rooom n marham lagati hai apne haath per aur jaldi se bister main ghoos jati jaise k so rahi hai take koi is k bare main sawal na kare

next part tomorrow abhi ye enjoy karne ka😉😃
Edited by misselegent - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
Nice part dear 👏 👏 👏

yaar tumhara robbie toh kastu ko bahut pareshan karta hai ...pagal kahi ka 😡 itna nahi pata ki kastu hi future wife hai 😳 😉 😆

ok next part likho am waiting

manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
#18

veryyy nice part hun 😛
ahhh feel sooooo sry for kasturiii 😭 poor kasturi 😭 robbieee😡
okkk i wont say continue soon cuz ur obviouly gonna post it tomm 😳

n heyyy u named r ff.... i really liked named of ur ff😳

Edited by white star - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
i lv d prt poor kasturi 😭 robbie is so wierd 😡
ekta se better to tum hi ho vo to humesha ending mai hi suspence creste kar dati hai aur us ke serial mai rona dhona ke ilava aur kuch hai hi nahi tumhera ff mai kuch alag hi baat hai 😆
Edited by manveenjaan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
oh thanx guys
haan ekta tu sirf viewers ko sarati rehti hai paka deti hai rona dhona dikha ker
yaar but i m feeling bad only three reders my hardwork is just being waste bcoz i havn't hav many readers
plz read my ff
its so necessary for me
dil toot gaya mera update kerne ka mann nahin ho raha ab

but manpreet n white star ur too gud ur my regular readers

😊 😊 😊

@manveenjan welcum to my ff

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