Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 37

great part but plzz jaldi se next part update karo tum bohat tarpati ho yaar aur misunderstandibg dor karo ekta na bano just kidding awesome part 👏

oooppssyyy 😛
i actually forgot 2 comment 😆
well sonu wat 2 say .... u always make us wait but than make us think tht it was all worth it 😳
those 2 looonnngggg parts were just fabelious 👏
so now kasturi is getting more jealous day by day 😆
n tht devil devika's plan is actually workin on her 🤢 😭
welll we just hav 2 wait for da union of rob/kas in ur ff 😍
as it is sabar ka pal metah hota hain 😳 rememba it better be metah in ur ff😆
ok hun do continuee soon plzzzz 😭
lookin farward n waiting impatiently for da nxt part 😳
lovvv uuu n ur ff sonuuuu 🤗

read parts 14 & 15 wowwwwwwwwww
both parts were awesom .cute ,humourous ,romantic,emotional ...ekdum masaledaar parts 👏
wow i luved kiku's dialogue --Bandit queen ka sequel

Lalita pawar aaj nirupa Roy kaise ban gayi??
😆 😆 😆

d scene where R maks kas eat was so cuteeeeeeeeee 😳
yeh Devika kabhi nahin sudharegi god i want 2 kill dis female puru rtly said--devika Robbie ko note chapne wali machine ki tarah istemal karna band karo… uski apni ek zindagi hai

wow kas ke bday ki shuruwat to acchi thi brilliant scne absolutely luved it ,R ke control ke kya kehne 😉
Kas holdin her ears & givin a kiddish luk wow i remember d ols RK days.
Anjali-Raunak ka track ;raunak ji abhi tak anjali ke dil ki baat nahin samjhe suchmuch duffer hai yeh.

luved nandini's dialogue ;kas shud follow her advice ..
alana-devika 😡 dis females dey just dnt hav heart ..jane do inke baare mein jitna kam kahen utna accha..

dear plz ek cute romantic scene RK ka likhna next part mein;misunderstandings jaldi door ho jaye..


SORRY 4 d delay ;a genuine sorry

Sonia, Sonia, Sonia!!!!!

Yaar, rulaa dogi kya??? Uff misunderstandings galore!!!

I felt very very bad for RK, I genuinely did!!! But what else can happen with somebody like Devika around?????

They know they love each other and they can feel the other one's love too but still so many issues!!!! But honestly Sonia, I am getting impatient with Robbie's character in your FF!!! Maybe because I do not like men who are so scared of everything, personally. Arre, why is he so scared to just let her know that he loves her??? Why does he think that he will hurt her and that she will leave him???
Somehow that explanation does not make sense to me.

But you have done an absolutely great job of bringing thr emotions out so well!!!!!!
And Devika and Alaana's characters are just like what I see in the serial!!

Great job!!!!! Please post the next part ASAP.........

And Krishi ki bacchi 😡 , mere FF mei you wanted Robbie to always be romantic but in Sonia's you were happy to note that he controlled himself in the necklace scene????? 😡

Hey Sonia

Now I kno u gave us a bonus wif two parts but...(here it comes) wen's tha next update 😃 😃 😃
U mite be busy or somethin...but u have us hooked darl!!!
So wen u get the time...😳 😳 😳

and in the meantime, i'll just reread it again LOL
Preetz

next part kaha hai jaldi post karo na

soniaaaaaaa 😡 😡 😡 r u still alive or 🤢
welll dunno about u but we all turned into a 🤢 in waitin for ur nxt part 😉 jks jks 😉
last time u posted ur parts was on 13th oct n nowww its 27
hurry up sonia plzzzzzzzz 😭 😳

just read all of your ff and i loved it

Intihaa ho gayi intjar ki 😭

aayi na kuch khaber next part ki 😭

yee mujhe hai yakeen tu next part likhegi 😛

par wajah kya huyiiiiiii delay ki 😭 😭

Kessa laga mera banaya huya song 😳 😆 😆

@white star arre yaar esse mat kaho ki sonu ko kuch ho gaya hai .bhagwan kare essa kabhi kuch na ho yaar actully wo thordi busy hai ...

manpreet

@ Sahib29

Ur hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣
But ur song is perfect!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
I kno exactly wat u mean. Can't wait for da next part 😉 😉

Cheers
Preetz