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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
roka goes to meet doctor

doctor brought kasturi behind the curtain n lies her on bed n checked her after few mins they came back

ro: doctor everything is f9 na

do: hmmmmmmm sab theek hai per aap aapni patni k khane peene ka buhut khayal rakhain ye buhut nazuk aur kamzoor hain

ro: daikha mian bhi tu yehi kehta tha

ka: achacha ab yaahn to na shoro ho jaen

they came back home
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
Robbie is back home with a sullen face....he is not talking to Kasturi...Though Kasturi tries to talk to him....he avoids her and cries in the meantime....Kasturi realises that Robbie cares so much for her and smiles...but her smile fades when she sees Robbie shedding tears for her.....
Kasturi: Sir...mein aapse...kuch....
Robbie gets up from bed and tries to leave the room when Kasturi holds his wrist tightly....
Kasturi: Mein jaanti hoon Sir...aap mere wajah se pareshaan aur dukhi hai....maine aapko hurt kiya hai na?? Mein bahut buri hoon na???
Kasturi is crying😭😭 while saying that and Robbie feels sad and looks at her.....
Kasturi: Par please Sir...aap mujhse baat to kijiye....aise mujhse aap door mat jayiye....I promise mein woh hi karoongi jo aap kaheinge...mein waqt pe khaana khaaoungi aur koi kaam nahin karoongi....I promise....Sir....aapki kasamh....
Robbie smiles and holds Kasturi's hand tightly to his heart.....and tells her.....
Robbie: Kasturi....please don't cry...look....I'm I'm sorry!!!! Ok....ab please rona band karo nahin to mein bhi rona shuru karoonga....!!! Phir mujhe chup karana....bahut mushkil hoga!!!!
Kasturi smiles and hugs Robbie....
Robbie: I love you Kasturi....I love you so much and care for you...humara baccha....Kasturi iss waqt tumhare saath ek aur zindagi ki responsibility bhi hai na.....toh uska khayaal bhi tumhein....I mean humein hi to rakhna hai....Kasturi I love you both⭐️⭐️...aur mein kissi ek ko bhi nahin khona chahta....Doctor ne...
Kasturi: Ok Sir....mein ab apna khayaal rakhoongi...
Robbie: That's like MY Kasturi😊😊😊....now...chalo....khaana khaate hai....
They both smile and go to the dining table.......
Edited by jazz rocks - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
While having lunch, Robbie gets a phone call....he goes and attends it and comes back....He looks very perturbed....he looks very worried....
Kasturi: Kya hua Sir??? Sab theek to hai na? Aap bahut pareshaan hai....kiska phone tha??
Robbie: Nahin Kasturi....jaane do!!!!
Kasturi: Keisse jaane doon mein....nahin aap batayiye....aapko meri kasamh....
Robbie: Ok....woh ek bahut bari company mujhe contract dene wali thi...par woh....kissi aur ko mil gayi aur humari company ko bahut nuksaan ho gaya....mujhe office bhi bulaya ja raha hai.....par mein...
Kasturi: It's ok Sir....aisa kabhi kabhi ho jaata hai....jo hum chahte hai...woh nahin hota....aur aap office kyun nahin jaana chahte?? Meri wajah se na??? Par you don't worry Sir...mein apna pura khayaal rakhungi...I promise...aur waise bhi...Alaana di aur Mom hai na mera khyaal rakhne ke liye...aap office jayiye....
Robbie: Par Kasturi.......mein....
Kasturi: Meine kaha na Sir....
Robbie: Ok....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
he goes to office.

kasturi was doing rest as robbie told her not to do any hectic work just hav rest.

nandu takes dinner for her she said 'nandu kaka aap yahan rakh dain main khaa longi'

kasturi thinks aftyer robbie arrival she will hav food wid him its almost 9:00 pm. she was waiting for him.

he gets back home at 10:30pm.

ro:hi kasturi

ka: hi aap ko buhut dair ho agi

ro: haan aaj kafi tiring day raha

ro: tum ne khana kha lia

he looks at food n he got angry

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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
ro: kasturi tum ne abhi tak khana nai khaya

ka: ji wo main

ro: tum kab samjho gi kitna ghlata hai ye tumhare liye

ka: haan

he was not listening her

ro: kion karti ho aisa itni dair ho gai aur khana nai khaya

ka: calm dwn ro main bas sir aapka intezar kar rahi thin k aap a jain to saath main kha lain

ro feels bad for yelling at her like this
he comes close to her face n holded wid his palm

ro: kasturi ye bachcha mere liye buhut imp hai

ro: aur tunmhari sehat bhi plz aisa ainda nmat kerna

ka: ok baba

ka: ab khana kha lain mujhe buhut bhook lag rahi hai

both had meal together
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
Next morning, it's already eight and Kasturi is still sleeping....Robbie is already up; but lets Kasturi sleep and looks at her.......and smiles.....Suddenly Kasturi wakes up and looks at the clock....
Kasturi: Sir....it's eight o'clock aur aapne mujhe uthayaa nahin????
Robbie: Kyun??? Tum sote hui itni cute lagti ho na....ke tumhe uthaane ka mann hi nahin karta......anyway....Good Morning sweetheart!!!!
Kasturi:(smiles) Good Morning Sir!!
Robbie: Well.....yeh loh...tumhari coffee....
Kasturi: Sir...aapne coffee banaya.....aap
Robbie: Kyun?? Kya mein apni biwi ke liye coffee nahin bana sakta kya??
Kasturi: Nahin....aisi koi baat nahin hai...woh to mein aise hi....aapse..
Robbie: Ok ok....ab chalo jaldi se pilo aur bataao keissa bana hai...
Kasturi tastes it and ........
Kasturi: Arre Sir....isme to shakar hi nahin hai....!!!!
Robbie gives a fading smile and puts some sugar in the coffee and gives the cup back to Kasturi......after tasting it...Kasturi looks at Robbie....
Kasturi: Bahut mithi hai Sir!!!! It's too sweet....
Robbie goes to add some water when Kasturi starts laughing loudly....and Robbie realises that Kasturi was joking....
Robbie: Oho!!! To abhi se nakhre!!!! Not bad!!!! waise mujhse aur kuch sewa karwani hai toh...................????
Kasturi: Arre nahin Sir!! I think aaj ke liye bas.....
Robbie: Thank you Madam....atleast mujhpar taras to aaya aapko!!
They both laugh and hug each other.....
Edited by jazz rocks - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: cutykoo20

@jazz thats sweet part

Thanks a lot.....will update soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
Robbie is leaving for office when suddenly Devika stops him.....
Devika: Don't go son!
Robbie: But why Mom? Aaj itni important meeting hai....aur aapki Kasturi ki chakkar me der bhi ho gayi aur aap mujhe....come on Mom!!
Devika: No Robbie....meri baat suno....Mein abhi dekh kar aa rahi hoon....Kasturi has fainted beta....
Robbie: What???
They both rush inside and come to the room....Alaana and Nikhil are there, near Kasturi....They both stand up and Robbie sits near Kasturi... They call the doc...
Doctor: Yeh kya Mr Sabbarwal...Meine aapse kaha tha na...apne wife ka khayaal rakhiye...aur yeh....uska yun behosh hona....bilkul acchi baat nahin hai....kabse ho rahi hai yeh??
Robbie: No Doctor....abhi to theek thi yeh....aur achanak...yeh sab...I just don't understand...yeh keisse hua...I mean..........
Doctor: Ok....Par mujhe lagta hai ki baat kuch aur hai...aapki wife ko ek shock...ya phir woh ek bahut baraa raaz chhupa rahi hai....
Devika: What do you mean by bahut baraa raaz doctor? Baat kya hain??
Doctor: Yeh aapki bahu hi bata sakti hai....
The doctor leaves and Kasturi gains senses....Everyone is near her and they are all worried....
Robbie: Kya baat hain Kasturi? Koi problem....I mean....tum humse kuch chhupa rahi ho na??
Kasturi: Yeh kya keh rahe hai aap Sir?? Mein aapse kya....??
Kasturi looks pale....She is worried....petrified.....and says to herself...
Kasturi: Agar kissi ko iss raaz ke baare me pata chala toh??
PREVIEW: Aisa kaunsa raaz chhupa rahi hai Kasturi......???????
That's the title montage for this new climax in the story:
Hope you guys like it....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
jazz rocks=nice montage....
NEXT PART:
RoKa alone in room.Robbie comes & sits on the bed near Kasturi
Robbie:KASTURI!kya baat hai.Apney Robbie ko bhe nahe butao ge???Dekho shyed mein tumhary pareshani mein kuch kami la sako.Pehley mein chup isliye hogaya kuon ke mein samjha shayed ye baat tum mom+dad ke samney nahe butana chahti leken ab buta do.Plz,i m worried.U know-u can trust me
Kasturi:SIR!koi baat nahe hai.App khamakha pareshaan horahe hai.Sach mein-kuch nahe howa hai.Aur mein app se kuch nahe chupa rahe
Robbie isn't satisfied buh still
Robbie:promise
Kasturi:promise
KASTURI thinkin in heart:i m sorry -sir



Edited by muneefah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
Kasturi is feeling guilty as she cannot tell Robbie anything about that secret....She is totally perturbed when Alaana comes to her....
Alaana: Kasturi!
Kasturi: Ji ...arre Alaana di aap???!!!!!!
Alaana: Kya baat hai Kasturi? Mein jaanti hoon..tum Robbie ko pareshaan nahin karna chahti...par mujhe to bata sakti ho na....what's the matter Kasturi??
Kasturi: Kuch nahin hai Alaana di....koi baat nahin hai!!!
Alaana: Dekha....tum mujhe 'Alaana di' kehti ho....par kuch nahin batati...please Kasturi tell me.....
Nikhil: Oh....Sorry to disturb you guys but.....Alaana....mujhe office jaana hai...aur meri shirt....
Alaana: Oh God!! I'm so sorry Nikhil...mein to bhool hi gayi...no problem....mein abhi press kar deti hoon!!!!!
Alaana goes and Nikhil talks to Kasturi....
Nikhil: I know ki meine tumhe bahut dukh diye....lekin Kasturi dekho....sab kuch bhool kar...apne iss Bhai ko yeh nahin bata sakti ho...ki baat kya hai? Please Kasturi....
Kasturi: KYA HUA?????? kucch bhi to nahin! Kyun aap sab log yeh chahte hai ki mein aap ko kuch bataaoon.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nikhil: Nahin Kasturi...mein to sirf.....
Kasturi: Please Nikhilji!!!! Please stop it aur mujhe apne haal par chhor dijiye.....PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The furious Kasturi leaves from there and Nikhil is still puzzled....Robbie has overheard everything......
Robbie: Aakhir baat kya hai? Meri Kasturi....jo sirf hamesha meethi bol bolti thi...aaj woh itni karwe bol...nahin....kuch to baat hai jo meri Kasturi chhupa rahi hai...mein ab bahut hi pareshaan ho raha hoon...mujhe pata lagana hi parega..................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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