PreRish OS : Melting Point In Love - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Amazing, loved it 😍😍

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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Hey thank u for the PM ♥️

Loved this OS......

Buddhu Mr Bajaj 😁😁

Jealous prerna......

Flashbacks ❣️

Just loved it...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Wow, Rishabh way of expressing was way too romantic. Prerna is so cute

Keep writing and bless us with more OS on the weekend

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Hey thank you for the PM.

Prerna dropping hints to Mr. B and him being aloof, thereby leaving her flustered.. hehe. I love it. This is brilliant. This Prerna is exactly what I thought she'd be like when I heard Erica was cast.

Karan Singh Grover's salt pepper hair and his grey suits that compliment his hairstyle are two good things in my otherwise boring life. I am a sucker for salt pepper. But I can imagine he'll look like a bloody god of carnality if he has black hair.

Thank God for fanfictions.. I can't bear the show Prerna's prem Jaap at all.

So thank you for writing this

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Womann you're brilliant..... ❤️ The OS was beautiful,cute,sweet,sexy and moreover it was NIRVANA!!😆Yes you read right. I can bet that 90% of readers were feeling the OS amidst reading it!!!

Perfect dialogues and the way she was giving those green signals....Damnn loved each and every line...👏Bravoo....You go Girl❤️You need to join the creative team of show and this show would reach the trp of 10.0 I can bet my life on that!!!

A perfect one! Don't worry none of readers would've been bored instead they must've wanted more...!!! Very Well written...do write more ❤️And thanks for the PM dost....

Love yaaa.

~Mahi

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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Thanks for the pm. Loved it!! Beautifully written. I cant wait for this to happen in the show..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Rishabh takes a deep breath, fumbling with words, he walks out without a backward glance. Leaving behind an amused Prerna.

The husband in question is dumbfounded, unable to react.

I would love to see a flustered RB. Its on my list.

Rishabh holds Prerna's wrist and the words she speaks showers him with relief. Losing the grim expression, he grins, "Jaanta aur samajta toh yeh sab main zaroor tha Prerna, lekin shayad I needed you to say the words darling. Ek bechaini khatakti thi dil mein hamesha se, aur aaj jaake lagta hai jaise woh bechaini sukoon mein badal gayi. Aur tum ho mera sukoon Prerna, meri zindagi, meri biwi, mera pyaar, mera sab kuch bas tum ho. I love you Prerna, I really do. You are the first woman I fell in love with and you will be the last woman I will ever love"

So are you ready to swim, leap and melt with me"

Confession ho toh aisa👏

It was an absolute treat to read. I can not tell you how I love this forward Prerna and flustered Bajaj.

You gave us so many sweet moments all in one OS! I am over the moon.

Between you and Ankie you guys have solved the problem of chocolate hair.🤣 I still prefer the silver, makes look rakish and dangerous at the same time

Thank you so much for this treat.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh I loved this ❤️ I loved Prerna's hints. Suits her her personality so, so well. I long to see this happy, chirpy version of Prerna in the show. And of course, such romantic moments between the two.

"And coming to your question what am I doing, if you did not realize Mr. Bajaj lemme enlighten you, isse (she points to the way he has caught her wrist in his) haath pakadna kehte hai aur aapne mera haath pakda hua hai. Aur toh aur yeh aap hii ki ghalti hai kii mera sarr aapse takra gaya" Prerna lifts at eyebrow at him and throws him the don’t counter me look.

^^ This part is my favourite, along with the part where he said that he stayed away so she could do it on her own and succeed in getting the contract (s).

Overall, a lovely read. Thank you :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Hey...

This was really nice!! :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

It’s wonderfully written 👏

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