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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: shumi.

hahaha.....me first again 8th time

i am sorry.. long before i read your up date...but i was lazy to comment.sorry again. hey thats perfectly fine no prob plz take ur time to comment i have no probs with it😊 never mind i am going to read again and comment ok😊 thats so sweet of u.....😊

omg! sameer showed his true colour...he called rohan sweety as bloody son😡......yep he deserve a tight slap from kasturi😈. i hate his brutal behaviour me too😊

i love nikhil...he throw Sameer to the ground.love the way nikhil and naina were caring kasturi. they love her alot

oh kasturi want to live separately with rohan
! 😲 she dint want to be a burden na...
wow..rohan is back home 😊 yeah everythin fine with rohan nw😊

sonya's and robbie's past was revealed😃.glad to know that they are not married...and sonya is so sweet she asked kasturi to give a chance to robbie
...i love her character 😛 i dint want too many negative character....

tammana what to say...yet another super duper up date. feel like reading again and again.thanks for u r wonderful up date.😃
thank u sooooo much for such lovely comments i enjoy readin them thanks alot....😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: shumi.

reserved...me second ...😔😊

me second...never mind all izz well😊
oh sonya request for robbie scaring her in her dream😒
love the way how kasturi and naina remembering their sweet old days. glad u liked it....
oh i see naina knows about robbie before hand.great surprise...😃 yeah she did
wow...kasturi want to meet robbie...👏 yeah she wants to give him a chance
arayy yaar yeh vikram uncle baar baar kyun kiss kar raha hai kasturi ko...😉 hey thats a nice idea i can make vikram uncle fall in love with kasturi nd then create a whole drama😊
hahaha...robbie is still thinking that rohan is her boy friend😉 yeah...
ahhh....my sweet heart robbie is crying😭
finally robbe came to know he haa a child...and rohan is his son...the conversation between RoKa is fantastic...enjoy reading it. thank u soooo much😊
fantastic up date👏...it was my pleasure to read it.thank you for the same😊 actually its a pleasure readin ur comments i love them😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: shumi.

reserved 😃 successfully 9th time

hi ishu...look here...me again in first place...
aw... it is so nice to see robbie asking kasturi to forgive him.
he realise his mistake.... finally kasturi confessed that she still loves him. yeah she always loved him😊
i am glad that kasturi told about sameer so that in future there won't be any miss under standing between them. yeah😊
she is right...she need time to explain and convince rohan. but i am sure he will understand her. he will surely understand😊
again! viram kissed her...😉 he he he😊
wow...rohan darling knew about robbie ...😲 he s too smart for his age😊
aw...it is going to be rohan's birthday on saturday yeah😊
robbie looking at his son from the window was a breath taking scene😊 thanks for likin it😊
robbie-rohan first meet was so sweet. they r made for each other😊
wow...naina is pregnant...great news. nw its her turn😊
the chemistry among naina,nikhil,kasturi and rohan was excellent. a perfect family😊
love reading every bit of it.thanks for giving such a delightful up date.keep it up 👍🏼thank u sooooooooo much........😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

Hey hun finally caught up with your FF hey😊 i really missed ur comments glad u read it😊
Wow it is truly amazing! 👏👏👏 I love the way you write the scenes and describe everything..it makes it all seem so real! Smile thank u sooooo much for ur lovely comment 😊
The story is very interesting and yu've portrayed each scene, dialogue and character wonderfully! ⭐️ thank u sooooo very much😊
Aw Rohan is such a sweetheart 😳 but i agree so mature for his age 😆 yeah😊
And yayyyy Robbie and Kasturi's misunderstandings are cleared! nw no more misunderstandin😊
Hmm Sameer seems to be a potential threat in the future 😕 yeah he will cum back.....
Great going hun! 👍🏼
I really enjoyed reading all the parts 😛 thank u soooooo much i had thought that u lost interest in the fic but m really happy to read ur comments😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: ishwariya

hey tammy kya yaar inta chota sa part m so sry.. any way thanks man...........

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awwww at last robbie kasturi confessed there feelings😍...... thanks was waiting for this part... 😃

glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: avggomez

Superb Tamanna thank u so much😊... cant wait for the next update... will update sooon😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Great part

thank u😊
Awww Rohan is such a cutie he is really smart😊
Glad Robbie and Kasturi sorted out their problems yeah they make a lovely couple
Nikhil and Naina are going to have a baby, so sweet yeah😊
Wonder where Sameer is, dont see him giving up so easily na he wont😊
thank u for ur sweet comments keep readin😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
chapter 16
"Bye!!! Thank you for coming!" I called and closed the door behind the last guest.
"Phew, done." I sighed and walked back into the livingroom where Rohan sat, more asleep than awake, next to robbie.
"Ok birthday-boy. Its time to go to bed now." I said lifting him up.
"But Mum! Im 5 now!" he complained.
"Yes, you are, but you are still my son and I say that you are tired." I answered.
"But I want Dad....I mean robbie to bring me to bed. You can come later to give me a good-night-kiss." robbies eyes brightened up and a smile spread over his face.
"Sure I can do that. You just come in about 10 minutes, ok?" he said, taking Rohan from me. I nodded smiling.
"He called him dad." said Nikhil a bit sad.
"Yes, he did. But You will always be his #1. You know what? He told me a few days ago that he doesnt miss to have a father because you are a father to him." Nikhil grinned happy.
"And soon Im really a Daddy." he put his hand on Nainas stomach.
I walked upstairs to Rohans room and was about to knock, when I heard them talk.
"You know what? I think its cool to have you as my dad, still strange, but cool." said Rohan, I was so proud of him.
"But I have a few questions.."
"You can ask whatever you want." anwered robbie with a soft voice.
"Do you love Mum?" I heard robbie sigh.
"I love her more than my life and Im really sorry for not being there for her and you in the last years." he answered honest. I had to smile.
"Will you marry her?" asked Rohan now. I decided to knock.
"Hey you both...ready?" I asked cheerful and came in.
"Yes, sure. I wish you a good night, champ." he stroke Rohans head and got up.
"Good night, honey! I lend down and kissed his cheek. Sleep well." I said, switched off the lights.
"Hes really an angel." said robbie, still standing at the door. I nodded.
"Do you want a drink?" I asked, he shot me a look and smiled.
"That would be great."
We came back to Naina and Nikhil, who sat cuddled together on the couch.
"So, who wants a drink?" I asked in the round.
"Not for me please." said Naina grinning, I raised an eyebrow.
"If I dont know that." robbie shot her a look.
"Oh yes, you dont know it. Naina is pregnant." said Nikhil proud.
robbie congratulated and hugged both.
We talked and laughed the whole evening.
"You know what? Im tired, Ill got to bed, do you come, Nikhil?" asked Naina streching.
"Yes, its late. Good night together."
"Oh robbie, we see you at breakfast." said Naina, robbie shot her a look.
"Me? Why?"
"I thought you would stay over night, its really late...Good, see you and sleep well." she answered smiling and left.
"Uhm...well, seems like Ill stay." said robbie looking unsure at me.
"Yes, seems like. Ill get your bed ready." I said getting up, but he grabbed my hand and held me back.
"Actually Im not tired, I would just sit here with you and talk." he looked up at me.
"Me also..." I answered and sat down next to him. So we talked the whole night about what has happened in our lives in the last 5 years. Somehow I fell asleep cuddled to robbie's chest.

I was woken by a giggle and opened slowly my eyes.
"I hope you slept well." grinned Rohan at me.
"Yes, why?" I asked confused, but then I remembered where I were and jumped.
"Uhm...well..." I began to stutter and blushed.
"We slept really good. Good morning, Rohan." answered robbie, his eyes still closed.
"Morning, Dad. Do you play soccer with me again?" he jumped on the couch.
"Sure, but only if I get a coffee and breakfast." answered robbie tickling him.
I watched them happy, we were like a real little family.

"Morning Emily!" I called as I entered the shop.
"Oh, good morning, kasturi. How are you?" she asked happy.
"Fine, but not as good as you are, I think." I winked at her and she blushed.
"Oh, by the way, there was a call for you. I noticed the number, you shall please call back." she handed me a piece of paper with a phonenumber.
I grabbed the phone and called the number.
"Hello, here is kasturi chawla. You called earlier..." I said after I heard a "Hello"
"Dont think that its over, kasturi. And just dont believe that he gets you like this. You are mine kasturi and Ill come to fetch you." I felt all my blood rushing from my face.
"S...Sameer?" I stuttered.
"Yes, honey. Its me. Beware of me, Ill come soon." with that he hung up.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
chapter 17
I put down the receiver, my heart still racing of fear.
Oh my god, what did he want from me?!
"Are you ok, kasturi? You are so pale." asked Emily a bit concerned, but I only shook my head and forced me to smile.
"Nothing, Im fine. I look for the orders."
I struggled hard to keep my concentration on my work during the day, I was really scared after Sameers call and I had a real strange feeling.

"Mum! Mum! Ive missed you!" called Rohan and came running towards me. I kneeled down and hugged him tight.
"Aw, my baby. I missed you, too." It felt so good to feel him near me. Sameer had called weeks ago and I had almost forgot about it although I knew I had to be careful.
"You wont believe it, we had our sportsday today and I won almost every challenge!" he called excited.
"Really? Im so proud of you!" I gave him a kiss on the cheek.
"That was so great I was even better than Daniel, you know him, he always thinks hes the best because hes taller than me, but today I was better....and then this Sameer offered me to drive me home, but I refused as I dont like him and dad had promised to fetch me..." I froze.
"What did you say?" I asked careful.
"That I was better than Daniel..."
"No no...I mean about Sameer." I shivered at the thought of him.
"Oh, he waited for me and offered me to bring me home. But you know that I dont like him and you also told me always only to go with the one who you told me would come." he explained.
"That was very wise of you, Rohan. You did that very well." I managed to say, got on my feet and looked unsure out of the window.
"Where is your father now?" I asked, pretending to be cheerful.
"Oh, he had to leave, but he said hell be back later." answered Rohan.
I nodded in thoughts.
The phone rang and I answered it.
"Hello, kasturi chawla?" Silence. "Hello?"
"Be aware of me..." said Sameer and quitt the line

"Hey, there you are!" called Naina as she came later into the kitchen. I jumped.
"Gosh, do you have to scare me like that?" I snapped. Naina looked suprised at me.
"Im sorry, I didnt mean to scare you. No reason to snatch." I shot her a guilty look and sighed.
"Sure, Im sorry. Its just, Im a bit nervous today."
"Are you ok, kasturi?" she asked with a big sister expression on her face.
"Yes, Im ok....Really! But what about you? What did the doctor say?" I asked excited as she had just returned from her check up.
"Everything is fine, the baby grows!" she told me proud.
"And, do you know what it is?" I asked courious, but she shook her head.
"No and I dont want to know. I decided that it doesnt matter to me, all that matters is that its healthy, right?" I grinned.
"Im so proud of you...right."
"Hey, Im the one whos 2 months older, dont be proud of me." we giggled.
The doorbell rang and I jumped again.
"Are you really ok?" asked Naina now.
"Ill get it!" called Rohan, but I ran out of the kitchen.
"No, let me get it!" I screamed in panic and pulled him from the door away.
"kasturi?! What is with you?" called Naina shocked as she had seen the scene.
"Nothing...its just..." I tried to explain and opened with a fast beating heart the door.
"Hey my beauty. Whats up? Do I miss a party?" robbie grinned at me. I was so relieved that I fell into his arms.
"Thank god its you." I whispered with misty eyes.
"Hey hey, Im also happy to see you."joked robbie my whole body trembled.
"kasturi what is with you?" he asked now and looked concerned at me.
"I dont know, she pulled me away from the door like a crazy person." complained Rohan.
"Umm, Naina..." robbie shot her a pleading look with a wink at Rohan.
"Sure. Come on Rohan. I make a hot chocolate for you, ok?" they went into the kitchen.
robbie took my hand and pulled me up into my room where he sat me down on a chair.
"kasturi, what is with you? What happened?" he asked kneeling down in front of me. The tears still ran down my cheeks.
"Im so sorry for my behaviour, I was just so scared." I apologised.
"Scared of what?" asked Raj alarmed. I tried to control my voice but it was impossible.
"Sh...Im here." said robbie hugging me, I clang onto him like a child, my body still trembled.
"Im so afraid, robbie. Its because of Sameer, he called me a few weeks ago and threatend me and today he wanted to fetch Rohan from the sportsday and then he called me again and told me to be aware of him....Im afraid, robbie. What if he does anything to Rohan...or you?" I hugged him again.
"Why didnt you tell me earlier?" he asked mad.
"I almost forgot about it. Im so sorry." he comforted me.
We decided to go downstairs for dinner to the others after I had calmed down. robbie brought Rohan into bed and we all settled down in the livingroom.
"Ok, Sameer is threatening kasturi, he even tried to fetch Rohan from the kindergarden today. We need to do something." said robbie into the silence. Naina and Nikhil jumped.
"I told him Ill kill him if he ever comes near you again." said Nikhil with clinched teeth.
"Thats why you freaked out." said Naina in thoughts, I nodded.
We decided that I should go to the police the next day to make a report against Sameer.
"Ok, its late and were tired. Good night." said Naina and walked with Nikhil upstairs.
"I think its time for me to go home." said robbie getting up, but I held him back.
"Can you stay over night? Im too afraid to be able to sleep." I asked shy, he looked at me, then he nodded.
"Sure, Ill sleep here on the couch."
I shook my head, grabbed his hand and pulled him upstairs into my room. He looked irritated at me.
"kasturi, but..."
"Please stay here...with me." I begged with a small voice.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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me first second time.....
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hey that was a wonderful part...
👏👏👏

rohan called robbie dad.. man that would be happiest day in robbie's life😳😍

but i wonder y kasturi did n ot let him answer for rohan's question
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gr8 parts tammy.... gud work
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