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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: swan20

oh nooooo..........rohan aa gaya.....😡.......
😳
i hated raunak in the serial & i hate this rohan too.....😡.........
da same is here
poor ROKA......😭.........
😭
wanting to know what happens now.......plz update soon.....😊
okay...will try to update soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: robbieluvr

Awwwwwwwwwww man mujhe pata tha ye rohan zaroor bheech mein aye ga. 😡
haha....wasnt ti obvious..lolxxx
It was a very sad and emotional part, you described everything so nicely yaar. Great job!!!! 👏👏
thanku thanku
ab pata nahi robbie ka kya hoga
acha he hoga..jus keep readin
yeh kasturi har jaga usko akaila chort jaati hai 😡
haha...good 1

even in the ff he has to cry for her
not for long

when Robbie said" mat jao" it almost made me cry yaar i feel sooooo bad for him
anyways hopefully their problems will be solved soon
inshallah..yel-dey'll b solved soon
The way you wrote the part it was just fantastic, amazing 👏👏👏
thanks again
it had so much feelings and intensity WOWWWWWWWW 😊😊
😳
Great job, lovely, you are a ⭐️⭐️⭐️
😳thanksss

Can't wait so plzzzzzzzz update soon
i will

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: saumya{roka}

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲 she went with that rohan.
unlukily yup
pls pls pls bring them back.
i will

bechara robbie hamesha kyu akela pad jata hai
umm,mayb its his luck

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Posted: 17 years ago
it is so sad that kasturi left robbie iknewshe will have to leave him that orhan had to come no
per ab rohan kasturi ko aur pareshaan karga
too short romantic life
please unhe milado but donot end ff soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi meneefah ...........meine aj hi tummara ff join kiya hai ..............aj mera first comment hoga ye .....................tum ne bohat hi acha likha hai ................excellent job ..................weldone .................
par plzzzzzzzz tum kasturi robbie ko jaldi ek kar na plzzzzzzzzz............. and i hate rohan ..............robbie us ko kitna love karta hai kasturi ko.............
robbie ki sab lines bohat nice thi ...................
plzzzzzzzz update soon .............
mehak 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
part 23--

Uffff!this rohan!😡

wats his problem?!😡

he is such a 🐷...lol

and this kasturi😡why did she listen to that PIG?!

couldnt she just slap him and throw him out of the house?!

my poor robbie😔

continue soon..

PS..i left my comment for part 22 on page 65
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jaan 234

hi meneefah ...........
hi!!!!!a new reader..yaye..i m so happy
meine aj hi tummara ff join kiya hai ..............
i know..n i m soo happy
aj mera first comment hoga ye .....................
cant wait to read wat u think
tum ne bohat hi acha likha hai ................excellent job ..................weldone .................
😳thanku thanku😳
😳

par plzzzzzzzz tum kasturi robbie ko jaldi ek kar na plzzzzzzzzz.............
haan!haan jaldi karo ge..u dont worry
and i hate rohan ..............
me too
robbie us ko kitna love karta hai kasturi ko............
i know.
robbie ki sab lines bohat nice thi ...................
reallY???
plzzzzzzzz update soon .............
i will
mehak 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shanu333

part 23--

Uffff!this rohan!😡
😡

wats his problem?!😡
i dunno😃

he is such a 🐷...lol
agreed

and this kasturi😡why did she listen to that PIG?!
ummm....coz i made her listen to him..lolxx

couldnt she just slap him and throw him out of the house?!
uhh-life's not dat simple dear

my poor robbie😔
😭i knw

continue soon..
k

PS..i left my comment for part 22 on page 65
will read

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shanu333

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yayyyee!me first!😃
yayeee

sorry for commenting latee😳
no prob

awweee!so sweet!munu di!u dedicated such a beatiful part to us?!thank uuuuu!😳😳
ohh...pleasure is all mine

i loved the dialogue when robbie said:

Robbie:haan!!ye tou hain.Apna mulk tou apna hota hai.

that was soo like me!i miss India😭😭

ohhhh...


and the scene was so cutee!lol...can just imagine roka in green😆😆😆

hhehehehehehehehe


lol...ka has the habit of saying 'allah!' just like me😳

hehehehehehehe...seems like RoKa r quite similiar to u


u kno the roka of rishta r so similar to me!😃

yea dats xactly wat i think

and the proposal scene was so sweet!i hope robbie proposes to me like that one day😆😆..lol..just joking😆😆

haha..i wud also luv it if robbie proposes me....,,,,ahhh




Edited by muneefah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
~~~~PART 24~~~~
2 days have passed.Kasturi has reached mississauga.
As soon as Kasturi reached Rohan's home,Rohan ordered Kasturi to clean da whole house as in all the times dat she wasnt present-Rohan hadnt cleaned nething,instead had made up a mess of everything...
Rohan:(orderly manner)poora ghar saaf karo..Aur phir khaana pakao.aur haan-mood acha hai kharab mat karna.
Kasturi without repyin started what he had asked her to do but what ever she did ,She remembered Robbie
While Working,She remebered Robbie telling her tum kitna kaam karte ho.


Background music:
Chand Lamhaaat Ke Waaste Hi Sahi
Muskuraakar Mili Thi Mujhe Jindagi



While cooking,She remebered When Robbie requested her to cook food.

Teri Aaghosh Mein Din The Mere Kate
Teri Baahon Mein Thi Meri Raate Kati


She rememebered da talk dat she had wid Robbie for the last time

Aaj Bhi Jab Woh Pal Mujhko Yaad Aate Hai
Dil Se Saare Gamon Ko Bhula Jaate Hai

She remembered da time when Robbie proposed her..
dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Beete Lamhein..........

Every single moment dat she had passed with Robbie- was going in her head like flashbacks...& she bursted into tears.
Rohan seeing dis & enjoying dis
Rohan:KASTURI!!!!tumh se kaam kar waney ke liye waapis aya ho-ansoo bahane ke liye nahe....aur ab ye acting khattan karo.Mujhey is se koi farq nahe parta.....Ab jaldi khana pakao.Mujhey bhook lage hai
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On the oder hand,Robbie has isolated himself.He keeps sitting in his room wid Kasturi's yaadein.He didnt each much-talked much.Just sat in his room in the dark.Devika being a mother noticed Robbie's condition
Devika comin into Robbie's room
Devika:Robbie!
No reply from Robbie
Devika:Mein tumh se baat kar rahe ho.Na sunte ho na jawab detey ho
Robbie:jee mom
Devika:Robbie!!KAsturi kaha hai..Kya tumhary us se laraye hoye hai.
No reply
Devika:Robbie son!kasturi kaha hai..
Robbie:mom!please mujhey nahe pata aur aenda app mujhsey is topic pe baat nahe karey gi.
Devika:arrey kaisay nahe karo ge.Bahu hai woh is ghar ki aur ghaeeb hai
Robbie:( in an angry tone)nahe!woh is ghar....
Robbie thinking:shit!!mom ko sachaye nahe pata...& i think dis is not the rite time to tell her the truth...
Robbie:mom,please....Is barey mein mujhey koi baat nahe karne.Ab app please mujhey akela chor dey.
Devika:(angry) theek hai.
& she left the room
Robbie thinking:
Kya kasturi waqaye tum se pyaar nahe karte the & all dis time she was waiting for Rohan..Nahe woh aisi larki nahe the.She said she loved me & wen she said it us ki ankhin mein sachaye the.Par us ne Rohan ke saath jana pasand kuon kiya.Par robbie-Woh janey se pheley jo baatein kar rahe the us se lag tou nahe raha tha ke woh jana chahte hai..Wat a minute-Mayb Kasturi jana nahe chahte the-Rohan ne ussey blackmail kiya ho-Force kiya ho.Mayb-Rohan bohat clever hai..Mayb he tricked Kasturi
Mayb kuon!!dis is da truth.She loves me...Yayeeee.....Kasturi!!!!mein araha ho tumhey apna bunaney.....Ab dekhta ho ke Rohan tumhey aur kitna tarpata hai...
Robbie quickly starts packing his things & rushes downstairs
Robbie(shouting):mom dad!!
Devika:kya baat hai..kuon chila rahe ho
Robbie:mom mein ja raha ho...Phir ao ga..Abhe mujhey matt rokiya ga.Wish me best of luck.Dad ko bhe mere taraf se bata dena..Mujhey rokiya ga matt.Love you.Bye
& he ran outside the sabharwal mansion
Devika:arrey!!batao tou hoa kiya
Robbie:(shouting back):she loves me
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dose who were disappointed wid da last part-r u happy now???Robbie aint cryin nemore😃
Edited by muneefah - 17 years ago

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