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Kriya_RoKa luvr

@ArjaAddict

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

woooooooo!!!very ncie part......very nice writing too.....continue fast1!!tc

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Sari

@cutykoo20

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

hmmmmm our robbie is brat here
song is well suited to d situation
waiting for ka entry
update sooooooooooon

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Neha

@miss_neha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

WOW... seems like an awesome ff... loved the concept of rebirth... cnt wait to read more!!!

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: robbieluvr
very nice part so robbie's the bad boy i like that character on him anyways i am eagerly waiting for kasturis entry now
plzzzzzzzzz update soon

Yep! Robbie's character is similar to Fardeen's character in Hum Ho Gaye Apnke... And Kasturi will enter soon

Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev
woooooooo!!!very ncie part......very nice writing too.....continue fast1!!tc

Thank you

😛

Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: cutykoo20
hmmmmm our robbie is brat here
song is well suited to d situation
waiting for ka entry
update sooooooooooon

Yep! Robbie is a spoiled brat...
That's why I pick the song
She will enter soon

😃

Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9
WOW... seems like an awesome ff... loved the concept of rebirth... cnt wait to read more!!!

Thanks

😛

Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Part Three... Beauty Contest

Jai leaves from there with embarrassed look on his face after seeing his eighteen year old son - drinking, smoking and dancing with girls like he is some sort of pimp.

<< Robbie in his apartment >>

Robbie gives Nikki a sari to wear and Nikki ask him "why this sari?"

"A face covered by a veil becomes even more beautiful. When the pallu slips off the shoulders. It's so comely. Round the waist, it's like a necklace in the neck." Robbie tells her in his drunk mode while taking puff from his cigarette.

Laughs for awhile than says "It's even more intoxicating" Robbie falls on the bed and continues to say "It's only the sari that's alluring when draped or taken off."

Nikki: I understand

Robbie: Good! Will you feel shy if I stay here? I can go out...

Nikki: No, I won't feel shy... But if I brush...

Robbie: Hmm

Nikki leans closer to him and says "Don't think I am acting"

Robbie: No need to say it... I know girls very well

Robbie gets up from the bed and asks her "would you like a drink?"

Nikki: Sure

Robbie spends the entire night with Nikki and forgets about his promise to Ganga who lives at home and he stays at his own flat.

<< Next Day >>

Ganga makes breakfast for Krishna and offers her dad who hardly eats her food she cooks for Robbie and Krishna. Even though Robbie lives on his own... he comes home for food and many other things like his weekly allowance... from their father.

"Di, is Robbie Bhaiyya coming home for breakfast or not?" Krishna asked

"I don't know" Ganga told her with anger in her tone

"Why wouldn't I come home for breakfast?" Robbie tells them from behind

Krishna hugs Robbie and says "why didn't you come home for your and Ganga di's birthday? We waited for you?"

Robbie looked at Krishna and hits himself on the head...

Afterwards, say sorry to Krishna and holds his ear in-front of Ganga

Ganga smiles and says "its okay"

Robbie hugs her and says "thank you... you are the best"

Robbie spends some time with his sisters than leaves toward Vicky's place because they are going to a Beauty Contest at Inter College...

"The moment that you have been waiting for his here... Who will be the beauty queen? And the beauty queen is... Ms. Kasturi Dasgupta"

Kasturi comes from the back stage dressed in western black dress. Does some twisting and turning while Robbie observes her from the audiences area...

Kasturi smile spread much bigger and Robbie observed her from bottom to top with a smile.

Kasturi stands still while they put her crown on her and a banner around her shoulder for being the beauty queen winner.

Robbie looks at her with a devil smile...

Kasturi's speech: Good evening ladies and gentlemen, A beauty contest gives a girl self-confidence. And self-confidence helps every man in society to scale heights of success. It is said there's a women behind every successful man. And I want to be that women.

Vicky as a smile on his face

Kasturi's speech: I am confident that in the future of my life... even if a coward enters my life... I can make him every peak of success. Life is beautiful. It should be lived.

Vicky as a huge smile on his face

Kasturi's speech: Don't fritter it away. I donate my price money to Mother Teresa's orphanage. Thank you so much.

Edited by Patel...Rocks - 16 years ago

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Iman

@robbieluvr

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

That was very nice part mickey loved it , wonderful, great job Kasruri's speech was soo nice she is a really nice person, i like her character a lot i know robbie will try to flirt with her now okay now plzzzz update soon i cant wait for them to meet