||PreRish FF|| Letting her go... (or Getting her back) - Part 1 Pg 9

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello everyone...

This Jyothi. And i am sure no body know me here.

I have joined/started reading all Prerish stories in this forum, loved the beautiful and awesome plots.

I used to see KZK1 in school days along with my MOM and a big fan of Bajaj character and the way RR portirat it was awesome.

Karan was no less he aced it in his own style.

Coming to KZK1, all humans will be selfish and have their own flaws. To fullfill their dreams and desires they plan and some achieve it by HOOK or Crook and some leave it was their fate.

MR. Bajaj character believes and lives upto the it. Anurag was full of ideal types seen very less in real life.

And watch KZK2 very occasionally so scenes may not be in sync with the reel one.

This story starts from impending Viraj and Prerana wedding. so thought of sharing here.

Here i am posting a glimpse of it.. there will be lot of typo's & grammatical mistakes. Please bear with it.

If any body like it will continue or leave it here ..



Letting her go. (or Getting her back)

She was laying on her bed thinking about her fate is literately ironic. Anurag her love whose baby she is carrying has fixed her marriage with Viraj. Isn’t it a mocking to them and their love, only if Anurag was healthy and remembers every thing the story would have been totally different and happy.


Why has to anurag think of my Marriage when I am pregnant.

Who thinks of a pregnant women's marriage, only my Anu so sweet of him.

We loved each other so much then, how… How can he forget our love? I always dreamt of Soul mate love story for myself and anurag came with all those handsome, good boy qualities and we fall in love and was about to be get married in real sense. But every time some or other comes to destroy us/It.

But for me Anurag was the only constant thing in my mind and all others will perishes for me…From the day i started loving anu I put him and his family above everything…this is how the soul mate love stories will be?? Right?? And I can feel anurag also feels the same. so he gave back our house to us.


Wedding celebrations will start in another 4 days…


How will i stop this wedding??

Firstly why she accepted for this?? What is she up to??

What will be Basu’s, Bhardwaj and my family’s reaction when I stop the wedding??

will anurag get his memory back? Komolika is another head ache??

I am going overboard in my love and losing everything!!?

Oh God I will go mad… tears making their way in her eyes and softly she caresses’ her baby bump and speaks ---

Baby mama and papa loves u a lot…

I know sometimes you feel that I don’t care for you.

Nothing like that I love you very much baccha and I want everything to be perfect for you, by the time you come out. Papa me and you a happy family…

But the baby did not make any sign (move) to assure her.

She felt bad but ignores it thinking baby is sleeping… and suddenly she remembered her another baby kukkie and a beautiful smile adored her lips… and she recalled all the moments with Kukkie and felt lite and happy.

Along with Kukkie, Mr.Bajaj also came back in her memories and instantly want to remove those images from her mind so she closed her eyes and doors tightly which will led her there.

For her he was always a bad dream which she never want to remember…


Ironically On the other end of the city, a person also want to get rid of her memories by burning his mouth and liver with a beverage to get rid of that sweet moments.



Please do let me know how it is. Weather to continue or not...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello hello Jyoti🤗

Of course I know you.. detective reader you are asking the right questions 😎

I am sooo sooo happy you are here on the forum with your story that too with Viraj as a character.. I am not sure if you plan to take this chacter till the end or if he a cameo like in the show.. but I am very intested to know how he is portrayed in your story..

You are taking the Prerna-Viraj marriage track ahead .. she is getting married to him 4 days but doesn't want to. She is planning to break the marriage at the same time worried of everyone's reaction on her decision. Is she going to get married?

She is still head over heels for Anurag but her unborn makes her remember Kukki

..you mentioned the unborn child makes no movement- anything Prerna should be worried about?


Kukki ke sath she remembers Bajaj too but as a bad dream... and same goes for Bajaj on the other side driking.. srsly he is not thinking about his own liver..


Jyoti very interesting beginning.. i love the fact that we have another story to look upto.. Welcome aboard as a writer this time and please please do continue .. love to see journey of these character through different perspectives..

Waiting for next update


Love

-Sunshine🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's so interesting!!! Please continue soon...

Waiting for next...

What a intriguing plot!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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A suggestion- if you could edit the Topic title to PreRish FF or PreVir FF which ever fits the plot better, it will be easier to differentiate between your story thread from other discussion topics and story readers can find it easily.

Sharing your story link on Prerish AT as well.. hope that is fine with you

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hola dear 🤗

Tum aise na silent matt raho abhi se🤗

The story line looks interesting and I feel u will do the best👍🏼

Update Soon warna Prerish AT ke pyaasi atmayen aa jayengi🤣

Jaldi post karo

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Hola dear 🤗

Tum aise na silent matt raho abhi se🤗

The story line looks interesting and I feel u will do the best👍🏼

Update Soon warna Prerish AT ke pyaasi atmayen aa jayengi🤣

Jaldi post karo

I think someone called me here...😈

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Posted: 5 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

I think someone called me here...😈

Pyaasi aatma no. 1🤣

Jyoti ki story interesting hai

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Posted: 5 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Pyaasi aatma no. 1🤣

Jyoti ki story interesting hai

Yes too interesting!!! can't wait for next...

#PyaasiBhataktiAatma

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MishtiNew

Yes too interesting!!! can't wait for next...

#PyaasiBhataktiAatma

@Bold:Yeh kya nautanki hai🤣
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

@Bold:Yeh kya nautanki hai🤣

Ye nautanki hai

Coz inki forum Mummy Ankie hai🤣

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