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Posted: 6 years ago
#51

Omg rabbit on skates... So much of tension.... Wow something like this on screen will make screen explode

Now this is what i want to see. Desire is natural i dont know why people show on tv that they can stay away from physical part of a relationship

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Holy mother of Jesus! Your writing boggles my mind! It's so bloody intense .Your writing tugs at the heart strings ❤.Please don't go it's only the stories that are keeping me sane !

DON'T GO! 🙏 please pretty please!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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A hot piece on a cold rainy day

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I TOH SWEAR I STOPPED BREATHING TOWARDS THE END! and the confidence with which he says your new shaadi will last only a year! looooved it! also man your frikking imagery drives me nuts its so natural and in flow, lyrical ! beginning part toh serious Jay Gatsby and his parties ki feel ayee, RB our desi Gatsby eheh if you've seen the movie or read the novel! so basically the point is let your imagination sprint as wild as it can and bindaas hokar post cuz seriously I've read some crazy steamy stuff there's lot here I don't think it gets censored apart from a few words! there's so much on asya from qubool hai too! uuugggghhhhhh I loved how brazen this encounter was, RB ke influence mein Prerna has also understood morality kitnee fragile hai! also now you gotta continue with this yeh aise aadha adhoora nahi chalega!

Ps- do you keep track of your drabbles by any chance I didn't know you wrote them on threads also must find and read!!!

yeh raha friend all appreciation of you is less only waise toh!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#55

First of all, you are an amazing writer.

Second, the whole os gave me Klaus and Caroline feels from 'The Vampire Diaries'. Especially the part where he said he can wait. It was the same as Klaus telling Caroline 'He was your first love, I intend to be your last'

You have captured the characters perfectly. And seeing the way the show is going , for us Prerna-Bajaj fans this will have suffice....

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Posted: 6 years ago
#56

So I read it again just now! I wonder till what extent is this prerna willing to go to explore herself and their relation! now since they're divorced I'm assuming prerna has reached the stage where she's learnt to finally keep herself before anybody else before any Anurag or any RB also for that matter. Now that she's lived with him all this while she's probably learnt how to play the games he indulges in and whatever it is that makes him tick. I so wanna read more about this prerna how is she going to manipulate the situation in her favour! I kinda wanna whine and say chalo please write next part 6/7 months later ahah but then I also want to read about their stolen moments with one another. The push and pull and what is the final nail in the coffin that'll make his words come true about sham shaadi!

hey on a serious note please don't abandon these ones okay they're bloody good its okay we'll try to wait patiently for the updates if you're busy! but pliisssssssssssssssss do write more about this situation!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I stumbled into the forums solely coz of rishabh's entry and my gawdd!!!❤️what a pleasant surprise it was!!!

First of all, you write so well...must i say that your words hold way more power than the visuals ever would👏Like i couldn't contain my praise for you despite myself being a lazy bum!

1) Read this story thrice and bookmarked it.

2)I'm in love with your rishabh bajaj. My gawd!! He is so....gosh so....alluring, sizzling, enticing, exudes power and feels so....arousing!👏I'm at loss. I am really craving another part to this Os, the continuation to the ending.

3) he continued to make crude remarks and yet....yet each one of those fell not a sigh short of graceful. It was your intriguing play of words that filled him with magic. Every emotion, every expression was so well expressed that I was feeling dizzy!

4) That powerplay of amour you showed us was so...exciting and thrilling. Above soapy romantic eyelocks, it was the dangerous truth of instincts.

5) Those lines....I want to spread you, your lithe frame beneath mine in pleasure...and till the end where he refused to even allow her memories of another man...they have my heart...YOUR rishabh bajaj has my heart. Thank you for writing such an amazing piece. You have my utter admiration at your disposal for I find myself in helpless awe of your work.

On that note, do mind telling this admirer how are you such a sport with the words...like I'm genuinely curious ...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#58

This is too hot to handle!!

I remember in KZK 1 Mr Bajaj got one portrait made of Prerna, but your Rishab did it himself! And the way he soothed Prerna's jealousy. Uff . Your dark Mr Bajaj is just too good .

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Posted: 6 years ago
#59

This is an excellent piece of racy writing

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Firstly, thank you so much for this❤️❤️

Secondly:

Holy. Freaking. Sh*t.

Let me start from the beginning:

Amazing description of the luxurious surroundings of the Mansion, I could literally picture every word, every view, texture of the fabrics and could smell the smoke of the cigars. 100/100

But all she seeks is his face. In 600 faces, she wants to see his❤️

Loved, loved, loved the banter between them, although they are not a couple anymore but the give-and-take talk was all and much more 😂

His suggestive statements lol! Stunning view. Gonna hurt in new places. Why don't you call my bluff. Goodness!!!!! All that talk about her lingerie omgggggggg.

She runs, and sees herself. As a queen. His queen👑 and he painted her himself, like he imagines her.

He knows her and Anurag won't last and he's ready to wait but...not right now.

Now jumping to the ahem-ahem part😏

It was FIRE. AAG. AGNI. GARAM!!!!!

Each and every word, every action, every touch, every brush, I could feel it. In my toes. Rishabh's frustration. Prerna's need. Their desire, love, lust.

Man I wish he would have finished what he started because Prerna was not going to stop him anytime soon, until she got what she needed!

I'm so happy. I'm so, so happy!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ This was sheer perfection darling, the wait was worth it😘😍

PS. This was definitely not 18+ but 16+ 😌 18+ (Matlab iska next part) bhi de do na ab please please please please please please please please please please please please 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Paaji tussi great ho BTW

PS. Bajaj x Nivedita? :(

HAHA I think I replied to you on the AT BUT THAAANK YOU SO MUCH! I actually don't like this OS much but the fact that YOU liked it MEANS SO MUCH since I wrote it for you in the first place and was so terrified of writing something steamy and totally botching it up! HAHA. THAANKYOU <3 18 + kya hota hai?😛

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