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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: robbieluvr
OMG wat an amazing part you totally surprised me tum ne to unki egagement hi kardi. WAH👏 thank u now i cant wait to read the next part soon i will post inshallah it's amazing how you give discriptio for everything. great job thank u once again:)

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: cutykoo20
wow dey r engagaed ab ayega maza😳 yep u can some cute nook jook of RoKa
update soon yep....inshallah
lovely part thank u

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

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PART-8

next day was sunday.robbie called his mother devika, while speaking to her he told about puru's proposal ...devika was very happy with this news.

devika: 'robbie mai bahuth kush huon.mai tho sochchi thee issay kush ghabari meyri zindagee mai kabhee nahee aanay waala hai....i should be thankful to god...robbie muchay kasturi say melwawo...'

devika: 'thum kahotho mai delhi aajaawongi..'she was excited.

robbie: 'maa abhee nahee mai dayktha huon...."he interrupted.

robbie visited puru every day, after his office, before going to his apartment.puru's health improved very fast.there was no much improvement in RoKa relation.only thing is whenever they come across they exchange a warm and sweet smile.puru noticed that.

there are few days ahead for Dewali.usually sabarwal industry declares holiday for 3 days.if it prefixes or suffixes saturday and sunday... it comes to 5 days holiday.robbie use to go to OOTY to celebrate Dewali with his mother every year.

in sabawal house hall robbie,kasturi and puru were having tea.

robbie:'sir mai next week Dewali holidays mai maa kay paas jaana chahatha huon.'

puru:'i know...robbie i wish this time u take kasturi also with u..' which shook kasturi.robbie liked that idea but kasturi hesitated she interrupted puru...

kasturi:'dad...i don't want to leave u and go aur office mai bhee bahuth saaray kaam hai...'she refused.

puru: 'come on kasturi ...ab mai teek huon...maaji is there to care me.no need to worry about the office waisay bhee it is going to be a holiday...more over Ooty is a beautiful place...u must visit it.i am sure u will like it....'

kasturi:'Ooty...?'she has heard about it.

puru:'mai nay thum loogongay liyeah ticket book karwaadhi hai...he went and brought the ticket and gave it to them.the ticket was like this...

from Delhi to Coimbatore by domestic flight.....return ticket from Chennai to Delhi by Rajdhaani express.robbie and kasturi got confused.' why return ticket by train..?'kasturi asked.

puru:'kasturi.... now it is season .all flights are full ...don't worry Rajdhaani express is much better than flight .u will have more comfort in it ..."

kasturi was bit worried about this trip.in fact she don't want to go.robbie called his mother and told her about their visit.devika was very happy and excited to meet kasturi.

it is tuesday.

robbie and kasturi left the office before the lunch break..they have their flight by evening 5 pm.both of them packed their luggage separately.they took lot of winter cloth with them.by 3pm robbie reached sabarwal house.

kasturi was waiting for him.she was wearing a white sleeveless kurtha with pink embroidery on it....which was touching her thigh...no dupatta...below that a dark blue parallel jeans with high heels sandals .on her left hand her usual black leather strap watch ... in her right hand along with robbie's finger ring she was wearing a gold bracelet....a thin plain gold chain around her neck and a small dangling ear ring added her beauty.when robbie looked at her he was literally speechless...' am i deserve her..?.'for a moment he thought.

robbie was not less than kasturi.he was wearing a black jeans on the top of it slightly loose plain gray expensive T- shirt which had the following black wordings on it

"it is not attitude...

that is what i am.."

he had a complete shave,silky hair trimmed just below his earlobes was neatly backcombed.with dark brown shoes he kept his legs little bit apart and was standing in front of puru.boys are not new for kasturi .she has seen hundreds of them from different country from white skin to black in UK but never impressed by any...in fact most of the time she try to make fun of them.but today she could not resist herself from eyeing him.

puru hugged both of them and wished happy journey.totally there were 3 baggage

two from kasturi one robbie's.in both the hands he took all three....went out after taking the blessings of nanima.sabarwal house driver srikanth(lol he is another buddha of kasturi serial who annoys me )drop them at the air port.

they check in and boarded the flight.robbie left the window seat for kasturi to sit ...he sat next to her right hand side.kasturi made a small prayer before the take off.air hostess announced them to fasten the seat belt cuz the flight is going to take off shortly.for both of them flight journey is not new.

kasturi put up her belt.while robbie was trying to put up his belt . his right hand side belt got twisted and stuck .kasturi turned her neck and looked at him .he was trying to make it straight but could not.

kasturi:'just a minute...'she leaned on him...pull the belt to make it straight.it is unexpected for robbie.her head was just below his chin... her freshly shampooed hair and white marble like back just below her neck which was uncovered by her kurtha mesmerized him...he was speechless...he started counting 1,2,3....to con troll himself.she fixed the belt...when she was about to sit straight on her seat she found that her bracelet hooked in to his T shirt..when she was about to pull it robbie hold her wrist....she became numb.she want to pull her hand from his...but could not.warm feeling of his hand in no second spread through her body.he removed the bracelet from her hand to set her hand free immediately.then he removed the bracelet with care from his Tshirt and gave it back to her..her face became pink...'that is y i don't wear all these nonsense...' she said to herself in her mind.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

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PART-9

OOTY:

Ooty is a beautiful hill station located in TamilNadu state , most southern part of india.it is known as Queen of hill station with Blue Mountains, Lakes, Gardens, Doddabetta, Pykara Falls , avalanche, cairn hill, children's park, glenmorgen,flower show,horse racing, boat ride...toy train ride on nilgiri mountains are remarkable one.Niligiri Tea estate is another beautiful feature of ooty.in summer the maximum tempeture goes up to 25 degree C.in winter the minimum is 5 degree C.cuz of this wonderful climate most of the south indians go for their honeymoon.there are lot of boarding schools for NRI children and lot of bollywood actors have their own holiday resorts and go there to spend their vacation.

robbie's father was working in Nilgiri Tea estate as a manager.her mother is still working as a teacher in a higher secondary school run by sharuk khan(he has a school there) and teaches English to grade10 student.

robbie and kasturi landed Coimbatore and took a taxi to reach ooty.by the time they reached home it was night 9pm.devika and robbie's sister Alaana were awaiting for them.robbie took the luggage from the dicky and went in to his home.kasturi followed him.devika received them.robbie kept the luggage down and hugged devika.

robbie:'maa...aap kaisay ho...'

devika:'bilkool teek..."

kasturi:'namastay..." devika looked at kasturi...

devika:'mai nay APSARA kay baaray mai sunaa hai...aaj thayklee...' kasturi gave a smile in return.by that time alaana jumped out of her computer ... came and hugged robbie.

alaana:'bhai...yyyaa' alaana is robbie's only sister doing her grade eleven.

alaana:'hi...'she shook hand with kasturi.

devika:'thum loog fresh ho jaawo...dinner ready hai...'

robbie:'nahee maa...muchajay kuch nahee ghanaa...i am damn tired... i want to go to bed ..'even kasturi felt the same.

devika's house:

it was constructed in 2400 squre feet....it was a bit old house but neatly maitained well furnished. As soon as they entered there is a big hall with a 1 meter square feet open space...there are 4 bed rooms . left hand side of the hall 2 and right hand side of the hall 2.on the left hand side after the bed room there was a small dinning hall...opposite to it there was a big kitchen.left hand side first room is always robbie's.next room she allotted for kasturi.right hand side rooms are for alaana and devika.

alaana took kasturi to show her room.kasturi went and sat on the bed.she looked around and noticed all the curtains , bed spreads , pillows were brand new.devika changed every thing as soon as she heard kasturi is going to come to ooty.

next day morning 7 o'clock.

kasturi woke up.it took some time to understand that she is not in sabarwal house.yesterday night before going to bed she did not close her room's door.the door was wide open.she sat on the bed and looked out side of the door.she can see the complete view of the hall..but not the dinning hall and kitchen.

she saw..in the hall robbie was doing push ups..with pajama, without shirt.she don't want to go out now.she was sitting and thinking...she was waiting for him to complete his push ups.

devika brought tea for robbie and kept it on the dinning table.

devika:'robbie chaai thandi horahee hai..."robbie took a towel from the sofa ,covered his body with that...went to dinning table to drink tea.todays paper was kept on the table.he took it and started reading ...while drinking tea.

alaana"maa towel kidther hai...?'she came to the hall with hands and face wet.she was screaming and searching for the towel.as soon as she saw the towel on robbie's shoulder she grabbed it from him.when she pull the towel from his shoulder he got annoyed

robbie:'alaaan......' he pushed the chair back,got up and went to catch alaana.she started running in the hall which made him more angry.kasturi thought robbie finished his push ups so she came out of her bed room.but she never expected that robbie chasing alaana .unknowingly she came between them.robbie bump on her.she was about to fall but managed by holding robbie's right masculine arm.he was standing with out shirt with wide chest in front of her.kasturi was standing with a pink transparent low neck night dress.robbie glued at her...then slowly he gazed down to her neck...and then below the neck...😳

alaana turned back and looked at them..'omg...aaj tho mai gayee...'she threw the towel on them.it fall and covered both of them face for a while and fall down.robbie kept his step forward...and try to lean closed to her face.....immediately kasturi left his hand and moved back.

robbie came back to his sense as if he was out of black magic."alaaan...'he ran behind her.alaana ran to kitchen where devika was...'maaa....'robbie followed her...

robbie:' mai aaj thumai chodnay waala nahee...'he was trying to catch.

devika; 'chod naa robbie....jaanay dtho...'she said by hiding her smile.she was noticing the whole scene including RoKa covered behind the towel.

robbie:'aaj maa kay wajai say bachgayee...'

devika: 'jaakay shirt payhanloow..'she quiped.robbie got embraced and went away from there.... while going to his room he looked at kasturi.

kasturi was still standing there and looking at robbie....she thought' i never saw this robbie before ..'

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago

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Sari

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

oh i m d 1st 1 who read it
i cant express wat a bootiful parts
i m in luv wid ur ff more now so cute parts

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annu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

sorry iam late thank you for quick update of 7 & 8th part

all 678 parts were wonderfull i was wow roka got engaged then again wow for their trip and then double wow when kasturi falls in his embrace

robbii u r really superb i loved all aprts and ur sense of humour is so good that kabir is roobie servant kabir jiju is kastuir servant

it was really fuuny

overall all were very good parts and thorughly enjoyed

thanku for theses lovely updates

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Iman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

WOW two very very amazing parts. Roka romance is just sooooooooo wonderful. Omg and i love you for writting two parts at the same time and i just love that you update every day. I cant wait for the next part. update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz. GREAT JOB!!!!!

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Marui Ansari

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Really enjoyable scenes with all this attraction between RoKa - it will be difficult for them to carry on without falling into each other's arms- It is going to be very interesting to see how you deal with this - look forward.

Noted that mention of Shahrukh! and his school- and choosing Ooty for the holiday was a really good idea. But cannot understand why Kasturi was reluctant to come with Robbie- wouldnt she miss him? and what about wanting to see his mother and sister. Anyway she is here now and the situation seems promising.

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

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PART-10

kasturi was still standing in the hall without knowing what to do.

early morning devika took bath.she was wearing a cotton sari.a small bindi between her eyebrows .she tied and pinned up her hair.she is fair and a simple beauty.she brought tea for kasturi.

kasturi:'i don't drink bed tea...'she refused.alaana and robbie came back to the hall.

kasturi:'there is no bathroom in my bedroom.....'she did not complete.alaana started laughing.robbie looked at alaana with anger.😡

alaana:'bedroom mai bath room hah hahhh🤣...yeah delhi nahee hai.ooty hai...here we don't keep bathroom/washroom in side the bed room...yahaan yeah ashudth maanajatha hai.....wodhar daykhoo..'behind the kitchen there was a big back yard...'wahaan hai...'she showed the back yard.'omg...now i have to adjust this too' she took the towel and went.the bath room was not as she expected.it was really good with all facilities bath tub,shower,big mirror wash basin...including phone...it was very clean.after their bath all gathered at the dinning table around 8am for breakfast.

it was a 4 seater dinning table.kasturi sat beside alaana ,robbie opposite to kasturi.kasturi was wearing an apple green salwar with a dupatta spread on her both the shoulders.robbie understood that this dupatta is cuz of him...he felt bad for his behavior.devika served iddles(rice cake) to them with tri colour chatni white chatni(coconut) red chatni(tamato),greenchatni(mint) in one cup she served sambaar(a kind of dhall goes well with iddle)...most important is ...she served the food on the clean banana leaf.it is a south indian traditional way of eating.kasturi just loved the iddle...'pizza, hot dog,burger...are all nothing in front of these soft white iddles...:she thought.she loveeed eating the food on banana leaf.

while eating ...

alaana:'ummm....'

robbie: kya sooch rahee ho..?"

alaana:i was thinking... how it will be if i change my hair cut like this...'she looked at kasturi.

robbie:🤣...he started laughing loudly.

alaana;'comeon bhiya...issmai hassnay ki baath kya hai...'she got angry🤢😡

alaana:'uummmm.......'still looking at kasturi.

robbie:'ab kya?' he knows if she open her mouth she may say some weird things.

alaana:'nothing...just i was thinking how should i call her??? ummm aunty.."no she is so young;.... 'bhabi'...'no 'that is too early.

call her 'mam' said robbie with a hidden smile 😊on his face.

alaana:'mam...?"

robbie:'obviously...that is what i call her..."he shock his shoulder... looking at kasturi's irritating face.

alaana:'bhaiya...mam is such a boring word u know...saaray dhin school mai... mam..mam kahethee rahathee huon...fir ghar pay bhee 'mam'....ufff...

kasturi:'u can call me by name...'...

robbie showed "no' to alaana with action.

devika:'kasturi thum lunch mai kya loogay...which is your favorite food..."to make the situation easy she changed the topic.

robbie:'biriyani....chicken biriyani...'he said immediately....looking at kasturi.

alaana:'chicken biriyani...!!!'she looked at devika and giggled...'omg...i am getting late to my school..she rushed up to the school.actually today she don't want to go to school but she don't want to miss her math unit test too.she was wearing a gray pinoform with blue sweater,she had two ponny tails both the side.

alaana:'maa...today is a early release day ...i will be back by 1pm...'she said bye to all and went.

after she went to school the house became dead silent.

devika:'robbie...market say vegetables laawo...'she gave a plastic basket to him.robbie took the basket and his helmet to go to market.

devika: kasturi ko bhee saath layjaawo...ghar pay bore hojaayeah ghee...more over ooty market is one of the place to visit.'

robbie went out ,wore his helmet ,sat on the bajaj...he uses his two wheeler whenever he comes here.kasturi came behind him.sat on the back seat of bajaj.she hold the back side stand for the support.when he started the vehicle..it was so scary ...two wheeler ride is new for her.she tried to manage..but could not..she slide her right hand around his waist ,closed her eyes and leaned on his back...she felt a jerk in robbie's body.'how long she was sitting like that' she don't know....even after he stopped the bajaj near the market she was sitting in the same pose...robbie got embraced.

robbie:'get down...'kasturi opened her eyes and saw... they were in the market.now she got embraced she avoid facing robbie.

it is a open space market.no AC nothing.the climate was so cool.vendors keeping the fresh vegetables in the cart and selling.carrot,red raddish,shimla mirch,gopi,corn,...all the vegetables were fresh .some were selling fruits some were flowers...it was so noicy and colourful...both of them went to vendors and purchased vegetables.kasturi was admiring the way robbie was talking to them while buying .

a lady vendor:'saab aap ki patini bahuth sunder hai...'all of a sudden she said.robbie looked at kasturi...her face turned red.

robbie:'yeah??...patni..? nahee tho..."

robbie:'yeah meri boss hai...🤣 he laughed.before he continued...kasturi stamped his foot."ouch" he made a painful noise

vendor:'boossss???"she don't understand.

robbie:'mathlab maalkin...' 😃

kasturi:😡

robbie:🤣

vendod:'har patni pathee ki maalkin hee hothi hai...'she said the fact.

robbie:'wahee tho mai bathaa rahaa huon..' he laughed at her.

back home:

as soon as they came devika gave them a gud filter coffee.kasturi really really need that coffee.robbie and kasturi were sitting on the sofa and drinking coffee.Timhortone, star bucks cappuccino are all nothing in front of this south indian filter coffee ...she was thinking while enjoying the coffee.devika looked at kasturi with passion.

robbie;'issay kya daykrahee ho maa..'?he raised his eyebrow...

devika:'kithnee maasoom lagrahee hai..."she looked at her innocent face and said...

robbie:'maasooom!!!...yeah???'he kept the coffee cup down and started laughing loudly

robbie:'maa..thumai patha hai?office mai yeah muchjay kithnaa danth thee hai...😭' he showed his crying face.

robbie:' ouch...mmaaaa...'he said loudly ...cuz kasturi stamped his foot again.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago