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Originally posted by: Niyati_T
Update kab milega iska ?
I am just figuring a basic story line first 😛
I think by tomorrow I'll be able to post 👍🏼
Originally posted by: MrsRishabhBajaj
I am just figuring a basic story line first 😛
I think by tomorrow I'll be able to post 👍🏼
Yeipee
Chapter 2: Haq Banta Hai
Rishabh was ready for work. He stood in the living room speaking on the phone when Sneha came running and hugged his leg and hid behind him. “Sneha,” Prerna said looking around for her. She tried to hide better but Prerna could see her. “I’ll call you back in a while.” He said dropping his call. Prerna walked upto them and placed her hands on her hip.
“Kya ho raha hai yeh?” Mr. Bajaj asked holding Sneha’s hand and pulling her out from behind him. Sneha giggled looking at Prerna.
“Sneha mumma ko pareshan kar rahi hai,” Prerna complained.
“Acha..” Mr. Bajaj said crouching near his daughter, “Haq banta hai uska,” he said taking his daughter’s side.
Prerna’s eyes widened and jaw dropped open, “Mr. Bajaj!” she exclaimed. Mr. Bajaj had taken last night’s teaming up conversation quite seriously, she thought.
Sneha put her arms around her dad and kissed him. “Aap best ho!”
Mr. Bajaj picked Sneha in his arms and walked towards Prerna, his lips curling into a mischievous smile.
“Sneha chalo naha lo, school jana hai na aapko!” Prerna said.
“Meri ek condition hai,” Sneha said. Mr. Bajaj looked at the little girl impressed. How quickly Sneha had understood how to get her way with Prerna. Smart child, he thought. “Aap mere liye meri favourite breakfast banaogi.”
“Beta, abhi time nahi hai, mumma ko bhi office jana hai. Mumma kal bana degi, promise!” Prerna said. Sneha’s smile faded and she looked at Mr. Bajaj hoping he would take her side and ofcourse, he did. “Prerna bana do na, itne pyaar se keh rahi hai,” Rishabh said.
Prerna looked at Mr. Bajaj in astonishment. Why was he taking her side? Hopeless! She thought. “Acha thik hai, kya khana hai aapko?”
“Aloo ke parathe,” she said with a huge smile.
Rishabh smiled. He loved Aloo ke parathe too. Because of Sneha even he would get to eat Prerna ke haath ke parathe. Prerna had never cooked for him, obviously.
Prerna agreed to make it and Sneha obediently went to take a shower.
The Sharmas had settled well in the out-house. Veena was still quite uncomfortable around Mr. Bajaj so she didn’t go over very often. Mr. Bajaj and Sneha sat on the table waiting for breakfast when Kukki came out yawning. “Good morning,” she chirped.
“Good morning!” Prerna said coming out with a tray full of parathas. “Aao baitho, breakfast karlo!” She told kukki.
“Itni achi khushbu kaha se aa rahi hai?” She asked.
“Mumma ne aloo ke parathe banaye hai!” Sneha said happily. Prerna was very happy to see Sneha’s excitement. “Wow, Prerna! Yumm,” Kukki said sitting down to eat.
Prerna served hot parathas to everyone. “Main papa ke haath se khaungi,” Sneha demanded.
Mr. Bajaj’s eyes widened and he gulped. He didn’t have any experience feeding a child! Tanvi always fed Kukki before Prerna. Kukki sniggered exchanging looks with Prerna. Both of them had identical thoughts. Mr. Bajaj would not be able to feed a child!
“Main?” he said looking at Prerna for help.
“Haan Mr. Bajaj, haq banta hai uska” She said smirking. She was enjoying giving it back to Rishabh. What did he think, he would team up with Sneha and annoy Prerna? She thought smugly. Mr. Bajaj narrowed his eyes at Prerna. Mujhe aapse yeh umeed nahi thi, Mrs. Bajaj. He thought.
Mr. Bajaj tried to break a piece of the paratha but it was too hot. “Ow” he said pulling his fingers back. Kukki laughed. He gave her a glare and she shut up. He tried again to pull a piece. He succeeded. He brought the piece near Sneha’s mouth. “Mujhe achar lagake chahiye.” She said.
Prerna put some achaar on Mr. Bajaj’s plate. He dipped it in it and very uncomfortably fed her the piece. Sneha ate happily.
“Not fair dad, mujhe toh itne pyaar se kabhi nahi khilaya,” Kukki complained. Prerna nodded. “Haan Mr. Bajaj, haq banta hai iska bhi!” she giggled looked at Mr. Bajaj’s expressions.
“Prerna, aap—” he gave in realizing he had dug the hole for himself. He took another piece of the paratha and fed Kukki. She ate happily.
“Ab mumma ki turn!” Sneha said cheerfully.
Mr. Bajaj looked at Prerna, who looked away. He willingly took a piece of the paratha and took it near her mouth. Prerna was a little awkward. She looked up to make an excuse when she saw Mr. Bajaj was already looking at her with the piece of paratha in his hand. Before she could react Mr. Bajaj said, “Oh! Ek minute,” he said dipping the paratha in achaar, “Aap achaar ke saath khaati hai,” he said. Prerna looked at him wondering why he would want to feed her when he cutely said, “Haq banta hai mera, Mrs. Bajaj.” Prerna couldn’t help but smile and open her mouth to eat the piece from his hand. Rishabh was happy that she kept his word and ate the paratha. There was something about feeding your family with your own hands, thought Rishabh, he felt good. He felt like he belonged with them, probably for the first time. Finally, there was laughter and happiness in the Bajaj dining room.
***
“Pata karo woh kese wapas aa gayi,” Komolika hissed on the phone. “Uss nurse ko maine itne paise diye the phir bhi usne apna kaam nahi kiya!” She spat angrily unaware that Anurag was listening to her full conversation from outside.
“Haan di, main pata lagata hu abhi,” Ronit said frantically. “Main bas abhi office—“Sab kaam chod do,” Komolika said in rage. “Mujhe koi excuses nahi chahiye. You have 4 hours.” She intimated.
Anurag was left in utter confusion. He had figured out that Komolika was upto no good and that she was definitely looking into Prerna. He wondered what it could be? What does Komolika want now? He would have to be vigilant and track her whereabouts.
**
Prerna & Rishabh both went to drop Sneha to school when she insisted. Prerna hugged her daughter and said she would be there to pick her up also. Sneha cheerfully ran into school. Prerna sat in the car with creases running all over her forehead.
“Prerna,” Mr. Bajaj said, “Aap fir tension le rahi hai.” He frowned.
“Mr. Bajaj, itne saalon baad woh mujhe mili hai, aur ab Komolika ko pata hai ki woh zinda hai, mere paas hai, agar usne—“Aapko kya laga mujhe iss baat ka khayal nahi hai?” he said as cool as a cucumber.
“Matlab?” she asked.
“Maine already iss school ke principal ko Sneha ka special dhyan rakhne ka message pahucha diya hai and mera ek aadmi school ki gate ke bahar khada hai,” he said pointing at a man standing outside. “You don’t need to worry.”
Prerna sighed in relief. ‘Thank—” Mr. Bajaj shot her a deadly glare.
“Sorry sorry!” she said with a small smile. She thanked the Gods that Mr. Bajaj was being so careful. She looked at his serious face as he drove. He has already started caring for Sneha so much, even though it’s been just 2 days.She thought. He cares about his own people so much and yet he has been alone all these years, why? She wondered.
“Prerna I hope aap prerpared ho?” Mr. Bajaj asked seriously.
“Ofcourse Mr. Bajaj,” she said pulling a file out of her purse. “Kal late tak maine hamare project pe kaam kiya. Aaj Ronit, Mr. CEO, mujhse milne aa raha hai.” She smirked. “Acha hi hua hamare liye, Nivedita se zyada aasan hoga isse haraana.”
“Great, main bhi aapke saath hi rahunga iss meeting mein.” He mentioned.
“Ku? Bharosa nahi hai mujhe pe?” Prerna asked. Whenever she thought about Basu Industries her blood started to boil and there was a fierce energy inside her which downright made her blunt.
“Aap par mujhe sabse zyada bharosa hai,” he clarified, “But Ronit kuch gandi harkat na kare bas isliye. Aur wese bhi abhi main free tha toh socha aapko company de du. Only if you don’t mind.” He said.
Prerna nodded. “Okay.”
She briefed Rishabh on the way to office about her proposal for converting the residential land into a commercial land. She also informed him that she had got the permission. She asked for his advice. Rishabh was proud of her. She had learnt so quick and so well.
**
“Good morning Sir, Ma’am, Mr. Basu aapka conference room mein wait kar rahe hai,” the receptionist informed. Prerna’s jaw clenched. She looked at Mr. Bajaj with hatred blazing through her eyes. As they walked towards the conference room Rishabh said, “Prerna, you can’t win battles with anger on your mind.” “And I’m here to win the war.” She said entering the room. He gave a half smile as he followed in behind her.
“Good morning Mr. Basu,” Prerna said putting her things on the table. Anurag nodded. “Mr. Basu, we meet again,” Mr. Bajaj said offering his hand. Anurag shook hands with Bajaj and took his seat.
“Wese hum Basu Industries ke CEO ko expect kar rahe the, where is he?” he asked.
“Woh kisi zaruri kaam mein busy hai so I’m here on his behalf.”
“Nevermind, lets get to the point,” Prerna said. Every moment she looked at Anurag her blood boiled. She wanted to see him grovel at her feet for mercy.
“I’m here to talk about the land you bought, I have an offer for you.” He said. “Tumne already ek residential land kharid liya hai at more than double its value, ab since neither of us can do anything with the piece of land we have, I am willing to sell you our land at another 60 crores.” Anurag said rolling his eyes. He knew Prerna would never agree to this. Ronit had made stupid plans and Komolika had passed all of them. What a fool!
“Are you serious?” Prerna smirked. Mr. Bajaj didn’t say anything. Something was up. He had gone against Basu before, this wasn’t the way he worked. He would have never given in like this. What is he playing at? Mr. Bajaj wondered.
Anurag sighed, “This is our last offer. Also, ek free ki tip deta hu. Agar tumne iss deal ke liye mana kar diya toh Basu Industries will make sure that tumhare residential land ki ek bhi flat nahi bikke. Hamara profit ho na ho, tumhara loss zarur hoga.” Anurag warned. He wanted to give Prerna a warning about what Ronit had planned. This was his way of doing that. She was a smart lady, she would figure out the rest. He just wanted her to win. Although he knew Prerna didn’t need help, he would still do whatever it took to make sure she knew what was cooking between the siblings.
Prerna’s eyes burned with scorn. She stood up immediately. “Main Prerna Bajaj hu,” she said with on-point confidence. “Aur main kisi se nahi darti, come. What. May.” she said walking out of there leaving Mr. Bajaj smitten. Wow, Mr. Bajaj thought. he had a small smile on his face. He was proud of his wife and little turned on by the way she called herself Prerna Bajaj. The pride with which she said her name made Rishabh’s heart flutter.
“Kaha tha maine aapse Mr. Basu, yeh aapki Prerna nahi hai,” Mr. Bajaj said, “Wese yeh deal shayad aapki Prerna bhi nahi leti. You’ve become weak.” He added looking into Anurag’s eyes. Something was up and he had to find out what.
“Bas yahi aap galat ho Mr. Bajaj,” Anurag smirked, “Now, I’m stronger than ever.” He said. Now he could protect Prerna from Komolika. He thought.
“Well then, see you soon!” He smiled leaving the conference room.
**
Prerna left early to pick Sneha up from school. All her stress and tiredness vanished when she saw her little angel running to her. Prerna spent all her time with Sneha. They discussed about school and her friends. Prerna found out that Sneha loved maths and her favourite colour was red. These small things brought her closer to Sneha and she finally felt like a mother again.
It was only 7 pm when the doorbell rang. Prerna was busy reading to Sneha when there was a knock on the door. Mr. Bajaj peeped in. Prerna was surprised to see Mr. Bajaj home so early. Sneha jumped out of bed. Prerna wondered why Sneha was so drawn to Mr. Bajaj. He lifted her up and kissed her cheek. “Sneha, mere paas aapke liye ek surprise hai!” he said.
Sneha’s eyes lit up. “Ander le aao sab.” He said. The house help got 4-5 packets inside and kept them on the bed. “Mr. Bajaj, yeh sab kya hai?” Prerna asked.
“Sneha ke liye games.” He said with a smile. “Toh aap mere saath kheloge?” she asked sweetly.
“Baad mein pakka! Abhi mujhe kuch kaam se jana hai,” he said getting up. Sneha didn’t let go of his hands, looking glum. “Toh mujhe yeh games nahi chahiye.” She said pushing the packed away.
Mr. Bajaj looked taken aback. He didn’t understand Sneha’s reaction. He looked at Prerna hoping she would intervene. Prerna realized that Mr. Bajaj would be busy and nodded at him. “Sneha, papa baad mein aapke saath khel lenge beta,” she explained.
Tears started streaming down Sneha’s cheek. Prerna couldn’t understand why Sneha would cry in such a small matter. “Beta, kya baat hai?” she asked. “Aap ku ro re ho?”
Mr. Bajaj also sat down next to her on the bed. He had a very urgent meeting to go to, he was getting extremely late but he couldn’t go if Sneha was crying. Something in him stopped him. Whether it was his love for Prerna or his affection for Sneha he didn’t know. He couldn’t see them sad. Prerna wiped Sneha’s tears. “Rone ki kya baat hai isme?” she asked a little harshly.
“Sorry mumma,” she said sniffing. “Koi baat nahi beta, par aapko rona ku aaya? Papa toh thodi der mein aa jayenge na..” she explained. “Unka kaam zaruri hai, aur mumma hai na aapke saath.”
“Mumma, mere paas masi bhi hamesha thi, par papa nahi the.” Sneha said innocently. “Mere saare friends ke papa unke liye chocolates laate hai, unke saath khelte hai, unhe apne shoulder pe bithake zoo le jaate hai, unhe mumma ki daant se bachate hai, Naina poore din apne papa ki baate karti hai. Par mere paas toh sirf masi thi.” She sniffed. “Mujhe bhi woh sab karna hai.” She said looking down.
Prerna had tears in her eyes. She hugged Sneha tightly. Her child had stayed away from her parents for so many years without their love. She just wanted her father because she had never known the love of a father. She had never felt fatherly warmth. She looked up at Mr. Bajaj and was touched to see tears in his eyes. He was melting. He caressed Sneha’s head and pulled out his phone. He dialed a number and said, “Aaj ke meetings postpone kardo.” And without listening to the reply he cut the call. Prerna smiled. He still is the world’s best father. She thought. Her faith on Mr. Bajaj was growing stronger every day. He had changed so much from the day he had met her for the first time. That ruthless businessman had become a loving father to two beautiful daughters.
Mr. Bajaj made Sneha sit on his lap and said, “Main kahi nahi jaunga.” He held her little hand and said, “Aapke papa bhi aapko shoulders pe bithake zoo le jayenge, Aapke papa bhi aapko hamesha mumma ki daant se bachayenge,” he laughed. Prerna laughed too. Sneha joined in. “Aur jitna ho sake utna time aapke saath spend karenge.” He said.
“We’re sorry beta,” Prerna said, “Ki hum pehle aapko nahi dhund paaye.”
Sneha hugged both her parents with open arms and a big heart. Rishabh knew how it was growing up without a father’s hand on his head. He didn’t want Sneha to ever go through that pain. He promised himself that he would always protect his daughter. Always.
*
Precap: Mr. Bajaj sees a romantic dream. Prerna talks to Mr. Bajaj about his relation with Kukki.
I hope you enjoyed the update. Do leave behind your comments 😎
Regards,
Manjari
P.S. I feel like Ekta Kapoor 🤣
*Edited*
I am also looking for a name for this Short story. Any suggestions? 😳Please do share.
My spot...😳
Will come with detailed comments in the morning.
Unressing...
I just loved the growing bond between Rishabh and Sneha. They are so cuteeeee...
The aloo Paratha moment is so heartwarming.
Wish we could see this in the show
Ronit and Komolika. This woman!!!
What is she upto now? Looks like she is planning to do something deadly.
Is Anurag still hopeful about Prerna? Even after the party incident?
Sneha... I feel bad for this little munchkin...😭 poor child, she had missed her parents, specifically her Papa...🥺
RB he is the best father and husband.
Waiting for the romantic dream!
Firstly what should I call you 🤔🤔 because I forgot
your name 😏😒🤦🏻♀️ Sorry 😐 for that ❤️🥰🙏 and
secondly Niyati I find someone like you 😉😉 In
writing updates I mean 😉😉😘😘
This SS is super cute and beautiful uffffffff I love it
😻😉🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️❤️😉😉😉😘😘 hats of to u
❤️❤️🥰🥰😘😘😍😍 I can read it again and again
both parts without getting bored 😐😍😍🥰🥰🥰
❤️❤️❤️😻😻😘😘🥰😍😍❤️❤️😍🥰😘😘😉😉😉😘🥰😍😍❤️
I just love ❤️ Rishabh and Sneha bonding ufffffffff
the r so cute 🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😘😘😘😉
😉😉 both are in one team wowwwwww so
cuteeeeeeeeee 😘😘🥰🥰😍😍❤️❤️😍🥰😘😉😘😘🥰😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I wish I could see this SS in KZK to but we all know
what we get yuck 🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮 that old stories
and all 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🙄🙄🙄😒😒
And about Veena uffff 😐😐😐🙄🙄 you old lady
👵🏻 🙄 why u r showing attitude to my Bacha ha 🤬
🤬🤬😡😡😡
And that Chomo uffffff I just want to kill him 🤯🤯🤬🤬😡😡
I love ❤️ when PreRish are teasing each other 😛😘🥰😍😂😂
I hope the come closer very soon can’t wait 😊 for
their romantic moments 😘😘🥰😍😍😙😙😗😗😘🥰☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Please update next part soon ok 👍
And I will write my first comment soon 😘🥰🥰❤️
😍😍☺️😘🥰❤️😍😍 I’m busy a bit nowadays 🙄
🙄🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️ I didn’t even write my comment for Niyati
updates 🙄🙄🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️😭😭😭
Only shouted at her 😡🤬🤬
Because I love ❤️ her a lot naa that’s shouting at
her 🥰🥰❤️😍😍😍❤️🥰❤️😍😘😘😘🥰🥰❤️😍☺️☺️☺️☺️
Awww!! This was another cute part ❤️😭
Prerna making Aloo ke Parathe!! Rishabh feeding everyone with his own hands
She called herself Mrs Bajaj with pride
Rishabh was a little turned on by that ☺️🤣
Komolika and Ronit will make a plan again; hamesha ke tarah A will keep quiet 🤔
Rishabh cancelled his work for Sneha’s sake 😭❤️
Now I am waiting for the next part. Zahir si baat hai ki Rishabh ko Sneha se itna pyaar karta dekh Kukki ko bura feel hoga, especially after he has been maintaining distance from her on purpose
But I am waiting for Rishabh ka romantic dream ☺️
Thank you for continuing the story Manjari 🤗
This was super duper cute... 😳
Rishabh is definitely on Sneha's team😂😂
Rishabh feeding his lovely ladies with his own hands was super special😍
This Komolika😵 They are again upto something...
Prerna was so confident as Prerna Bajaj
Sneha missed father's love and warmth for so many years. But now she has the world's Best faher😍
Loved, loved , loved the update😍😍
Interesting Precap☺️ please update soon😳
Guys! Suggestion for the title of this story, anyone?
Bond of loveSigh
Good one Manjari
I just want Kukki and RB together too
Originally posted by: AryanSahil
Firstly what should I call you 🤔🤔 because I forgot
your name 😏😒🤦🏻♀️ Sorry 😐 for that ❤️🥰🙏 and
secondly Niyati I find someone like you 😉😉 In
writing updates I mean 😉😉😘😘
This SS is super cute and beautiful uffffffff I love it
😻😉🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️❤️😉😉😉😘😘 hats of to u
❤️❤️🥰🥰😘😘😍😍 I can read it again and again
both parts without getting bored 😐😍😍🥰🥰🥰
❤️❤️❤️😻😻😘😘🥰😍😍❤️❤️😍🥰😘😘😉😉😉😘🥰😍😍❤️
I just love ❤️ Rishabh and Sneha bonding ufffffffff
the r so cute 🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😘😘😘😉
😉😉 both are in one team wowwwwww so
cuteeeeeeeeee 😘😘🥰🥰😍😍❤️❤️😍🥰😘😉😘😘🥰😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I wish I could see this SS in KZK to but we all know
what we get yuck 🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮 that old stories
and all 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🙄🙄🙄😒😒
And about Veena uffff 😐😐😐🙄🙄 you old lady
👵🏻 🙄 why u r showing attitude to my Bacha ha 🤬
🤬🤬😡😡😡
And that Chomo uffffff I just want to kill him 🤯🤯🤬🤬😡😡
I love ❤️ when PreRish are teasing each other 😛😘🥰😍😂😂
I hope the come closer very soon can’t wait 😊 for
their romantic moments 😘😘🥰😍😍😙😙😗😗😘🥰☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Please update next part soon ok 👍
And I will write my first comment soon 😘🥰🥰❤️
😍😍☺️😘🥰❤️😍😍 I’m busy a bit nowadays 🙄
🙄🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️ I didn’t even write my comment for Niyati
updates 🙄🙄🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️😭😭😭
Only shouted at her 😡🤬🤬
Because I love ❤️ her a lot naa that’s shouting at
her 🥰🥰❤️😍😍😍❤️🥰❤️😍😘😘😘🥰🥰❤️😍☺️☺️☺️☺️
Yes Zohal!! We have another great writer amongst us
And I know that you love me. Don’t take pressure to write comments! Take care of yourself Love 🤗