NEW FF: YeH ZiNdAgi UPDATED PART 5..PG 11 JAN 9-09 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi happy new year.
lol u r ff is very very good.as you feel it may sound similar to the other ff because we have lots and lots of ff in this forum.but each one have their style of writing.and i absolutely like u r writing style. for u r age your writing style is fantastic.keep writing .we will there for u to encourage u with our comments.
most important thing....school and studies comes first. do that well.when ever u are free from u r studies try to up date.we will wait for that no problem.
study well.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Hi guys'..how's every1'.well as I promised I ll update every Friday'here is today's update'. Hope every one likes it'since it took me forever to type it'.here is the longest update I have written sooo far'.THANKS FOR YR SWEETS COMMENTS I WAS NOR ABLE TO REPLY...SORRY....,,,

PART 5

ROBBIE'S cabin he was having his lunch he kept thinking abt kasturi'..they way she was talking..how she was looking very confused and scared'.

Robbie: yeh job tu har giz tumko hi milegi kasturi'

When he was done with his lunch he went back to the 4 profiles which were left'.he picked up kasturi's file and read her info'

Robbie: so that's yr name..MS. KASTURI CHAWLA'..nice name'then he went to her college record and saw that she was an A student in her college'she has bachelor's degree in business management and accounting'he was very impressed with that'he read abt her family that she lives in an apartment with her best friend VRINDA and her brother who goes to saint Louis university'.he was very impressed with that cuz it's one of the best universities and his sis also goes there'.he was overall very impressed with kasturi's qualifications'.he quickly examined the rest of the files which didn't really interest him'..so he made up his mid and decided to give the job to kasturi's'

As the lunch break was finished kas and vrinda also came back'vri cums with kas to mr.robbie department and sits with her'as the other three girls go in robbie's cabin one by one they r all rejected'..now its kasturi turn she is very confused scared and nervous to go to his office,,due to all the other girls she has seen she thinks she might not get the job also'but she doesn't know wat her destiny is bring her'.she gather's up all of her courage and goes to robbie's cabin/''

By the time Robbie was done with the other three girls he was very tired so he gets up to stretch and turned his chair around so when kas cums in she doesn't see his face'.as kasturi enters his cabin she feels her heart beat rise and her face is very hot'.she cums in and nervously say's

KAs: hello sir!! How u doing??? (as she really wannna see her boss's face)

Rob: hello Ms. KAsturi Chawla'I am doing gr8t and I hope u r 2'..I have reviewed your profile and I am very honored to hire u as my PA'..CONGRATS!!!!!(saying that he slowly turns aroung which shocks kasturi)'..

Kas: ( saying very loudly) TUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ROB: TUM!!!!!

KAS: (she realized her mistake and said)'aap'sir'

ROB: haan main'(with a naughty smile on his face)'kyat um kisi aur ka intezar kar rahi thi..

KAS: (very quickly she said)'nahin'wo main bas'

ROB: its ok yaar I was jus joking'

KAS: she was shocked to hear him calling her yaar..woh aap sir'

Rob: aur yeh kyat um nay laga rakha hai'

KAS" kya sir

Rob: again'.tumhe mujhe sir bulanay ki koi zaroorat nahin'.sirf Robbie because everyone here calls me Robbie''.understood..

KAS: (very confused and scared)'.yes sir

ROB: tumne kya kaha

Kas: realizing wat she said'..kuch nahin Robbie

Rob: that's like a good girl'.

Kas: tu mein job kab se start kar sakti hoon

Rob: its up to u'.agar tum aaj se start karna chahti ho to aaj si hi shuro kar sakti ho'.warna kal se tum join kar sakti ho..

Kas: ok'thanks a lot for giving me the job

Rob gets up frm his seat and cums and stands right in front of kas and says

Rob: it was nice meeting u'.(nauhty smile) I hope u have a gr8t time working with me in my office'.

KAS:in her mind ( I donno abt that but I am sure mein iss kharoos admi kay saath agar kaam kia tu mein pagal zaroor ho jaaon gi..) she gives him a smile and nods her head''

When she cums outr of his office she thinks

Kas: mein kis admi kay palay par gayi hoon'ab bhagwan hi jaane mera kya hoga'..

When vrinda sees her she runs up to her a nd asks her'

Vri: kasturi kya tumhein job mili gayi kay nahin/'..

Kas: vrinda mujhe job mil gayi hai'

Vri: mein itni khush hoon kay main bata nahin sakti'.

With saying that both of the girls leave robbies department and cum out'

ROUNAK COLLEGE

Rounak is climbing the stairs and is not looking where he is going and then suddenly bumps in to someone'.when he looks up to see who he bumped into'it was none other than shivaniii..

Shiv: tum!!

Rou; I am soory shiv'

Shiv: sorry worry choro tum mujhe yeh batao tum itne late kyun ayei hooo'mein kab se tumhara intezar kar rahi thi'.

Rau: (trying to think of an excuse) who actually mein na

Shiv: cuts him of and says'bolo ajj konsa new excuse hai tumhare pas 'I wanna hear it'

Rou: excuse nahin who actually in real mein meri aaj bas miss hogayi thi so iss liye mein late ho gaya'.aur aaj di had to go to give her interview so she also couldn't drop me here '

Shiv: accha'ab yeh excuses band karo aur kal se mein tumko pick karney aya karoon gi''

Rou: KYA!!!!!!!!

Shiv: haan aur wo bhi puray 8:00 am'..chaalega'.

Rou: mumbling'.nahin marega'.

Shiv: tum nay kuch kaha kya'.

Rou: nahin tu'

With that they both leave for their classes'.

BACK TO ROBBIE"S OFFICE

as kas and vri are leaving the kas bumps in to a lady'

kas: (aaj kya mera logon mein bump karney ka din hai kya..) she looks up and sees it anita'

kas: areu anita dii..aap'.

anita: kasturi tum aur yahaan'..

kas: haan di,'.woo mein yahaan job kay liye apply karnay ayi thi..

anita: achha'tu job mili kay nahi..

KAS: haan di mujhe mr. Robbie saberwal ki PA ki job mili hai'. Anita: tut um Robbie ki nayi pa ho..

KAS: kya aap rob ko jantri hain..

Anita: janti hoon'array pagali wo mera chota bhai hai' Kas: really.,'

Anita: (laughing) haan!!!

Shirjil anita's son at the same time says'

Shi: mummy..mummy kya mein mamu kay paas ja saktra hoon'

Kas: di ye hap ka beta hai'

Anita: haan'

Kas + vri: he is shoooooo cute'

Anita: array beta didi ko hello bolo'

Shirjil: jello'with saying that he breaks free frm his mother;s hand he runs to his mamu's cabin'.and starts yelling..

Shir: MAMMMUUU!!

Kas: kitna payaara hai'

Robbie cabin

Rob: (hears sumone yelling mamu and cums out of his dreamworld)'array buddy tum' tum yahaan kaise aur mummy kahan hain'

Shirjil: mummy tu bahar kisis kuri say gaalan kar rahin hain'.aur who kuri bohut soni hai'..

Rob: acchaa'.chal chalet hain bahar aur dekhtien hain yeh knosi itni soni kuri hai'..

Rob and shirjil cum out and Robbie sees kasturi his new pa talking to his didi'..

Rob: (says toi shirjil) array bachu kuri tuy wakai mein bohut soni hai'.

Rob holding shir in his arms walks over to where the girls r standing'.

Anita: array dekhoorobbie bhi bahar a gaya

Rob: array di aap yahan kaise

Anitra: who beta ma nay tumhare liye luch beja tha'so mein nay socha kay I ll bringit over'.waise bhi kafi din hogaye they since mein nay office ka chakar lagaya tha'.so I jus decided to give u a surprise'but here I got a surprise'..

Rob: oh diii aap nay bihut accha kiya as now aap meri PA say mil sakti hain'kas this is my bari bahan aur di yeh hai kasturi meri new PA'.

Anita: mujhe already pata hai'

Rob: wo kaise'

Anita: wo aise kay mein aur kas college friends hain when I was a senior she was a junior'.so that's how we know each other'( while she is saying that she recongnizes a girl standing there with kasturi and asks her) aur aap kaun hain'

Kas: mein bhi kitni budu hoon (Robbie thinks in his mind'seriously tum kitni masoom ho) yeh actually vrinda hai'.meri best friend in this whole wide world and she is jus like my sis'..

Anita: hi vrinda mein nay bohut kuch suna hai tumhare bare mein frm kasturi'

Vri: hi'.i hoipe aap nay meray bare mein accha hi suna ha

ROB + ANITA: ( both look so amazed at how frank this girl is)

Anita: (smilies) accha hi suna hai'

Kas: ok anita dii ab hum log chalte hain as we r getting late'..

Hope to c u around''

KAS + VRI: namastey,,,,

Rob: very amazed by kas innocence and her traditional style''smiles naughtily'in his mind says namstey'..

DUM DUM DUM!!!!!!!!

Here u guys go'..

Uff took me a while to type almost an hour'..hope to hear a lot of comments'..

Enjoy'.left u guys with a happy ending'.

C u guys nxt week same jaga par at the same time'..

Also I might be able to reply to yr comments over the weekend as I am busy so I ll reply back on mon'..

P.S. In many ff I have seen pm lists'if anyone wants me to make 1'.jus let me know,,,

Alllah hafiz..

Luv yr 😳

\emu./ ;-) 😛

Edited by LAHORIKURI - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
me first ...will comment later
i am back.good sign that robbie decided to give job to kasturi.
without any questions he gave it too.ummmm good going.
robbie's sis and kasturi's bro in same college.hope they will form a pair.
lol mai bhe pak gayee huon yeah sir sir say.good in u r ff robbie said kasturi not to call sir.
i liked raunak shiv scene very cutely written.
lol that small boy calling robbie maamu...heee.
in u r ff anitha is so sweet .i like her.
great part👍🏼
dum dum dum
Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
glad to see ur update.....😊

so kasturi finally got the job........i can imagine how shocked kasturi must have been when robbie called her yaar....😆

aww robbie mamu.....so sweet........both mama- bhateja thought kasturi is a soni kudi.....😉 😆

waiting for when ROKA start working together.....😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
Hey Emu
Great part
Finally Kas got the job, loved the interaction between RoKa
Shirjil is soo cute!
cant wait for RoKa to work together, wonder what Robbie has planned?
Looking forward to the next part!
Aaliyah
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
wow nice part so kasturi got the job and robbie likes kasturi but
kasturi feels him a irriating guy is'nt
anitha and her son's entry was also good
overall nice part but try to update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
u r doin a gr8 job
continue writin
ur writin is nice accordin to ur age
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
Hiya Emu, Sorry for the late reply was busy with Uni Work.
Just catched up with your FF, Wow that was a great part
Yipee Kasturi got the job I cant wait to see more scenes between Roka now,
Anita is really sweet in your FF atleast shes not evil here.
aww Anitas little son is really sweet I found it funny when he said
"mummy tu bahar kisis kuri say gaalan kar rahin hain'.aur who kuri bohut soni hai"🤣.
Cant wait till next Friday when you update the next part.
Great Part 👍🏼👏👏
Love Mariam xxx😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
rob called her 'yaaar'🤣 ka face was watch worthy
hmmmmmm looks like mr. ro is getting interested in ka he notices her too much
well emu i liked taht part
update very sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: robbii

me first ...will comment later

i am back.good sign that robbie decided to give job to kasturi...YEHH
without any questions he gave it too.ummmm good going....YAH HE JUS LIKED HER ALOT
robbie's sis and kasturi's bro in same college.hope they will form a pair...PROBABLY
lol mai bhe pak gayee huon yeah sir sir say.good in u r ff robbie said kasturi not to call sir.I KNOW I DIDN'T WANT HER TO CALL HIM SIR ANYMORE
i liked raunak shiv scene very cutely written.THANKS ALOT
lol that small boy calling robbie maamu...heee.😛😛😛HEHEHEHEEH
in u r ff anitha is so sweet .i like her.THANKS FRM MEAN CHARACTER TO A NICE ONE LOOKS AJEEB
great part👍🏼😃😃THANSK AALOT
dum dum dum....DUM DUM DUM

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