FF:RISHTA. - Page 51

Originally posted by: Karan Lover

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Love ,

-Aisho-

Hamesha larka-ye mujhey khud nahe pata ke larka hamesha qurbani ka bakra kuon banta hai per bunta hai to kya karo.& being the gentlemen,tum bed pe so mein sofey pe.

lolz pataa nahi kyu bakraa bantaa hein lmao

& yh robbie your a true gentlemen lolz. lolz kasturi hehe yh in indian films so unrealistic omg wow lolz but their is kasturi love between you and robbie time will tel init lolz yh both of u are very stubborn u knw that lolz what a way robbie hehe id be like come on then hum poori raath baat karengey lolz
awwwwwwwww bless robbie yh bet kasturi was looking so cute when sleepin and that made u drift 2 sleep as well awww

loved the part munz

just shows how sweet robbie is

yaarrrr muni!!!!

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Hey Munz
okay i know what you must be thinkin
i always say all the time il read ure FF
for some reason or the other i dont get to read it something always comes in the way
Im soooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry im soooooooooooooooooooo late reading it munz
i feel so guilty and really bad 😭😭
will you 4give me? 😆😆
dear-i m not angry at all so no need to b guilty.it's totally okay....
il write my comments as i go along
okay
OMG How many parts you got??????????
25 parts and 75 pages OMG 😲
wow im super l8
well done 👏
koi baat nahe if u r late....ull soon catch up

FF name Rishta (i gues im going to form a rishta with you by reading your FF and i know im just going to add to your list of FF fans 😆)
ohh shhooo sweet

Character sketch:
kasturi : she has 4 sisters no bros 😭 lol and her dads ill awwww.
yhp shes a simple girl whos 22 so her character portrays that to kasturi in the show

Robbie: his not a rockstar but hey eh owns a gym (im definately going to be going there 😆)
wow his fam lives in vancouver. so robbie lives alone or has he got a nandu kaka as well 😆😆
well done yhp i think robbies done a gr8 job 4rm the character sketch of him standing up on his own
& no much characters
wel drs kasturi and robbie = roka
who else do we need 😆😆
so true..Wen RoKA..nuthing mre required

& how you said its not liek from hatred to love - sooo wow going to be a dif story line
im sure im going to enjoy reading this FF (let me get my pop corn lolz)
ohh..i hope u like it

Part 1:
😲 what a start 2 ure first part
rohan 😡😡
omg the guy that helped her (was it robbie? a wild guess)
yh rohan you should go 2 jail 😡😆
omg who is this rohan guy?????? how can he do that
it's definately not Robbie..he cant b so mean dear

Part 2:
awwwwwwwww kasturi 🤗your such in a bad state
i love how you done it that shes sitting on a bench and going through her memorys - flashing back on whats happend on her life
so we can know her PAST 👏
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww omg so much hapend in her life already
her dad becoming ill
she being the oldest her needing to earn
i just love you starting although its sad wow
😲 kasturi ke gar pey rishta ???????
okay kasturis preety we know
but a guy liking her and aksing 4 her proposal wow (a guy besides robbie leme guess)
omg so that means her relationship was compromise
wow so much happend to her
she got married to that rohan
and he beat her omg his an animal awwwwwwwwwwwww kasturi
it took you long to write that
😲 omg i tel you it took you 4 ever 2 write that but i read it and it jsu shows how well you done i cant explain how well you writt it words 2 less 2 describe it 👏 really showed how kasturis in a rela bad sitatuion and from her dads accident her life has become a misery
not every one can do that
& u what this is the only the second part im reading wow 23 parts 2 go and your writing styles is just tremendously awesome i love it.
No doubt your a superb writer (i knew that 4rm before but iv got evidence of that now too lol)

luv this part really !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ahww schweets..thanks for praising my writin skills..u rock

Part 3:
yhp the way u ended the secnd part
its obvious lolz robbie going to see kasturi
wow kasturi you were sooooo deep in your thoughts
lolz robbie u make me laugh
wow kasturi u actually saying that that your home less wowwww
it sounds like your saying it in a joking way 😆 i shouldnt be laughing right now
awwwwwwwwww robbie you such an awesome person swet person awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww taking kasturi home like that
munz i was in love with robbie already and now reading your FF his such a sweet person awwwwwwwwwwwwww
not many guys would do that
wel robbies the one and only u know 😆
awwww doc u thought robbie doen that 2 her
he would never hit a girl
his not a coward lolz like that rohan
awww what he didnt know was the girl he found was the girl of his dreams.
omg wowwwwwww well done
😳
loved that line
what a way 2 end the part
THIS PART WAS AWESOME, MINDBLOWING, TERRIFIC HOW OCULD YOU EVEN THINK it was boring lolz our roka met wel robbie cared 4 kasturi like that his such a sweet guy
ahww..i m so glad u liked it..u r an awesome commenter

Part 4:
wow eye locking scene
awww kasturi your in safe hands
wow robbie
omg thats so sweet you didnt let her go
and shareef ghar ka ladka hein shareef khandhan sey
well said
wow thats good
roka gna be good freinds then or shall is ya more then that later
but hey they dont know each others names yet?????/ 😆
well said robbie shikayat koye aur pein aur ghussa khane phar (soz i jus changed the order of that line lolz)
wow lolz kasturi you told him your name 👏👏
now robbie its your turn lolz
wwwwww munz what a dialouge your writ of kasturis
omg robbie yayy!!!!!!!!!!!! i was gna say aynt robbie even a lil bit mischeivous
and here comes his naughty smile lolz
wow he shouted that
KASTURIIIIIIIIIIIIII RUKOOOOOOOOOO wowwww 👏
loved it
bohut mazaa ayaa is part mein lolz
im so luki in a way im reading all the parts together because if i read them one by one suspense would kill me lolz

haha...i luv ya for ur comments..keep commenting..luv ya

Part 5:
wow robbie
wel done you didnt let the oppertunity go lolz
wow lolz hehe - i know where robbie sgoin with this i think hehe
robbie well done hey 👏
wowwwwwwww kasturi you siad yes
to do this
well done
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
wowwwwwwww i think kastrui acting as robbie's wife yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! their going to get to know each other better yay im so happy lolz
😆 omg i can imagine robbie saying that ab to tum meri patni ho u can do what ever you like 😆
wowwwwwwwwwwwww kasturi you saying all that
and robbie listening wow
wow robbie
bet u do feel sorry 4 kasturi
and feel more appreciative that she is goin to play your wife 👏👏
wel done robbie
this way you'll get her new clothes, and your going to get to know each other better
awwwww............................i m so glad u r likin it

i love this idea you have made up munz
story line is totaly rocking and very different
thanku so muchh hummy
😆

okay soz 4 ma kind of long comment
ive read 5 parts
ONLY 😆20 parts 2 go
i m so happy...dat u read it

Until then keep up the awesome work
👏
😳thanks

Luv
Hummy
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Originally posted by: sarareimoo1

yaarrrr muni!!!!

update neededddddddddddddddd!!!!!

parhai se bhag kar ayi hooonn!!!

hahahahahahaah!!!

thats my guzarish (hey its a new song did ya lcen to it!! reallyy romantic u will like it!! hahahaha)!!!

waiting

sara

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Part 6:
wel done robbie
lets get to work
awww katsuri your lost in your thoughts
im sure init munz life 4 kasturi is going to get better
oh definately it will
wow what song lyrics i tell you
wow robbie you read her mind
fav color choose kar lena
awwwwwww robbie you are soooooooooo sweet
😳
you even took kasturi to an ice cream parlour
😆 robbie what bride have you found hey
she knows how to cook 👏😆
haha
😆 yh kasturi your one of a kind fake patni robbie can get lolz
awww their hand only touched 4 liek a second 😆
awwwwww robbie is such a sweet heart and one of the most sweetst person i know through FF 😆
omg!!!so chweet of u
oh right so kasturi syas it in a serious voice although their not meant 2 be serious talk 😕😆
well....strange laga kya tumhey...well,ab tou us part ko likhey ve arsa hogaye so forgive my mistakes plz

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Awesome part - was short and rocking 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
thanks sweety

Part 7:
😆 robbie yh course kasturi will make it lolz
i cant beleive u hesitated to ask that 😆
& yh I thought he was going to ask something else hehe
really???wat did u thought
lolz hehe robbie awww bless your going to help kasturi
😆 kasturi yh u sya yes to eevrything
and yh robbie we know you do what you wnat to do lol
lolz well said kasturi
when you see some one else happy and you know that their happy because of you its just a different feeling i totaly agree with you kasturi (well written line munz 👏)thanks
😆 yh robbie your totaly an awesome person and such a sweet guy awwww 🤗
yh the more ingrediants makes it more tastier
😆 robbie you got more better stuf to do then write ingrediants down
lolz kasturi if i was their id be like sorry kasturi im going as well
its a soccer match how cna you miss it 😆
totally agreed
lolz robbie
what an idea hey if you do open a resteraunt ill work their, or even that then ill work in the gym if you dont open a resteraunt
haha.....hmmm-ill work under u
😆 robbie no ones bet you yet
theres always a first
lolz kasturi
finaly you eat a bit
hehe i know yh robbie id be mad if i missed the soccer match and it was my fav team playing hehe
loved this part munz
you put soccer in their 🤗
seems like u like soccer???do u
totaly awesome
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏



Part 8:
lolz hehe robbie ur lazy 😆
lolz hehe yh robbie wise idea you asking the ? first
awwww kasturi
your not alone right now you got ure fake apti robbie lolz 🤗🤗
so true
wow such a short convo lolz
i thought theyd talk about lots of more stuff hehe but oh well
i knw...buh i mayb hav altered da talk..u knw--
they got an early flight
😆 wel done robbie hehe
bet the driver was dead embarassed
but hey robbie you looking in the rear view kyaa baath hein
buthey your fast kasturi didnt realise that you were staring i must sya well done 👏😆
hena??robbie is always good at such stuff???

Part was a lil short (advantage 4 me i hope i can catch up soon to the last part lolz)
yea..its def an adv 4 u😃
but hey theyve reached the airport now
wonder what happens now