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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

soz 4 my kind of long comments hehe
i m likin dem
Part 9:

hehe robbie you scared of take off in the plane 😆😆
i h8 that bit too
me 2
take some gum lolz
lolxx
but hey you got kasturi
lolz hehe wel done kasturi
omg robbie your gym
wowww a girl came in
no doubt its kasturi
😲 u havent got a girlfriend robbie hows that possible 😆
mayb he's waitin for me..lolxx
oh yh because kasturi is going to be that girl 😆
lolz hehe her therapy isnt bekaar 😆
wow wow imran khan dont blame her reading about him lolz
your fav actor one of my fav 2 lolz snapz kasturi
i luv imran
they never talked the rest of the journey
how boring lolz
😃
yh kasturi its vancouver going to be cold
awww how sweet robbie
being such a gentlemen giving your jacket to her bless
robbie awwwwwwww your falling in love
not that you know yet lolz
wow robie 5 minz
finaly you rememberd kasturi she must be freezing
wow robbie all of that in one paragraph
well odne munz
thanks hummy
now u cn take a breath robbie hehe
part was aweosme
i wonder what devika will think of kasturi
will she accept her 😕
let me read part 10 lolz
okay...jaldu jaldi parho & gme ur comments


Part 10:

wow puru u stopped her 😲
let me guess the rasm ?
😆
lolz hehe i thought so
robbie your plans working 👏
tingly feeling robbie
awww signs of love 😆
definatetly
robbie kasturis sanskari 😆
Bet robbies room is awesome lolz
omg how sweet robbie caught kasturi before she could slip
bless
liek their first meeting in aksturi
mines too
omg thats on of my fav scenes lolz
wow what background music lolz
loved the lyrics
awww robbie you fell asleep
robbie theirs nothing bad about you lolz
😆 hehe robbie in a bar
i go with kasturi mandirs better lmao
😆hehe😃
😃wow kasturi well done 👏
😆 wheres my lunch munz? hehe
part was fabulous
mazaa agayaa
thanks humyy


Part 11:
awwwww munz when you writ this you were so tired bless
wowww a party
yayyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thnx munz lolz
thnx devika aunty 4 throwing a party
im deffinately going to be their 😆🥳
🥳
Do meet me
oh jus a shalwar kameez
wowwwww how sweet robbie
yh ure going to sleep on the sofa bless
loved this bit

Hamesha larka-ye mujhey khud nahe pata ke larka hamesha qurbani ka bakra kuon banta hai per bunta hai to kya karo.& being the gentlemen,tum bed pe so mein sofey pe.

lolz pataa nahi kyu bakraa bantaa hein lmao

& yh robbie your a true gentlemen lolz.

i know...he's a genteman lolz kasturi hehe yh in indian films so unrealistic omg wow lolz but their is kasturi love between you and robbie time will tel init lolz yh both of u are very stubborn u knw that lolz what a way robbie hehe id be like come on then hum poori raath baat karengey lolz

meray bhagair..mujhey bhe bulana..hmmm???
awwwwwwwww bless robbie yh bet kasturi was looking so cute when sleepin and that made u drift 2 sleep as well awww

loved the part munz

just shows how sweet robbie is

😳thanks hummy



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Part 12:
okay i think your getting bored of my comments now lolz
no i m not not..i m luvin dem
but oh well hehe
when you writ this part you wished every 1 eid Mubarak
well belated eid mubarak hun 😆
😳
okay now with the part:
hey kasturi taking a shower
w8 let me guess when shes drying her hair drops fall on robbie? (wild guess lolz)
yay!!!!!!!!
i guessed right 😆
good guesser!!!!
wow kasturi your mesmerizing robbie already lol
😲 kasturi kissed him
omg u scared me then oh dream sequence only if that was true and she really did lolz
dat wud b a scene
lol why was kasturi so shocked saree?
im sure she must have wore one before
or hasn't she?
no she hasnt
awww robbie your happy & kasturi why you nervous its only robbie 😆
kasturi : im busted im doomed
wow she speaks our words hey munz lmao
haha......yup!!she does
😆 kasturi you dont know how to wear a saree
same here lolz
its too confusing hehe
same here 2
wow kasturi
wel done u dont do make up 👏😆 you dont need it either
loved the part
now reading next part lolz
ahww.glad u liked it




Part 13:

wow robbie cool place to take kasturi
to a lake-fabulous
romantic hehe lmao
omg that lake
no ways im jealous
munz your going to have to take me their
its beautiful
i soooo want 2 go their lolz
well,i havent gone dere mysekf...mein khud hoyay.den ill take u too
wow
robbie hehe shes beautiful lolz
hehe dupata kasturi got hold of
but wow robbie your falling 4 her
omg whens kasturi going to??????😕😆
lolz go robbie yh
har waqt tumhara mann nahi lagta kyun??? kasturi
star bucks
i go their lmao
really??/
😆 yh kasturi your so lucky you got robbie lolz
munz
d saree pik
omg seriously i cant c it 😔
can u post the link again please????? 😉
i will try hummy
wow wel done
robbie the saree u caught a glimpse of
which i cant c lmao
😲
the part was gr8
i thought kasturi would try it on
but hey thats going to happen in nest part right? lolz
nope it isnt..heheheee





Part 14:

wowwww kasturi
bet you are looking beautiful
wonder whats going to happen 2 robbie when he sees you
his going to faint
w8 let me call an ambulance lmao
😆
yh woh sab bhool jayega kasturi and he'll jus fall for you even more wow
blew robbies mind away
wel done kasturi 👏👏😆
wow girl of your dreams omg
just like what you wanted
youve got her
omg kasturi whens your love going to ever start ??????????
ummmmm
yh drama acha lag raha hein lmao
loved the part hehe
robbie your falling for her 🥳
🥳🥳
i m luvin ur comments

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Part 15:
wowww robbie
you've been watching kasturis every move
and awwwww she hasnt smiled once
let me guess your going to be on a mission to make her smile 😆😃
wow...ur second guess dat to rite!!yayee
lolz hehe yh robbie your a very lucky man
lolz hehe
papu
omg robbie dancing like mad hehe lmao
awwwwwwwwwww robbie how sweet
your such a sweetheart
the song just fits in the situation so well
wowwwwwwwwwww 👏 omg robbie congo u made her smile
😃
aw u done that for a smile of hers
the lyrics you probably would do that omg 😭😭 how sweet
🥳
🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww roka totaly rock
i love your Ff
its just so emotional
i m so glad
shows their friends
not knowing each other at all
but kasturi decides to go with him 2 repay 4 him 4 what he did for her
Your FF is really different
which makes the story line orignal ⭐️ i love your FF 👏
ur comments made my day..thanks



Part 16:
awwwwwwwwww robbie don't worry kasturi has not done a runner yet lolz
omg the pik jus really brings back memorys of roka
I can actualy imagine it happening lolz
awwwwww kasturi
you liked spilled your emotions to robbie
& yh awww robbie words wont console her right now
awww robbie
you dont need to feel jealous of rohan
his an idiot
true
how can he hit and beat such a wife like kasturi 😡
robbie tum hein us ki parwaa hein is liye
xactly



Part 17:
awwwwwwwwww robbie
you stilll cant sleep can you
wow kasturi you okay
omg robbie shes bleeding lolz
oh well your their to take care of it 😆
😃
😳awwwwww robbie how sweet and kasturi you can scream
wow lolz
haha!!!in da drama-her scremm is v.funny
chali gi kyaa khaak lmao
wow omg
he lifts her up yay
first romantic thing omg omg 🥳
hmmm...
while he was carrying her did they have eye lock??????? lolz
hmm..howa tha..likna bhul gaye
😡 kasturi rohan rohan rohan
omg robbie tum hara kitna khyaal rakhta hein us ka kyaa?
when she goin to fall 4 him lolz
im getting impatient lmao
lolxx.phir jaldi se aggey parh lo


Part 18:

woww kasturi where you gone?
awwww robbie your getting restless
wow robbie
tum bhagwan se kuch maang rehe ho????? kyaa baath hein
wow omg
first u held her hand
and now hug omg 😲
lolz hehe
robbie omg
that tum meri meri
lmao
lolxx
you dotn know the answer to that yet yourself
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
omg i loved how youve done the last scene
like robbies confused
but your version wow
omg 😲

the song lyrics
omg robbie yh u love kasturi
very very very very very i cant emphasise on the verys much lolz
ahww.so shweet
you worked hard on this part
munz just shows you did
😳
i loved it really
one of your best parts
how robbies like being possesive
the alst scene is just awesome
omg
robbies in lvoe
in love
in love
in love
wd kasturi
🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

hummy..u r da best coimmentor..i m luvin ur comments..muah
lolz munz thats it for 2dai
il try and read the rest parts 2morow
okay
until then
🤗
thnx 4 writing such a gr8 FF
👏
ahwww.sho shweet & cute
Luv Hummy
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Posted: 16 years ago
so here i am with da last part of my FF....
~~~~PART 25~~~~
RoKa standing in a line
Kasturi:bola tha na mein ne ke wonderland aney ki koi zarurat nahe hai.Pehley he mujhey heights se dar lagta hai aur app mujhey bunjee jumping karaney laye hai....
Robbie:kuch nahe ho ga.U hav got to do bunjee jumping..Bohat maza aye ga..
RoKa r in a wonderland-& r abt to do bunjee jumping
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Man:okay!its ur turn now...Ill tie both of u...
The man tied dem.
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RoKA doing bunjee jumping.Here is the video.
(actually its of my bros+coxin doin bunjee jumping buh i want u to use ur imagination.Just cut out the right hand guy.& imagne two ppl r doing it.One Robbie one Kasturi.The same facial xpressions of RoKa like in the video.)hehe
link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jWeTLOu8fcI

T
hru out the video,RoKa r shouting like mad
After doing it-
Ka:omg!!!it was so much fun...
Ro:i knw......c???maza aya na.....
Dey go on a few more rides & den dey go for lunch at Popeye's
RoKa eating lunch:
Ro:Kasturi!tumhe bachey kitney pasand hai
Ka:(laughs)lo!!!abhe humary shaadi nahe hoye aur app bacho tak pauhanch gaye.
Ro:tou is mein aisi kya baat hai.Kal he tou humary shaadi hai.Lagta hai madam bhul rahe hai.
RoKa marriage was 2mrow...In mississauga!!it was just RoKa & da pandit...No guests As robbie had to keep up da lie dat dey were married from before
aur waisay bhe
jab miya biwi razi tou kya karey ga qazi...
Ka:hmm!!bache mujhey do chaahiye.Pehle a girl den a boy
Ro:gr8!!phir humary laraye nahe ho ge ke larka hou ya larki jis tarha baqi ghuron mein hota hai..kuon ke i want a gurl too
Both laugh

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RoKa's wedding the next day.it took place in a simple manner.all the requirements of the pandit were filled & done..





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Dont xpect suhaag raat scenes from me..I cant write such stuff________sorry
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5 months later...
Kasturi went for a month to india after two months of her marriage to meet her parents.She told her parents everything & dey asked for forgiveness & she obviously forgave dem.Now its been 2 months since she is back.
Ka:uthey!!!app ko dair ho rahe hai..Its 8:00am....App ko jana tha
Ro:hhhhmmm
Robbie mumbles in his sleep.
Ka:uthtey he nahe hai phir kehtey hai uthate nahe.
& she turns around to go away wen Robbie grabs her hand...
Robbie:ab shikayaat karne hai tou mujh se karo,deewaro se kuon kar rahe ho.
Ka:chalo isi bahane app uthe tou sahe.ab uthey u r getting late.
Suddenly she felt dizzy..
Ro getting up from the bed & making Kasturi sit on the bed
Ro:r u alrite
Ka doesnt answers.
& suddenly she faints.
Ro brings water & calls da doc
Doc after chekin Kasturi & cumin out ofthe room
Doc:Mr.Robbie Sabharwal.Ur wife is expecting.Congratualtions.Bring her for checkups.
Ro:r u serious!!!r u freakin serious????(out of happiness)
Doc:i m not authorised to joke wid u(in a serious tone)
Ro:oh!i didnt meant dat.Buh thanku so much..I'll definately cum to ur clinic.
Ro goes to the room
Ro:thanku so much Kasturi.Tumhey pata hai tum xpect kar rahe ho
tears started running down out of happiness from Kasturi's eyes
Ro:OHHH no!
He goes & sits besides Kasturi.Wipes her tears
Ro:khushi ho ya gham-tumhey tou bas roney ka jaisay shauq hai.I mean hash ke bhe dekha sakhte ho dat u r happy.Ab no rona....Smile,Rest,Enjoy life for whole 9months.Aur ab sarey kaam mein karo ga..unlukily even cooking...Okay!
Ka smiles at her & shakes her head in a yes
Ro:Kasturi!i luv u & i promise i m neva gonna let u down..Ill always-always b dere for u.
He kisses Kasturi on her forehead.
&
Ro:v need sum celebration yaaar!Lets go out today & have dinner & den lets go for a long drive where its just u & me and our hapiness.
Ka:okay!!!!per abhe tou subhah ke aath bujey hai..app ko kaam se jana tha
Ro:kon sa kaam..Ye bhe tou itna imp kaam hai.Tumhe company dena.Baqi sab baad mein ata hai

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6 years later:
RoKA dining table:
Ka:iman!!ajj aggar tum ne doodh nahe piya-tou mujh se bura koi nahe hoga
Iman is RoKa's 5yrs old daughter.
Iman:buh mom mujhey tropicana ka 100% pure juice peena hai woh bhe with pulp..
Ro having his breakfast:Ka!!peeney do na issey juice.Kya farq parta hai.
Ka in a stern voice:it's unhealthy...
Ro gave him a scared look:okay!okay
Iman:plz dad!!ask mum to leme drink juice...& mom plz plz plz plz....my cartoons r abt to start...It's saturday today & a special episode of barbie is being aired..plz mom
Ka:okay okay!!!!ye lo juice & go
Iman:thanku mum!!luv ya.....
She drinks it & leaves
Ka:bohat shaitaan hoagaye hai ye larki.Aur is ko app bigaar rahe hai.Mein bata rahe ho.
Ro:baby!tum us ke saath jitni strict ho kabhe utna merey saath romantic bhe hojaya karo(naughty mood)
Ka:i knw wat u r thinking....
Ro gets up from his chair.& starts walking towards her...
Ro:really.
Ka:hmmm....buh i gotta go....sumone's on da door.
She runs away.
Ro:waapis tou ao ge phir kaha jao ge

MITWA MUSICAL IS PLAYED
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Shakespeare says a story widout a theme is a story told by an idiot so here is the theme of my FF....lolxxx....
LOVE WILL FIND ITS WAY...
Dont think i m a shakespeare luver..I just remember dis line of his..lolxxx..IMAO.
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PHEW..So my FF is finished..Tada tadaaa.....Now in my free time,wen i will sit on the net instead of writin my FF-i will sit on facebook..yayee..okay!!i didnt meant to b rude..SORRY
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Oh yea-n thanks to all dose who read my FF..
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Do leave ur alvidaye comments
THE END
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Edited by muneefah - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
me 2nd........so u r finishing this...it was really gr8t to read yr ff and i enjoyed alot....i hope u come back with another spicy ff....plzzzzz.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
all good things do come to end............it was great experience reading ur ff...........i hope u soon come back with another rocking ff.bye. luv u
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Muneefah why did u end ur ff..........😭..........i wasn't expecting this.......😔..........i hope u write another one soon......😊

u've ended it very well.........ROKA married with a kid is perfect........😃........this was a wonderful ff.........i really enjoyed reading it.......😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

omg...u brought an end to u r ff.ufff.... that is very bad.but the end was very gud.i liked it.

i know u took lot of stress and strain in writting u r ff by posting pics ,vdos, promotions, quiz etc.it was a real fun and enjoyment to read yor ff.thanks for giving us such a nice ff with beautiful roka pics.if possible try to start another ff.we love to read it.thanks again.bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi muneefah wow beautiful excellent part 👏 .................bohat bohat maza aaya read kar ke ..............😃
muneefah weldone excellent job ........👏
mehak 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
nooooooooo muneefash.....so fats....but no problrm.....will miss ur ff really but its ending was awesome....wow iman their daughter.....yepp....our frnd iman(robbieluvr) will be very happy to b ou roka's child....lol....hmmmmmm no suhaag rat???joking yaar......awesome awesome awesom.....I LOVE U MUNEEFAH

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