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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiya everyone ๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks for your helpful comments ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Heres the next part ๐Ÿ˜‰
Hope you all enjoy it ๐Ÿ˜›
Please comment ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Have a nice day ๐Ÿ˜Š
Love TJ
Chapter 35 ~ Hum jo khatha kar na sakey

Kasturi had only run a few steps when her mind cleared and she realised she'd made a mistake. Robbie had so much faith upon her, and this was how she repaid him? He'd supported her, refusing to believe the lies others spread. Even after Raunak, he had never made her feel like a second-class, second-time bride.

She spun around, to see Robbie wildly hurtling down the corridor. She ran towards him, into his arms. She buried her head in his chest.

"Kasturi, please mera yakeen karo, mere aur Tina ke beech kuch nahi hain, woh achanak aisa karne lagi, mujhe samaj mein nahi aaya kya ho raha tha. Mein kisi aur ka dil nahi dhookaana chahta tha. Par please.."

"Nahi, Robbie, rukho. Aapko yeh kehne ki zaroorat nahi hain. Mujhe hi chalejaane se pehle ek baar sochlehna chahiya tha, ke aap aisa kabhi nahi karsakte. Aapne hamesha mujhpe vishwaas kiya hain, aur mera saath diya hain. Maafi aapko nahi, mujhe maangni chahiye. I'm sorry Robbie, ke meine ek pal ke liye bhi tum par shakh kiya."

"I love you Kasturi. Sach mein, jaan se zyaada mein tumko pyaar karta hoon. Aur mere dil mein sirf tum ho, sirf tum."

***

"Lagta hain Tina chalegi. Baitho, Kasturi. Tumhare saaman kahaan hain?"

"Niche, reception mein. Mein baat mein kisi se kehdoongi. Tum kaise ho, Robbie?"

"Ab jab tum aagayi toh bahut khush hoon."

"Meri surprise toh surprise hi naa rahi," reflefcted Kasturi dejectedly.

Robbie gently cupped her face in his palms. "Tum maayoos mat hona, Kasturi. Aisi choti-moti baat hoti rahegi. Mere liye sab se ehm baat yeh hain, ke tum mujhpe bharosa karti hoon. Ab chalo, yeh sab choddo. Tum yahaan kab tak rehsakti ho?"

"Do din ki chooti hain. Toh mein tumhare saath hi lautungi."

"Theek hain. Tum takhee hui hogi. Chalo, sohjaate hain."

"Robbie! Capre toh badaldehnedo."

"Oh haan. Mein jaata hoon, tum reception ko phone karlo."

"Theek hain."

"Kasturi..woh abhi jo.."

"Nahi, Robbie, aapko kahani bataane ki koi zaroorat nahi hain. Jo bhi hua, mujhe tumpe vishwaas hain."

"Thank you, Kasturi."

***

"I'm sorry Robbie, mujhe andaaza hi nahi tha ke Tina aisa kuch karegi," apologised Devika. "Aayendaar se mein dyaan rakhoongi."

"It's ok, mom. It's not your fault. Par mein chahta hoon, ke woh kal se office nahi aayegi."

"Of course, Robbie. Mujhe lagta hain, woh anyways bahut sharminder hogi. Acchha, mein phone rakhdehti hoon. Tumhare concert ke liye good luck, au Kasturi ko bhi mujhse hello kehdo."

"Jee."

***

"Robbie, tum, yahaan?"

"Haan Kasturi, mein niche loan ki baat karne aaye tha, toh meine socha tha ke hum saath mein hi lunch kaayenge. Dekho kya kya laaya hoon."

"Arre waah paneer tikka, mutter ki sabzi aur gobi ke parathe. Baitho, Robbie, hum shuru karte."

"Rukho, Kasturi, mein tumhe khilaaonga."

***

Aditya watched from his desk as they sat happily together, chatting away, feeding each other from the small tiffin. He jumped up as he saw Kasturi shyly hug Robbie goodbye.

"Toh tumne Robbie ko maaf kardiya?"

"Aapko kaise bata ke hamara koi jagra hua..?"

"Mein..mein Tina ke baare mein jaanta hoon."

"Kaise?" demanded Kasturi softly but forcefully, noticing his shifty gaze.

Too late, he realised his mistake. "Mein..woh..hotel waleh.."

"Uss waqt aur koi nahi tha. Yeh baat sirf hum teeno jaante the."

Slowly, Aditya stood up. His plastered smile faded away and his face became menacing. Kasturi backed away.

"Tumne kya socha, ke yeh sab apne aap hogaya. Par phir bhi .. itna bhi mushkil nahi tha. Woh paagal Tina pehle se Robbie pe fida thi. Meine sirf usko kab aur kaise bataaye, waaki sab usne kiya. Aur tumne kya socha, ke mein sab ko chooti pehle din mein dehdehta hoon? Meine tujhe sirf isliye diya tha, ke tum Robbie ko range haath pakardo aur phir naaraz hokar, usse choddo."

"Par kyun?" breathed Kasturi, in shock.

"Abhi bhi kyun poochrahi ho? Kyun ki mein tumhe haasil karna chahta tha. Kabhi nahi socha, ke tumhe yeh job itni jaldi kyun mili?"

"Mujhe laga ke.."

"Ke yeh tumhaare kaabilat ka natija hain? Jee nahi. Mujhe tumse issi waqt pyar hogaya jab meine tumhe Robbie ka birthday party mein dekha tha. Tab se mera maksat sirf tum dono ko judaa karne ka tha," he clarified mockingly.

"Chee! Par aap ek baat soonlijye, mere aur Robbie ka rishta itna kamsoor nahi hain ke aisa tootjaayenga. Sirf saat hi nahi, satar janam ka rishta hain."

"Dekhenge kabtak tum dono bachpaayenge mujhse."

"Koshish mat karna. Aap haarjaayenge. Aur ek aur baat. Mein abhi is waqt resign kar rahi hoon. Dua karoongi ke hum aaj ke baat kabhi nahi milenge."

Her hands were shaking but she turned on her heel and strode out with her head held high.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Chapter 35 ' Hum jo khatha kar na sakey (English)

Kasturi had only run a few steps when her mind cleared and she realised she'd made a mistake. Robbie had so much faith upon her, and this was how she repaid him? He'd supported her, refusing to believe the lies others spread. Even after Raunak, he had never made her feel like a second-class, second-time bride.

She spun around, to see Robbie wildly hurtling down the corridor. She ran towards him, into his arms. She buried her head in his chest.

"Kasturi, please believe me, there is nothing between me and Tina, she just suddenly started doing that, I didn't understand what to do. I didn't want to upset anyone else. But please.."

"No, Robbie, stop. You don't need to say this. Before leaving, I should have at least thought once that you could never do something like this. You have always had faith in me, and supported me. You shouldn't be asking for forgiveness, I should. I'm sorry Robbie, that I doubted you for even a moment."

"I love you Kasturi. Truly, I love you more than life itself. And you're the only one in my heart, only you."

***

"It seems Tina left. Sit, Kasturi. Where's your luggage?"

"Downstairs, in reception. I'll tell someone later. How are you, Robbie?"

"Now you've come I'm very happy."

"My surprise wasn't exactly a surprise," reflefcted Kasturi dejectedly.

Robbie gently cupped her face in his palms. "Don't be dejected, Kasturi. Such smaal things will keep happening. For me the most important thing is that you trust me. Now come, forget all this. How long can you stay here?"

"I have two days holiday. So I'll return with you."

"OK. You must be tired. Let's go to sleep."

"Robbie! At least change your clothes."

"Oh yes. I'll go, you phone the reception."

"OK."

"Kasturi..that just now ..what happened.."

"No, Robbie, you don't need to tell me the story. Whatever happened, I have faith in you."

"Thank you, Kasturi."

***

"I'm sorry Robbie, I had no idea that Tina would do something like this," apologised Devika. "From now on I'll be careful."

"It's ok, mom. It's not your fault. But I don't want her to come to office again."

"Of course, Robbie. I think that she'll be too embarrassed anyway. OK, I'll put down the phone. Good luck for your concert, and say hello to Kasturi from me."

"OK."

***

"Robbie, you, here?"

"Yes Kasturi, I had come downstairs to talk about a loan, so I thought that we could eat lunch together. See what I've brought."

"Oh wow paneer tikka, mutter ki sabzi aur gobi ke parathe. Sit, Robbie, we'll start."

"Wait, Kasturi, I'll feed you."

***

Aditya watched from his desk as they sat happily together, chatting away, tenderly feeding each other from the small tiffin. He jumped up as he saw Kasturi shyly hug Robbie goodbye.

"So you've forgiven Robbie?"

"What was there to forgive..?"

"I..I know about Tina."

"How?" demanded Kasturi softly but forcefully, noticing his shifty gaze.

Too late, he realised his mistake. "I..that..the hotel staff.."

"At that time no-one else was there. Only the three of us knew about this matter."

Slowly, Aditya stood up. His plastered smile faded away and his face became menacing. Kasturi backed away.

"What did you think, that this all happened on its own? But still..it wasn't that hard.. That crazy Tina was already obsessed with Robbie. I only told her how and when. And what did you think, that I give everyone two days off on the first day itself? I only gave you this holiday so that you could catch bRobbie red-handed and then in your anger, leave him."

"But why?" breathed Kasturi, in shock.

"You're still asking why? Because I wanted to get you. Did you never wonder how you got this job so quickly?"

"I thought that.."

"That this is the result of your aptitude? Oh no. I fell in love with you when I saw you at Robbie's birthday party. Since then my aim has just been to separate the two of you," he clarified derisively.

"Chee! But you listen to one thing, mine and Robbie's relationship isn't so weak that it'll just break like that. Not just for seven, it's for seventeen lifetimes."

"We'll see how long you two can be saved from me."

"Don't even try. You'll fail. And one more thing. I resign this very second. I'll pray that aftee today we never meet again."

Her hands were shaking but she turned on her heel and strode out with her head held high.

Thanks for reading ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Tj! I jus started readin ur ff!!! Its awesome!!!! Plzzzz do continue soon!!!! PM me when u update plzzz!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow....! awesome and an unexpected twist, very interesting....... m a fan of love triangles..... waiting to know wat aditya will do next...... pls update sooooon........ jus love ur fanfic.....!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey tj!!! ๐Ÿค— hw r yu??!!! ๐Ÿ˜›
Omg a shocking but amazing part!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ‘
Aww im so glad the misunderstanding was cleared right away!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
That part was very well written!! ๐Ÿ‘ the dialogues and scenes...all so realistic!! well done!! โญ๏ธ
But wow that last part was so unexpected ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ...i love shockers!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ lol
Omg aditya is the bad guy and it was all his plan!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ 'dhum dhum dhuuuum' ๐Ÿ˜†
oh noo i wonder what he's going to do now...his intentions don't seem too good...doesn't look like he's going to sit still ๐Ÿ˜• but good on kasturi she quit the job ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
and that robbie feeding kasturi part..awww ๐Ÿ˜ณ...weirdly enough i just put that in my ff just nw before reading yur ff lol...great minds think alike!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Excellent part tj!! ๐Ÿ‘Loved reading it!!! ๐Ÿ˜›
Update next part soon!!! ๐Ÿค—
Hinna xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Neelam-

Hey Tj! I jus started readin ur ff!!! Its awesome!!!! Plzzzz do continue soon!!!! PM me when u update plzzz!!

Hiya Neelam
Great a new reader
Glad you enjoyed it
Sure I'll PM u
๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

wow....! thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š

awesome and an unexpected twist, very interesting....... m a fan of love triangles..... ooh cool good you liked it ๐Ÿ˜›
waiting to know wat aditya will do next...... pls update sooooon........ jus love ur fanfic.....! okey dokey and thanks again ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

hey tj!!! ๐Ÿค— hw r yu??!!! ๐Ÿ˜› Heya Hinna great thanks u? ๐Ÿค—

Omg a shocking but amazing part!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ‘Thanks ๐Ÿ˜›
Aww im so glad the misunderstanding was cleared right away!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒMe too! I really hate it when two people who love ach other so much give in to misunderstandings, I wanted to show how much Kasturi trusts him
That part was very well written!! ๐Ÿ‘ the dialogues and scenes...all so realistic!! well done!! โญ๏ธThanks again ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
But wow that last part was so unexpected ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ...i love shockers!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ lol Lol good good ๐Ÿ˜‰
Omg aditya is the bad guy and it was all his plan!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ 'dhum dhum dhuuuum' ๐Ÿ˜†
oh noo i wonder what he's going to do now...his intentions don't seem too good...doesn't look like he's going to sit still ๐Ÿ˜• but good on kasturi she quit the job ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸผLol he was the "mastermind" behind it and yeag Kasturi had to quit she couldn't work for him after finding out
and that robbie feeding kasturi part..awww ๐Ÿ˜ณ...weirdly enough i just put that in my ff just nw before reading yur ff lol...great minds think alike!! ๐Ÿ˜‰aww glad you liked it and hehe great minds ๐Ÿ˜›
Excellent part tj!! ๐Ÿ‘Loved reading it!!! ๐Ÿ˜›Thanks once again ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Update next part soon!!! ๐Ÿค—Will do ๐Ÿ˜Š
Hinna xx xx ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 16 years ago
nyc update

loved it
keep it up
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Originally posted by: muneefah

nyc update

loved it
keep it up

Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š

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