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missindia26 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

That was such a sweet update Thank you 😳

Thanx for the PM No problem 😊

Cant wait to read more Thanks again 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Chapter 28 to 37
TJ!!!🤗 m back again after so loong!!=P lol
ur FF is reali amazing man!!👏⭐️ I m lovin reading it!!
lol Robbie locked Kasturi in the bathroom , bt the dinner fing was so cute n then Robbie singing 'mera dil jis dil pe fida hai' was reali sweet!!😛😃😳
haha Kasturi wetted her n Robbie's clothes 😆
awww that Desaru Beach scene was so dreamy..loved it!! 😍
then they went to the palace too..wikid!!
Hav yu ever been there TJ?? I missed the oppurtunity to go there last year cuz of exams 😒
oo Kasturi decided to find new job fr her😛
n aww Heer gave birth to Suhani..nice name 😊
lol Robbie asked Kasturi whether she wants a boy or a girl 😳
loved the 'jab koi baat bigad jaye' sequence ⭐️
kwl then RoKa reached home! 😃
Robbie told her that he failed in all the subjects except english, history n music🤣
The pillow game at their maine ki saal-girah sounded gr8! The songs they were dancing to were kwl 😛
haha that ldka ladki fing was fun!😆
wowww!!! Kasturi pass ho gayi...Robbie ke sath reh kar bhi!!!!!😲 yayyyy!!!=P 🤣
OMG!! Tina finks that Robbie likes her 😲 n OMG Robbie asked her to go wih him fr the concert!!😲
ohh that chatpati khabar reali worried Kasturi bt happy to see that Devika n Robbie trusted her😃
oo Kasturi's boss Aditya granted her a leave fr 2 days!! wow!!😃
bt OMG!! Kasturi saw Robbie n Tina in that situation!!😲 haww poor Robbie
aww Kasturi realised that Robbie cant break her trust 👍🏼
ohh! Aditya is so bad too!!!😲 He wanted to create misunderstanding btwn RoKa to part them😲 hate him!!😡
aww I loved the scene btwn Robbie n Kasturi after this..they r so supportive fr each otha😃👏
then 'mere hath me' song sequence was so sweet!! i love this song!! 😛
oo after the 6 months leap, Kasturi got pregnant😃
hehe Kastuiri wanted to hav the ice-cream at 2am!!!😲😆
aww both Kasturi n the ice-cream duse called Robbie 'deewana' 😉😆
aww he sent the bouquet to Kasturi's office 😳 n the shayari..loved it!!😃👏
wil read the next parts asap now n comment then!!😛
love ya 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
super chapter TJ..... loved it...... Roshni is chooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mini1roka

Chapter 28 to 37

TJ!!!🤗 m back again after so loong!!=P lol Yay! Hello hello 🤗
ur FF is reali amazing man!!👏⭐️ I m lovin reading it!!Awww Priya 😳
lol Robbie locked Kasturi in the bathroom , bt the dinner fing was so cute n then Robbie singing 'mera dil jis dil pe fida hai' was reali sweet!!😛😃😳Lol! Hehe glad you liked the song, he is truly "fida" over Kasturi! Hehe next time I'll get him 2 cook dinner himself 😉
haha Kasturi wetted her n Robbie's clothes 😆 Lol yeah she was splashing like a kid 😆
awww that Desaru Beach scene was so dreamy..loved it!! 😍Aww gd 😛
then they went to the palace too..wikid!! Yep
Hav yu ever been there TJ?? I missed the oppurtunity to go there last year cuz of exams 😒Nope I'v never been, I want 2 go 2 😛
oo Kasturi decided to find new job fr her😛Yep she might as well use her degree 😉
n aww Heer gave birth to Suhani..nice name 😊Aww yeah I love that name, so pretty 😛
lol Robbie asked Kasturi whether she wants a boy or a girl 😳Yep 😛
loved the 'jab koi baat bigad jaye' sequence ⭐️I love this song too, the lyrics are so meaningful, so glad you enjoyed it 😛
kwl then RoKa reached home! 😃
Robbie told her that he failed in all the subjects except english, history n music🤣Haha he was a flunker, too busy flirting 😆
The pillow game at their maine ki saal-girah sounded gr8! The songs they were dancing to were kwl 😛Lol I got the idea from Hum Aapke Hain Kaun 😉
haha that ldka ladki fing was fun!😆Hehe see if it works.. 😉
wowww!!! Kasturi pass ho gayi...Robbie ke sath reh kar bhi!!!!!😲 yayyyy!!!=P 🤣Lol! Uska bhura assar nahi pada, luckily 😆
OMG!! Tina finks that Robbie likes her 😲 n OMG Robbie asked her to go wih him fr the concert!!😲This stupid Tina! And Robbie had to..he needs his secretary 😕
ohh that chatpati khabar reali worried Kasturi bt happy to see that Devika n Robbie trusted her😃Yeah good of them both
oo Kasturi's boss Aditya granted her a leave fr 2 days!! wow!!😃Yeah... 😕
bt OMG!! Kasturi saw Robbie n Tina in that situation!!😲 haww poor RobbieI know bechara was just trying not 2 be mean 2 Tina 😕
aww Kasturi realised that Robbie cant break her trust 👍🏼Yeah luckily it didnt take her long to realise her mistake 😃
ohh! Aditya is so bad too!!!😲 He wanted to create misunderstanding btwn RoKa to part them😲 hate him!!😡 I know stupid idiot 🤢
aww I loved the scene btwn Robbie n Kasturi after this..they r so supportive fr each otha😃👏Yeah exactly, they each comfort each other 😛
then 'mere hath me' song sequence was so sweet!! i love this song!! 😛Same! So romantic 😍
oo after the 6 months leap, Kasturi got pregnant😃Yep 😊
hehe Kastuiri wanted to hav the ice-cream at 2am!!!😲😆Lol cravings.. 😕
aww both Kasturi n the ice-cream duse called Robbie 'deewana' 😉😆That he is .. deewana, pyaar ka maara 😉
aww he sent the bouquet to Kasturi's office 😳 n the shayari..loved it!!😃👏Flowers! Lucky Kasturi! Hehe glad you liked it 😛
wil read the next parts asap now n comment then!!😛Cool, I'll be waiting 😊
love ya 🤗Love u 2 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: avggomez

super chapter TJ..... loved it...... Thanks 😃

Roshni is chooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know..I want a daughter just like her 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
errrrmmmm 🤔 before yu welcome with me a haar of chittars 😆
shollyyyyyy for the late commenting
ah wah am i doing?! yu dont mind n if yu do i dont care!! im the goondi!! 😎 goondi kisi se nahi darthi 😆
lol only joking
Okay the usual, here goes:
TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗
Fab update girly!! 👏 ⭐️
The whole part was so sweet and cute!! 😛 😃
Ooo kasturi and robbie have it all sorted, who takes care of roshni!! 👍🏼
I dont like it either when parents leave their child at nurseries and that
Aww baby roshni taking her first steps!! yayy 👏
hehe roshni is so cute!!!! wiping robbie's kiss 😆
but i loved this line

"Par tumhe toh acchhi lagta hain, na?" he rejoined, giving her a quick kiss on her cheek. She blushed deeply, protesting as usual.

hehe good going tj 😉 😳
awwww 2nd anniversary!! 🥳
Ooo love the gift kasturi gave to robbie!! Smells hot 😉
Lovely saree scene too!! 👏
Maaan love yur descriptions!! Yu make everything sound so beautiful!!! 😳
Aww roshni loves purple!! SNAP!! 😃 lol
Hehehe loved the roshni paying scene i could imagine it!! 😛
hey btw how old is roshni right now??
Update soon!! 😛
Great part!!
Love yu xxx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

errrrmmmm 🤔 before yu welcome with me a haar of chittars 😆

shollyyyyyy for the late commenting aww its ok 😛
ah wah am i doing?! yu dont mind n if yu do i dont care!! im the goondi!! 😎 goondi kisi se nahi darthi 😆lol! thats true 😉
lol only joking
Okay the usual, here goes:
TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗
Fab update girly!! 👏 ⭐️Thanks 😳
The whole part was so sweet and cute!! 😛 😃Thanks again 😃
Ooo kasturi and robbie have it all sorted, who takes care of roshni!! 👍🏼
I dont like it either when parents leave their child at nurseries and that Yeah excatly lol so I thought I'd point it out 😊
Aww baby roshni taking her first steps!! yayy 👏Yep! 😛
hehe roshni is so cute!!!! wiping robbie's kiss 😆Lol, hain na? 😆
but i loved this line

"Par tumhe toh acchhi lagta hain, na?" he rejoined, giving her a quick kiss on her cheek. She blushed deeply, protesting as usual.

hehe good going tj 😉 😳Hehe glad you enjoyed that 😉
awwww 2nd anniversary!! 🥳Yep! 😃
Ooo love the gift kasturi gave to robbie!! Smells hot 😉Lol whoop whoop 😛
Lovely saree scene too!! 👏Good good 😊
Maaan love yur descriptions!! Yu make everything sound so beautiful!!! 😳Haha thanks 😛
Aww roshni loves purple!! SNAP!! 😃 lol My favourite colour 2 😃
Hehehe loved the roshni paying scene i could imagine it!! 😛Aww good 😊
hey btw how old is roshni right now?? 3-4 months
Update soon!! 😛Will do 😊
Great part!! Thanks again 😃
Love yu xxx Love you too 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi everyone
Thanks for your wonderful comments and also thanks evryone who keeps liking my posts
Here's the next part
Do tell me what you think
Love TJ
Chapter 46 ~ Tumhi Mere Har Pal Mein

"Yakeen hi nahi hotha, na? Do saal hogaye hain!" said Milind.

"Roshni kitni cute lagrahi hain!" exclaimed Meher. Roshni, dressed in a tiny Snow White costume, beamed and tottered upto Meher. Meher smiled and picked her up in her arms.

"Tumhaari sari toh bahut hi zyaada pasand hain, Kasturi," admired Meher.

"Daresaal, Robbie ne mujhe isse anniversary ke liye diya," explained Kasturi.

"Waah, Bahut hi aachha choice hain tumhaara Robbie," complimented Prachi.

"Thanks! Bata hain, Roshni ne bhi sari pasand kit hi, Kasturi ke liye," answered Robbie.

"Haan, next party pe zaroor pehnoongi."

"Party toh bahut hi shandaar hain," commented Milind. "Par tum dono ne ek baat bhoolgaye."

"Kya?"

"Gaana! Arre tumhaari party gaane bina puri hosakti hain, bhalla? Chalo, Robbie, hum sab ke liye gaao," ordered Milind with a grin.

"Robbie toh roz hi gaata hain. Kasturi bhabhi, aap gaao," aked Preet.

"Mein acchhi gaayekar nahi hoon, please.." protested Kasturi.

"Nahi, Kasturi, hum aapko itni asaani se nahi chodnewaale."

Prachi turned towards Roshni. "Mama hum sab ke liye gaayegi?"

"Jee, jee, jee!" screamed Roshni, clapping her hands excitedly.

"Toh yeh baat tehr hain. Chalo, Kasturi."

"Mein.."

"Gaao na, Kasturi,"

"Tumhe Pata Toh Hoga Ke Mere Dil Mein Kya Hai
Chalo Kahe Deti Hoon, Kabhi Nahi Jo Kahaan Hai
Tumhi Mere Har Pal Mein, Tum Aaj Mein, Tum Kal Mein
Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona...."


"Tum Jo Ghussa Bhi Karo Toh Mujhe Pyaar Lagata Hai Jaane Kyun" joined in Robbie.


"Main Toh Jo Bhi Kahu Tumhe Ikraar Lagata Hai Jaane Kyun" answered Kasturi.

"Chhodo Bhi Ye Ada, Paas Aake Jara, Baat Dil Ki Koi Keh Do Na
Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona...."
sung Robbie, pulling her towards him and embracing her. Milind whistled in the background.
They waltzed round the room, oblivious to everyone else, gazing into wach others eyes as Kasturi sung:

"Saari Duniya Ko Chhodake Maine Chaaha Hai Ik Tumhe
Maine Zindagi Se Maanga Hai Toh Sirf Maanga Hai Ik Tumhe
Abb Isi Chaah Mein, Abb Isi Raah Mein, Zindagibhar Mere Tum Ho Na
Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona....
Tumhe Pata Toh Hoga, Tumhi Pe Main Fida Hoon
Tumhe Hai Jabse Chaaha, Hawaaon Mein Udata Hoon
Tumhi Mere Har Pal Mein, Tum Aaj Mein, Tum Kal Mein
Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona....
Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona......."

***

"Tata, baba, lala, tata," babbled Roshni as she sat on Kasturi's lap. Kasturi smiled and turned her to face herself.

"Roshni, papa kahon..papa..?"she taught her slowly and clearly. Roshni shooke her head and crawled away.

"Kahon na, Roshni. Papa?"

"Nana."

Kasturi laughed. "Nana nahi, papa. Papa."

"Papa?" gibbered Roshni.

Kasturi clapped excitedly. "Roshni kya kahegi, papa ko?"

"Lala, jaja, t-"she jabbered.

"Papa. Kaho, papa?"

"Papa, papa, papa.."

"Chalo, hum papa ko dikhaayenge," beamed Kasturi, as she heard Robbie's motorbike outside the house. Robbie joined the in the living room.

"Hi, Kasturi, kaisa that tumhaara din?"

"Bahut hi acchha tha. Aur tumhaara?"

"Theek tha. Contract sign kardiya," he answered. "Aur meri gudiya kaisi hain? Roshni kaisi hain?"he asked, leaning down and hoisting her into his arms.

"Papa," she said simply.

Robbie's face broke into a huge grin. His excitement and joy were boundless.

"Kasturi, suna tumne? Roshni ne pehli baar papa kahaan!"

"Jaanti hoon," answered Kasturi, her joy evident in her voice.

"Mom, suna tumne? Roshni ne mujhe papa kahaan."

"Haan, haan, suna!"

***

Crouched outside the gate, Raunak eyed Sabharwal Mansion and fumed. Only due to her had he been living like a beggar for the last three months, without a proper home or food. He wasn't going to rot in that jail. He was going to get revenge.They would both pay: his traitorous ex-wife and her rich rockstar husband.

***

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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 46 ~ Tumhi Mere Har Pal Mein (English)

"It's hard to believe, isn't it? It's been two years!" said Milind.

"Roshni is looking so cute!" exclaimed Meher. Roshni, dressed in a tiny Snow White costume, beamed and tottered upto Meher. Meher smiled and picked her up in her arms.

"I really like your sari, Kasturi," admired Meher.

"Actually, Robbie gave it to me for our anniversary ke liye diya," explained Kasturi.

"Waah, your choice is awesome, Robbie," complimented Prachi.

"Thanks! You know, Roshni also chose a sari for Kasturi," answered Robbie.

"Yes, I'll definitely wear it at the next party."

"Party is very lavish," commented Milind. "But you two have forgotten one thing."

"What?"

"Song! Your party can't be complete without a song, now can it? Come, Robbie, sing for us all," ordered Milind with a grin.

"Robbie sings everyday. Kasturi bhabhi, you sing," asked Preet.

"I'm not a good singer, please.." protested Kasturi.

"No, Kasturi, we're not going to leave you that easily."

Prachi turned towards Roshni. "Should mama sing for us all?"

"Yes, yes, yes!" screamed Roshni, clapping her hands excitedly.

"Then it's decided. Come on, Kasturi."

"Me.."

"Go on, sing, Kasturi," requested Robbie.

"You must know what's in my heart
Still I'll say what I've never said before
You're in my every moment, my present and my past
Hey sweetheart, hey sweetheart, hey sweetheart...."


"Even your anger seems like love to me, don't know why," joined in Robbie.


"Whatever I say seems like a declaration to you, don't know why," continued Kasturi.


"Now leave this pretence , come closer and tell me your heart's feelings
Hey sweetheart, hey sweetheart, hey sweetheart...."
sung Robbie, pulling her towards him and embracing her. Milind whistled in the background.

They waltzed round the room, oblivious to everyone else, gazing into wach others eyes as Kasturi sung:


"From the whole world I have loved only you
I've asked for you and only you
Now in this desire, on this road, you are mine for life
Hey sweetheart, hey sweetheart, hey sweetheart...."
"You must know what's in my heart
Still I'll say what I've never said before
You're in my every moment, my present and my past
Hey sweetheart, hey sweetheart, hey sweetheart...."

***

"Tata, baba, lala, tata," babbled Roshni as she sat on Kasturi's lap. Kasturi smiled and turned her to face herself.

"Roshni, say papa..papa..?" she taught her slowly and clearly. Roshni shooke her head and crawled away.

"Go on, say it, Roshni. Papa?"

"Nana."

Kasturi laughed. "Not nana, papa. Papa."

"Papa?" gibbered Roshni.

Kasturi clapped excitedly. "What will Roshni say to papa?"

"Lala, jaja, t-"she jabbered.

"Papa. Say, papa?"

"Papa, papa, papa.."

"Come, we'll show papa," beamed Kasturi, as she heard Robbie's motorbike outside the house. Robbie joined the in the living room.

"Hi, Kasturi, how was your day?"

"It was great. And yours?"

"It was ok, I signed the contract," he answered. "And how's my darling? How's Roshni?"he asked, leaning down and hoisting her into his arms.

"Papa," she said simply.

Robbie's face broke into a huge grin. His excitement and joy were boundless.

"Kasturi, did you hear? Roshni said dad for the first time!"

"I know," answered Kasturi, her joy evident in her voice.

"Mom, did you hear? Roshni called me dad!"

"Yes, yes, I heard!"

***

Crouched outside the gate, Raunak eyed Sabharwal Mansion and fumed. Only due to her had he been living like a beggar for the last three months, without a proper home or food. He wasn't going to rot in that jail. He was going to get revenge.They would both pay: his traitorous ex-wife and her rich rockstar husband.

***

Thnaks for reading and commenting 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
me first... yaaa...i am back.hope not very late..😉.
some how i caught this first place...finally....uufff...
coming to your ff
it started with sweet discossion of our very cute roshni...
kasturi was singing...😍
love that song yaar😛
"Tata, baba, lala, tata," "Lala, jaja, t-" 🤣...i love to read roshni speaking...muwaaahhhh
wow....she called robbie papa...😛
omg 😲 raunak eyeing RoKa...i hate hate hate him...😡
excellent up date.very well written.enjoy reading it😃
Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago

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