PreRish TS- Ocean of Secrets || Part-2 updated Pg 5 || - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AryanSahil

Hi ho ho hoho this story is fabulous wowwwww but why stopped there??? Please post next part soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely story. Please update the next part soon!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monali5

Lovely story. Please update the update the next part soon!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It is a very lovely story... Please update it soon... waiting to see how the story unfolds....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is great heart wrenching and painful story. Update the next part soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I can't love you,I can never love a girl like you. You know why ?? He questions.

Why?? She asks.

Why?? Hmm, let's sit- He replies

Kyunki tum bilkul Meri maa jaisi ho. Meri maa ne mere baap se kabhi pyaar nahi Kiya,jaise tum nahi karti mujhse. My father wasn't like me,he was a very innocent person.You know what happened with my father??

What?? She asks

He committed suicide due to my mother's infidelity-he replies.

She left my father for her old love. Even in 17 years of marriage, she couldn't forget her love. My father couldn't bear this and he also left us forever.

I was only 16 at that time. I had forgotten my sorrows but I couldn't forget what Riya had gone through.

You know who is Riya? He questions.

Aapki behen- she answers.

Good,tumhe pata hai par tum achhi biwi nahi ho kyunki tum Meri maa jaisi ho- He says it again.

Riya was 8 years old at that time and she had a lung cancer. But my mother didn't even think about her own daughter and left with her boyfriend. Koi maa apne bachon ke saath aisa kaise Kar sakti hai- he cries.

I knew it that Riya can't survive more but Insaan apno ko itni aasaani se Marne thodi de sakta hai. So, even I tried to save her life. The oxygen cylinders were needed for her to breath but my aunt didn't give me just 50 rupees to buy it. And Riya died in my lap. From that day, mujhe 50 ke digit se hi nafrat ho gayi.

Riya ki toot ti huyi saanson ki awaaz mere kaano mein nahi,aaj bhi mere Dil mein sunai deti aur bahut takleef deti hai mujhe- he cries.

She is just listening to him and crying.

Why are you crying?? I have forgiven you.Tum toh bus ab maze Karo aur jiyo apni zindagi Mrs. Bajaj banke- he speaks.

But if I see you with that man again,I promise,I will kill you- he roared.

He cups her face and speaks-Kitni pyaari ho tum,bahut pyaari ho. But Yahi toh confusion hai,samajh mein nahi aata ki yeh ladki itni pyaari hai but nafrat hai mujhe isse.

Dil karta hai bus dekhta Raha tumhe ,nazarein na hate tumse par bahut nafrat karne ko Dil chahta hai.

He looks into her eyes and then turns his face in the other direction.Dhokha deti Hain tum logon ki nazrein,chahe Jo Marzi karlo ,tum log nahi bhoolti apna pehla pyaar- He speaks.

Now go from here and leave me alone- he shouts.

No,I won't go from here leaving you in this condition- she replies.

She comes near him and cups his face. Rishab,I can understand what you have gone through. But all women are not same. Please give me a chance atleast,I promise I'll heal all your wounds.Saying this , she kisses his forehead, eyes,nose and finally presses her lips on his to give him the assurance that she won't leave him ever.

She keeps his head on her lap and makes him sleep.

In the morning,he gets up with a jerk and thinks about the last night. He holds his head and starts cursing himself. He doesn't completely remember what happened last night but he does remember that she was with him.

Oh God,what did I do?? I can't go near her. Otherwise, she will make me weak in front of her and will leave me some day. Pata nahi Kya Kya Bata Diya hai Maine use Kal raat ko. Ab woh Meri meheroomiyon ka faayda uthayegi aur pata nahi Kya Kya karegi Meri saath.Itni mushkil se toh yeh saare raaz apne Dil mein dabakar rakha tha ,Kya zaroorat thi mujhe use apne paas bulane ki. I shouldn't have allowed her to enter my room at first.

Saying this,He hits his hand in the wall in anger and goes from there.

The end.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Updated👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: MR21

This is great heart wrenching and painful story. Update the next part soon.

Thank you so much for liking it😳, updated the next part👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Oh my goodness that was super painful. Oh oh oh. Where is part 3 now.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

The more we are getting into the story, the more we want...

update it soon...

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