Humsafar- Prerish SS (Updated Ch-14 on Pg-21) - Page 13

AUTHOR'S NOTE

I know this chapter isn't good enough and I've been absent for quite some time.

But I sincerely request everyone who reads this story to comment and tell me their theories and perceptions of this story.

It's very encouraging.

Thank you.

Harshita

Originally posted by: HarshitaMall

AUTHOR'S NOTE

I know this chapter isn't good enough and I've been absent for quite some time.

But I sincerely request everyone who reads this story to comment and tell me their theories and perceptions of this story.

It's very encouraging.

Thank you.

Harshita

First and foremost of all, I'm really glad to see you back. Your FF is something I find really gripping and I must admit I'm interested in reading more.

This chapter introduced a chilling twist in form of the revelation RB made. So he's treating her like a pawn in the game he's playing. Interesting! But...like his sister said, he may grow attached and suffer a heartbreak. And we know Prerna has developed a certain level attachment and is even jealous at the unknown woman's proximity with HER man. She doesn't know the woman in white is RB's sister. 😆

It will be interesting to see how their relationship progresses amid dark conspiracies.

Please continue soon. :)

I really love this story 😘. And I'm hoping you should update more frequently, please..... And I'm loving the chamestry of Mr. Bajaj and Prerna💖.

An interesting twist I must say. She is his sister who could read him so well. Why all-white dress always. any past connection. So, he included Prerna in his plan as a pawn and he is intended to continue it. And in the process, there are chances of him getting attached to her. Which are slowing coming true, well he denied, when both of them know that it's not the case. Prerna also started caring for him and let's see what she does when the time comes and how she would react after knowing that all this is his plan. I am waiting to know how their first step will affect Basus now.

Nice update. Please do continue soon.

You are an awesome writer. Love this story. Please continue.

Awesome update!! Please continue...

Interesting update 👏

An unexpected twist 👏

So Maya is Rishabh's sister, she is right about Rishabh

Prerna has started caring for Rishabh

Waiting for next

Intriguing... As the story progresses it's becoming more and more gripping.... RB is coming in to his true form.... We can see more of his ruthless side in the coming updates.... He may have started out thinking to use Prerna as a pawn in his game but I think he's already falling for her... But I would like to see them evolving from these games and become strong as a couple... Would like to know more about Maya....ahe seems interesting who can match RB in his ruthless tactics.... I hope you continue soon and give us more interesting updates.....

Originally posted by: HarshitaMall

AUTHOR'S NOTE

I know this chapter isn't good enough and I've been absent for quite some time.

But I sincerely request everyone who reads this story to comment and tell me their theories and perceptions of this story.

It's very encouraging.

Thank you.

Harshita

your story is progressing really nicely, all the characters & the plot are interesting. just a small request make the chapters a little longer please as you're story is really enjoyable to read.

Love the story please continue