FF: Tune zindagi mein aake...Teaser on pg 81/2 :) - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

hey hi
how are you fine thanks 😊
omg congrats on your first ever ff on kasturi forum
wow i just saw
okay you must be thinking who the heck is this?
lol am humaira but every one calls me hummy lol
wow aweosme ff love the title of it thanks hummy
and i love yoru style of writing
il comment more on your FF next week
tc and congrats again thanks again
i know every one loves this Ff 😊
so keep up the great rokcing work 😃

thanks so much continue reading 😊

love
hummy

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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: robbii

gobi ke parathe, bhel puri, chole bature, masala chaat, aur' ek aloo bhajia...hahaha...lol the list is very small. šŸ˜† ran out of foods šŸ˜•

i love they way you discribed the scene RoKa eating their food. 😊
part-4B
i love kasturis dressing style. glad you liked it
wow robbie in front of kasturi's house!!!!! šŸ˜‰
excellent writing .keep it up. thank you 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: FunkyChick

Hey How r u well i am a new reader to your FF. I have just read all the parts of your ff a while ago what can i say its really great šŸ‘šŸ¼ I enjoyed reading all the parts. your robbie is really funny cant wait to see how the story proceeds furthur. update soon

Love Mariam xxx😃

Hi Mariam I'm glad you enjoyed the FF
šŸ˜† @ funny robbie, whoo another karan patel fan
I'll update asap šŸ˜›
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Hey next update hope you guys enjoy it šŸ˜› Please comment 😊
Chapter 5 – Mera Dil Bhi Kitna Pagal Hain

"Sshhh, Kasturi. Suno. Mein tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon"

Kasturi shyly averted her eyes at his tender tone.

"Jabse tumhe dekha hain…mein…tum." He took a deep breath. " Mujhe pehle kabhi na aisa hua hain, 'filmi' lagta hain, magar tum har waqt mere khalayon mein aati ho, mere dil mein bas gayi ho..."

The words tumbled out faster, becoming more desperate as Robbie continued.

"Mujhe tumhari sab baat acchii lagti hain – tumhaari bhari-bhari, gehri aankhen, tumhari sharmillee adaa, tumhari baatein, kabhi meethi, kabhi pagli…Kasturi, mujhe tumse pyar hogaya hain"

She still had not raised her eyes. Gently, he tilted her chin up towards him. "Maine apni dil ki baat batadi. Tumhara dil kya kehta hain?"

She turned the full extent of her intense gaze on him. "Mera dil bhi…tumko chahta hain"

He held his arms up slowly, conscious that she was different, unlike any other girl he'd ever been with before. She smiled and fell into his arms. Relieved, he hugged her tightly, but tenderly; she was overwhelmed by the passion he felt for her.

Slowly they broke apart, each wearing a dreamy, contented expression.

"Chal, hum office saath chalenge" He gently helped her onto the bike then swung himself in front and hit the switch.

***

Kasturi switched on the computer and stared at the screen, imagining Robbie's face. That cheeky smile, those dazzling eyes… For the first time, she understood all those songs, stories and poems about love, she could relate to them. She had realised how deeply it impacted on you. She closed her eyes, remembering his gentle touch…

She opened her eyes to find herself staring into Robbie's eyes. Laughing at her foolish conjuring mind, she batted the image away. Robbie frowned and she gasped.

"Sir, aap sach much yahaan…"

"Haan Kasturi … mein tumhare liye kuch laaya hoon"

He revealed a deep red rose from behind his back, each petal perfectly coiled, and presented it to her with a charming smile. Her heart fluttered inside her.

"Shukriya, Robbie sir. Bahut khoobsurat hain"

"Tumse zyada to nahi"

Kasturi blushed; Robbie smiled at her predictably pretty reaction.

***

Striding past Robbie's new secretary's office, Devika was stunned at what she saw. Her eyes narrowed. Hands clasped, they were staring into each others' eyes as if…as if they were totally besotted. She was almost shaking in anger. The audacity of that middle-class wretch – how dare she? It was one thing dealing with Robbie's flings, but this..?

Well, it wasn't going to get any further – she knew that for sure. This love story would be nipped in the bud. Robbie was immature, "nadan", he might think he was in love but that girl was no good for him. She would never be good enough for Robbie Sabharwal.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Oooh great part!
RoKa are perfect for each other
I really hope Devika doesnt do anything to ruin their friendship an new found closeness
cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
aww so sweet......RoKa confessed their feelings.....😳

Devika is such a witch.......😔.....i hope she doesn't succeed in separating them.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hey great update luved it hope devika stays out of rokas way
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Oooh great part!

thank you 😊
RoKa are perfect for each other so true...
I really hope Devika doesnt do anything to ruin their friendship an new found closeness
cant wait for the next part! 😃 ill be as quick as I can

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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: swan20

aww so sweet......RoKa confessed their feelings.....😳 glad you enjoyed it

Devika is such a witch.......😔.....(i know) i hope she doesn't succeed in separating them.

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey great update luved it hope devika stays out of rokas way

thanks....so do I...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
Thanks for all your lovely comments
Heres the next part - hope you enjoy it šŸ˜‰
Chapter 6 - Ishq vishk pyar vyar

"Nahi, Robbie sir, mujhe yeh…"

"Kasturi, you trust me, don't you"

"Jee, Robbie sir, sab se zyada"

"Toh daro mat"

"Par mujhe bata nahi...kaise..."

"Main tumhe sikata hoon. Yeh haath, yahaan...aur...yeh haath mere haath mein"

"Phir..."

"Phir mein tumhe 'lead' karoonga...aise"

Expertly, he waltzed in time to the music, circling the floor. Kasturi's worries soon vanished and she relaxed, enjoying this new style of dancing. Robbie dropped her right hand and twirled her with the other. She giggled in excitement. The tango music finished and a slow romantic song began.

"Tu hi toh jannat meri, Tu hi mera junoon
Tu hi to mannat meri, Tu hi rooh ka sakoon
Tu hi aakhiyon ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak
Aur kuch na jaanu mein, bas itna hi jaanu…
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karoon
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karoon
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karoon
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karoon…

Robbie slid his arms gently round Kasturi and they rocked slowly, lost in the music, lost in each other.

***

"Mmm, kaash mein bhi khaana banasakta" Robbie commented wistfully as Kasturi stirred the fragrant 'khichdi' and heaped it into the saucepan.

"Aapko khaana banana nahi aata, sir?"

"Kasturi..."

"Acchha baba, Robbie sir"

"Chalenga. Haan, toh...jee, Kasturi, I never needed to learn. Ramu Kaka did it"

"Mein tumhe sikaaoon…" Kasturi offered shyly, noticing Robbie's disappointed tone.

Robbie flashed her a cheeky smile. "Shukriya, Kasturi"

"OK, Robbie sir, aloo ke parathe kaise rahenge?"

"Fantastic"

***

Kasturi poured the water into the bowl of flour and began to mix with her hands.

"Pehle, paani aur atta milaana…aise…"

"Mein try karoon..."

"Jee...ek minute, mein mere haath..."

"Nahi, hum saath karenge." Robbie moved behind her and fitted his hands around hers, pressing down as Kasturi kneaded the dough. "Mujhe already mazaa aa gaya"

"Robbie sir…" Kasturi protested, then gave up, smiled and continued.

"Aur ab…thoda sa namak aur mirchi…bas. Ab aise, chotte…" Kasturi broke off a chunk of dough and rolled it into a small, flat shape. She then filled it with mashed potato and sealed the edges to make a sphere. "Ab aap…"

"Tum."

"Ab tum…"

"Aise?"

Kasturi laughed. Robbie's first attempt lacked a bit of finesse – the potato was spilling out of the many cracks in the hastily flattened cylinder of dough.

Robbie pouted petulantly. "Mein itna funny nahi hoon…"

He smiled wickedly as an idea occurred to him. Swiftly, he grabbed a handful of potato and smeared it on Kasturi's cheek. "Ab kaun funny hain?"

Squealing in outrage, Kasturi flung flour into his hair. Laughing, he grabbed the salt and shook it wildly; she retaliated by pouring the half-full jug of water over him. Screaming, they collapsed on the floor.

"Yeh kya kiya, Robbie sir?"

"Tumne shuru kiya, Kasturi"

"Maine?" she began, indignant, but then realized he was laughing. "Sab parathe ruin hogaye"

"Toh hum aur banalenge"

She smiled. "Chalo."

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