Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 36

hey sonia i am here with my comments

ok starting with part 12
i loves the cute moments between roka and how kasturi said all those cute words for robbie 😳
and the blouse one, i was laughing so hard by just reading 🤣 i love the submarine surprise it was so cute 😳 😉 and kasturi getting irritated was fun
😆 over all a fantastic part and long too 👏
and the closeness between the two was awesome

Part 13

the beginning conversation was the best
love how kasturi said idiot and both keep on saying funny
things under their breath
also the guy that came to sit beside kasturi was hilarious 😆 😆 btw great idea for doing that, i wish i could see that in real 😆 😆 and kasturi laughing was funny too
the way kasturi and robbie are missing each other was great
the part was well written and was amazing

part 14

it was one of the best ones
love the jealous kasturi and love the birthday wish too from robbie
omg i wonder if someone is in the world who loves somebody so much 😍i would be the luckiest person if somebody wishes me like that 😉 😳 but i hope devika leaves them alone
but the it was a great part


part 15

Yaar itni misunderstandings
😡 chal abb jaldi see onhe ek kar dah
i miss their moments now 😭 😭
please bring them back, i really feel bad for them because of the evil devika

but i know you wrote two parts so you might be tired, but will be waiting and will try to comment
😉 i hope now you are not mad at me of not posting my comments and thanx for the pm
and overall every part was the best 👏
thanx for those cute moments 🤗

yar. it was gr8 ,.

u hv got a gr8 imagination power........i loved d b'day seen most.

but atd same time i'm very much in pain to see them far fr each other .........

devika wid her eyes of evil will not make them live together ...........

plz unite them as early as can i can't see kasturi in pain........

AND AT LAST thanx fr such a gr8 part ........

sonu dear 😃 🤗
finished reading all three parts at one :)
so when will robbie say that he loves Kasturi 😍

sonuuuu
thank GOD u r finally bak ! waited for u desparetly
both parts were amazing
i actually enjoy this misunderstanding i knw its strange as no one liks misunderstanding
but i love her jealousy yaar kasamh se buhat maza aata hai parhne main
keep the good work up and this time itna wait mat karwana
luv ya
rabail

Oyyyyeeee😡, Where is the new part???

How long do u keep us waiting always???😡😡😡

Iam tired of proposing this morchaaa everytime now😆

Krishi

sonia: excellent parts 👏 ......Haiya why dont they just clear their misunderstandings! 😛 sonia your devika is dangerous yaar...she is like slow poison 😆 ! Robbie aur kasturi kab sudhrenge ...dono itna innocent hain ...Robbie has given necklace and wished her and shown her in his own ways that he cares for her...but she still is not sure of his love! teek hain I feel the climax is nearing! 😳

Thanks dear 🤗 and post the next one soon! 😃

u bhut tarpati ho ...!!! 😭
still waitin for da updates

send next part soon plzzzzzzzzzzz

Oyyeeeeee sonu tera saturday sunday kaun se din aata hai 😡 ab jaldi part post kar nahi toh teri kher nahi 😡 hamesha tab part post karti hai jab main busy hoti hoon aur sabse late pard pati hoon

agger tumne kal post nahi kiya toh bach liyo mere se 😡

manpreet

it was a really guuuuuuuuuddddddddddddd part Sonia. i just hope for the best to happen. and all positive thoughts are coming into my mind about the next part. so hurry up. and i really liked the way u wrote both of the parts. lots of ups and down. okay bye. see ya

love
harman 😛