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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

part 1--

omg!very nice!

kabir villian*yay*

u kno wht...I love the re-incarnation concept!its so unique!

plz continue soon

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: saumya{roka}
i just read the concept and the character sketches.the concept of rebirth is really nice. the part was very well written. i could imagine both of them dying. hope that they meet in this janam.update soon

Thank you so much

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Mickey

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Miketa Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: swan20
love the concept & the character sketch.......😊...........the 1st part was rocking..........the VM at the end was so sad.....😭..........waiting to see how the story unfolds......😊

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Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: robbieluvr
OMG mickey😲 Wat a part yaar you are amazing!!! this the part was full of emotions👏 it was soooooooooooooo wonderful soooooo beautiful
the dialogues, everything was perfect👍🏼

FANTASTIC!!!!! For this part i give you a standing ovation

I am sooooooooooooo touched with this part and the way you wrote it i can actually picture them both dying for each other and i can feel their love for each other. It was just fantastic!!👏

i have no words this is what you deserve for this👏

Im waiting soooooooooo eagerly for the next part

i have never read a ff more then once but i have read this part twice it was sooooooooo amazing

The video was superb👏👏 all the memories WOW

Exellent job👏

Please update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

All death scenes are filled with emotions anyways thank you for waiting a long time for the next part...

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Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: cutykoo20
oh naya janam concept is really good
i like charactersketch
update soon

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Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev
awesome part.....
too too too emotional....

awesome writing!!!!

i jus hope dat roka will come accross as many barriers they have passed in the rpevious life.....

pls continue soon.....

bye take care!!

Thanks

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Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Shagun-Ki-Raat
Its me Tia again...! All the video mix are great especially the first promo and the first part is awesome... Please continue soon... I'll be waiting for next part.... so update soon!

Tia

Thanks Tia

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Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: shanu333
part 1--

omg!very nice!

kabir villian*yay*

u kno wht...I love the re-incarnation concept!its so unique!

plz continue soon

Thanks

😳

Mickey

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Miketa Patel

@Patel...Rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Part Two... Robbie intro after the re-birth

18yrs later

Bani never knew that her son, Robbie would turn out to be a casanova after her death five years ago. Even Mr. Singhania stop giving his kids the time they deserved - Robbie and Ganga always felt neglected after their mother's death but never let their younger sister Krishna feel the same.

One day, Robbie was sitting in his college canteen with his friends and interviewing a girl for his one night date... just like his father before he met his mother before they got married afterwards his father changed but now his son got the same bad habits.

Sometimes, Ganga tries her best in changing her brother's life style the way it was before their mother's death because she can't see her twin in pain.

<< Robbie interviewing his date >>

"What's your name?" Robbie asked with a smile

Robbie's friend answers in excitement... Dude, her name is Nikki

Robbie: Can't she speak?

Nikki repeats her name with a smile

Robbie also smiles back and says "a girl's name sounds sweet only when she says it. I like you"

Nikki: I know you like me... my dancing... my singing... and everything else is also superb

Nikki giving her sexiest smile to Robbie who puts a cigarette in his mouth and lights it with his own hands... in-front of her.

Robbie takes one puff and tries to say something but he gets hiccups...

Nikki passes him water

Robbie takes the water from her and says "no" and drinks his glass of coke mixed with liquor

<< Robbie's birthday party at the club while Ganga waits for him >>

Robbie celebrates his birthday with his friends at a club while Ganga waits for her twin brother so they can celebrate their birthday together... like always when Mom was alive.

Robbie is dancing with girls and girls...

Robbie: (Ishq hai kya kuch nahin hai mohabbat
Kal kuch nahin, bas yahi hai haqeeqat
Nazrein churaana na, yun dil jalaana na - 2
Aa mere nazdeek aa) - 2

Robbie pours beer on girls and says "Love me, love me just for the day
Love me, love me just for the day
Love me, love me just for the day
Love me, love me just for the day"

Krishna and Ganga waits for their brother to come home even their father who still is out at a business meeting...

Robbie: (Main to haseenon ka hoon deewana
Dilkash adaayein mera nishaana
Dekhoon jahan main baheki jawaani
Chhaane lage ek nasha) - 2
Kaise bataaoon tujhe meri haalat
Kal kuch nahin, bas yahi hai haqeeqat
Nazrein churaana na, yun dil jalaana na - 2
Aa mere nazdeek aa
Love me, love me just for the day - 4

Mr. Jai Singhania is also at the same place where Robbie is celebrating his birthday with all his girlfriends... even his ex-girlfriends....

Robbie: (Teri nasheeli aankhon se pee loon
Main do ghadi to masti mein jee loon
Kehti hai tere honton ki laali
Aa pyaas meri bujhaa) - 2
Achhi lage mujhe teri sharaarat
Kal kuch nahin, bas yahi hai haqeeqat
Nazrein churaana na, yun dil jalaana na - 2
Aa mere nazdeek aa

Ganga puts Krishna to bed without cutting the cake and goes running into her room and takes her mother's picture and cries for her because she feels lonely without her.

Robbie makes everyone repeats after him "Love me, love me just for the day" while he sings and dance around...

Jai saw his son drunk and dancing around crazy with girls and keeps on singing "Love me, love me just for the day

Yeah, love me, love me just for the day, c' mon!
Love me, love me just for the day
Just for the day!"

Edited by Patel...Rocks - 16 years ago