PreRish One-Shot: You Are Tired I Think! - Page 3

Everything about it was just right. The anguish of unreciprocated feelings, relief upon hearing the confession... everything was perfect.

Purely fabulous...

Just tried of pretending, hurt

beautifully written

It's beautifully written.you r wonderful with your words.do write more. Thanks

Wow! So beautiful OS 👏

Both have the similar pain in their hearts but don’t share with each other and live with the heartache 🥺 🥺 Both love each other and acted differently one wants to stay with her love and looking for a signal from him While the other is so much in love with her that the guilt from his past actions towards her are not letting him live in peace🥺

And finally Rishabh decided to free Prerna from the Marriage which he thought was only a sham but he was totally wrong in reading his wife’s emotion.. Finally a confrontation I am happy that they confront and confess what they feel for each other .. 😊❤️

Their Love is development of parenting a child together along with the understanding for each other’s heartbreak and the suffering they have gone through.. They are attuned to each other’s suffering so slowly they will heal each other with the love they have bringing back to the happiness that they deserved. 😛❤️❤️

What a beautiful and engaging read Big thumbs up for the vacant resignation of Prerna when she said I am tired.

Often, I feel in ITV, women feel must feel tired. Almost battling the whole world. The word tired was the melting pot of this wonderful piece. Looking forward to more such gems from you.

Your works always amaze me

Don't know what was so weird about this one shot it was quite perfect frankly I love how they're communicating and trying to understand each other also one can see that being with him she has evolved, she doesn't just give in and melts into a puddle on his confession. Loved reading that bit so much❤️ Also that angst in the beginning half, so well written could imagine the tormented looks on their faces! Cant wait to read more from you

Loved it... 😍😍

Every bit of it

beautiful story ❤️

thank you so much 🤗

Shruti🤗

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OMG, first off, you have to just write more content. You are amazing!!!👏👏👏

Their pain is what holds them together and you have captured her wonderfully. Its like love and pain will go hand in hand for them in the show as well. You have handled every single emotion with expert finesse.

That confession was just UFF!!! I can not wait for this to happen in the show