PreRish One-Shot: You Are Tired I Think! - Page 6

Originally posted by: Advaymerijaan

Wow! So beautiful OS 👏

Both have the similar pain in their hearts but don’t share with each other and live with the heartache 🥺 🥺 Both love each other and acted differently one wants to stay with her love and looking for a signal from him While the other is so much in love with her that the guilt from his past actions towards her are not letting him live in peace🥺

And finally Rishabh decided to free Prerna from the Marriage which he thought was only a sham but he was totally wrong in reading his wife’s emotion.. Finally a confrontation I am happy that they confront and confess what they feel for each other .. 😊❤️

Their Love is development of parenting a child together along with the understanding for each other’s heartbreak and the suffering they have gone through.. They are attuned to each other’s suffering so slowly they will heal each other with the love they have bringing back to the happiness that they deserved. 😛❤️❤️

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

What a beautiful and engaging read Big thumbs up for the vacant resignation of Prerna when she said I am tired.

Often, I feel in ITV, women feel must feel tired. Almost battling the whole world. The word tired was the melting pot of this wonderful piece. Looking forward to more such gems from you.

@Bold - Totally!

Originally posted by: Breezi11197

Your works always amaze me

Originally posted by: lovefk

Don't know what was so weird about this one shot it was quite perfect frankly I love how they're communicating and trying to understand each other also one can see that being with him she has evolved, she doesn't just give in and melts into a puddle on his confession. Loved reading that bit so much❤️ Also that angst in the beginning half, so well written could imagine the tormented looks on their faces! Cant wait to read more from you

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Loved it... 😍😍

Every bit of it

Originally posted by: komlika

beautiful story ❤️

thank you so much 🤗

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Shruti🤗

Edited

OMG, first off, you have to just write more content. You are amazing!!!👏👏👏

Their pain is what holds them together and you have captured her wonderfully. Its like love and pain will go hand in hand for them in the show as well. You have handled every single emotion with expert finesse.

That confession was just UFF!!! I can not wait for this to happen in the show

Thank you so much for liking it.

Originally posted by: MR21

INTENSE. This is what I would say about this story.

An impulsive decision which was taken in guilt by him without considering her opinion, which gave immense pain to both of them equally. Tired of fighting fate, and then the love, and now the pain. I loved the confession and the ending.

Idk why had I just opened the story as i don't read PreRish. But I am glad that I have opened it. Your first paragraph hooked me till the end. I have been an avid fanfiction reader from last 7 years and although I do not have the capability to judge a beautiful auther like you but your description was tremendous. I hate the unnecessary use of difficult words in story which force a person not so good in English to go and search dictionary. Your writing is smooth, a few new words here and there and soft going. Idk, the dialogues seemed common but the presentation of them was beautiful as well. But i liked the descriptions more.

Good writeups deserves appreciation. Excuse me if i had been a little constructive and judgy at the same time. Old habit dies hard i guess. But you are a wonderful writer what i felt after reading this.

Kudos.

~KamikazeKnight01

Originally posted by: KamikazeKinght01

Idk why had I just opened the story as i don't read PreRish. But I am glad that I have opened it. Your first paragraph hooked me till the end. I have been an avid fanfiction reader from last 7 years and although I do not have the capability to judge a beautiful auther like you but your description was tremendous. I hate the unnecessary use of difficult words in story which force a person not so good in English to go and search dictionary. Your writing is smooth, a few new words here and there and soft going. Idk, the dialogues seemed common but the presentation of them was beautiful as well. But i liked the descriptions more.

Good writeups deserves appreciation. Excuse me if i had been a little constructive and judgy at the same time. Old habit dies hard i guess. But you are a wonderful writer what i felt after reading this.

Kudos.

~KamikazeKnight01

Thank you so much for your constructive criticism. It matters a lot.