Fanfic- M there for you... last chap pg 17 - Page 15

Originally posted by: shumi.

chapter 22

Dr. Smith. was right, the kasturi you portrayed in your ff is a very special and strong person unlike in the serial 😊 i wanted her to be strong....

when nikhil said Rohan will always be like a son for me...he so sweet 😊

wow naina became the mother of a beautiful girl baby and they decided to call her Pooja.😛 i like the name pooja

aw...nikhil is back home.good to read every thing is going fine now 😃 yeah

i love the excitement of rohan that was allowed to drive Nikhils wheelchair 😆

poor robbie still he was regretting and feeling guilty for not being with kasturi when Rohan was born." he really cannot forgive himself

the way he went down on his knee in front kasturi and confessed him was brilliantly written ⭐️ thank u

rohan was not only sweet and smart too.he proved it by asking robbie Do I get a little brother? 😉

wow finally roka is getting married😛. finally everything is fine😊

i think rohan

was very lucky and exceptional boy to witness his own parents marriage. 😛 oh yeah dint think that

sameer is back again!!!!!!!!! argh!!!!!!!!!!😡 only for sum time😊

Originally posted by: shumi.

again me first 11th time😊

sorry dear...i will be back to you soon😃

yep i am back...😃

umm...they are back home leaning nikhil in the hospital. doctors forced them to leave

nice to see vikram there with them and taking care of rohan. hope every thing will be fine soon.

i can understand the condition of naina...poor girl...😔 she s really stong

aw...so sweet rohan woke up and came down to ask about nikhil...simply adorable😛

Rohan sat on Robbies lap and had fallen asleep!!!!....😍 father son bonding

aw...kasturi sat still hours together and hadn't even moved a bit....i loved her motherly care and concern😃

how would you feel if you were pregnant and your husband might die?" i was trying to figure out officer Cornell in this get up😆 😊😊

God! naina's heath condition is worsening...😔

aw they decided that Rohan should visit Nikhil.that is a master idea.for sure this is going to bring some changes in nikhil's health.

i just loved the way sweet little boy converse with nikhil

wooooo.....i was right.nikhil opened his eyes and he started talking too......u can not imagine how happy i am.yes u were rite....😊

yet another roka's beautiful and intense moment in the park.the way they said i luv u to each other was fantastic😳.glad u liked it

phew...the whole part was like emotional roller coaster ride.uufff...finally i felt relieved to see all three ...naina,kasturi and robbie laughed loud and freely.😃... ur comments are fantastic......

next part will read tomorrow. till then bye😊

Originally posted by: shumi.

chapter 23

(note: i have not mentioned as last chapter 😃) hats sooo sweet of u😊

is nikhil is realy regretting?😕

today nikhil made me feel sorry for him. credit goes to the great writer👏 thank u soooooo much😊

robbie referring kasturi as Mrs. sabarwaal was so sweet.kaash issa serial mai bhi ho tha😍 yeah kaash..

aw...so sweet to know roka is going to have twins soon 😛.

as you said i wish ' Its not the end, there is so much more to come..."

brillient conclusion 👏 👏 👏 thank u soooooo much😊

Originally posted by: shumi.

reserved 😊

will be back later😉

yep i am back without taking much time😃

first of all i would like to thank you for your great work and giving us this wonderful ff. thanks to u for such kind words.... as ma fanfic did not have too many reader i was very disheartened at times but ur comments always made me write more nd encouraged me😊😊

for sure you deserve a big rounds of applaud 👏 👏 👏 thank u sooooooooooo much😊

i have read so many ffs(including mine😉) i must say certainly yours is unique👏 thank uthank u thank u soooooooo much......

yours is the only ff which showed RoKa in western style.western background mixed with western characters.absolutely unique👏

yours is the only ff which was written as if the lead lady kasturi itself is narrating the story.again unique👏

( which made me feel more intense and close to this ff.i can literally feel kasturi's roller coaster emotions.) ur comments r sooooo sweet nd u r sooo sweet to go into the depth of the fic.....

your language flow was unique👏 thank u thank u thank u soooooooo much

your presentation was unique👏

the vocabularies you used were unique.👏

each character of your ff was unique,...rohan,naina,nikhil. vikram emily,tom soniya etc etc...last but not the least sameer.all the characters were well nit-ed.👏 i cant thank u enough for such wonderful words😊

there was no loop holes or bloopers in your ff.👏

the way you wound of the ff with last three parts was wonderful👏.

it was a very small and very very simple ff un like mine , still it was a complete power pack of roka.👏 thank u sweetie😊

it was my pleasure to read your ff.i enjoyed every bit of it.😛 it was my pleasure to read ur comments....

this is the only ff which forced me to read more than once.😃 thats like the best compliment ever....

you know why i always like to catch the first place in your ff ? because your ff caught the first place in my heart and hope will remain for ever😃. oh ma god oh ma god oh god oh ma god.... hw can u be so patient nd write all this for me, i seriously have tears in ma eyes u are so so so sweet😊😊 thank u sooooo much for such lovely words...... m actually goin to show this to ma friends, they laugh at me thinking that i waste ma time writing a fic but they r goin to change their mind reading ur beautiful comments....😊 hw i wish i could meet u in person nd thank u.....😊😊 thank u soooooooooo very much..... luv u muaaaaah:-*

for sure you are a ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Originally posted by: tamannamalik

😊

one more uniquness i forget to add....there is no hindi in your ff

Originally posted by: shumi.

one more uniquness i forget to add....there is no hindi in your ff👏

Originally posted by: tamannamalik

😊

yep coming to my request...