What Have You Landed Yourself In? | PreRish Ficlet | Sequel Shot Pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wistfulness

He absolutely hated himself for allowing her pain to affect him to the extent where he felt as if it wasn't just her pain. Her pain, pained his heart. Her pain tugged his heart. Her pain wasn't just her pain anymore. Her pain was becoming his too or rather, it already became his.


Wow! ❤️

Thank you. ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Moushumi

Liked it.thanks.plz do write anything and everything on prerish. IF writers r the life saver for me who want good story for prerish (which we r not getting currently in the show)and their gradual progress. Thanks again.

I am glad you did. Thank you. :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Unres if and when time permits.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Uff!! His heart has started to beat seems like it 💔 he's starting to get affected but she's miles away from him. 😭 indeed, what has he landed himself in!

Very interesting update! Upload next part soon please ❤️

-Sanu

I ain't sure if this will have another part. Thank you for dropping by. :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Advaymerijaan

Wow!! It’s beautiful .. Mr. Bajaj is melting☺️❤️.. I loved how u explained both of their feelings. Mr. doesn’t want to show that he cares but couldn’t help it but the Mrs. doesn’t believe his concern is pure..

How sweet! Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed reading. :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: aryapdane

Ah ha ha.. this is awesome. Mr. B has realised his armour is not that impenetrable after all. Will you continue?

Thank you. 🤗 Oh he indeed did. 😆

I am not sure but I will try to get one more part. :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Unres if and when time permits. :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SnehaDoll

Wow! How beautifully you have penned! The title is apt👏

Thank you, Sneha. ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Short but absolute pleasure to read

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Right. For them. I think my writing is too rusty now so picking old pieces.😆

Wow. Sweet as usual. Thanks a ton.

I think you need to experiment new things. Try something that you've never written.

Thriller. Comedy.

Or supernatural 🤣

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