Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 51

Soha🤗. I know I am super late this time. I was not active on the day you updated and so I had to postpone reading/replying to the weekend.

Now coming to the update. WOW, someone is Jealous and affected by his absence and looking at his pic with some other girl doesn't help it either. This is a damn interesting change.

Bajaj and his charm in the party, no wonder all the ladies admire him including his wife. Offo, the way he looks at her before admitting that she looks beautiful and then simply taking her for dance. Like who does that after meeting your wife after a week. Damn, she is affected by this closeness. Even more, affected by his closeness to any other woman apart from her. So much that she had a get drunk.

The scene with drunk Prerna and the men in her life is funny. In the end, she is going home in her husband's arms. She started comparing herself with the other lady. Okay, she did cross some lines while he is carrying her which she would have never done if she is not drunk. Poor Bajaj, he had to control himself with all her behavior.

I am eagerly waiting to see how she would react now. She does remember everything which makes matters worse for her. I am so looking forward to their first encounter after this now.

I absolutely LOVED this update. Now waiting for the next one.

🤗 I hope you update soon! Look forward to that!

I did read Tender encounters! Another amazing writer and FF. I wish the show gets some ideas from all you talented writers. Right now not much impressed with them except for some Bajaj scenes.

Look forward to the next part. Until then will read more FFs and OSs 😊

This is my favourite PreRish story. I love PreRish characters here. Especially the way you are developing their character & relationship.
The way Mr Bajaj manipulated everything in a subtle way was very impressive. Our society is so close-minded that they would easily blame the woman. First Basus beg Prerna to save Anu at any cost now they are blaming her when things got out of hand. Anupam was the only was who was using his head.
How easily Anu forgot that he once was living with Komolika. I don't remember Prerna asking for character certificate.
As much as I love PreRish interaction I hate that she kept trying to help ungrateful people like Basus. She started to trust Mr Bajaj enough when it comes to saving her sister. I loved it when he said, “If I didn’t know better, I’d think you have a little thing for me.” Mr Bajaj is turning into a personal genie. Prerna is getting attracted to him like a moth to a flame.
Poor Prerna she waited for him and he didn't meet her. I missed PreRish scene but Anu was annoying. Just because she was admiring a building doesn't mean she wants to move in. I was rolling my eyes the entire.
I love their debate over political science/economics. The way he changed her mind. She has every right to be upset that her fiancé didn't come to see her. I'm positive that Mr Bajaj knew Anurag will see. Let's see how long this relationship gonna last. Aww, he orders a hot water bag and tea for her. I love the whole chess scene.
Finally, it over between Prerna and Anurag. I knew it won't last long with the way Anurag was acting.
I love this marriage proposal. It was way better than how the show handled. I love the way Prerna is being practical about it instead of throwing tantrum. He asked to think again. I'm glad Prerna cleared with him that she is planning to stay faithful & not make a mockery of the marriage.
Aww, I love Kuki-Prerna bond. Ugh, I hate both Mohini, Nivedita & spineless Anurag. Last time I check Prerna-Anurag broke up. She can do whatever hell she wants to, marry whoever she wants to and she definitely doesn't owe them anything. Aww, he tried to cheer her up.
Poor Prerna but I understand where Mr Bajaj seeing his daughter getting sick is making him. Kuki is his priority. I love the way Prerna stand up for herself. He is definitely a good influence on her. I love Tubby.
Mr Bajaj started to care for Prerna. I'm the way their relationship is developing, unlike the show. He helped her in her paper that was so sweet & surprise was even sweeter -cookies/flowers. Aww, surprise birthday party so sweet.
Ugh, Anurag, I didn't miss him at all. Now he realized he was wrong after she got married. I really want to punch Anu. I bet the reason he wants her back because his ego is hurt. He probably thought she is gonna come running back to him after he questioned her character. I mean sure Mr Bajaj manipulated the situation but it's not his fault that Anu is so gullible. I'm glad she told Mr Bajaj about Anu but why did she have to defend him after he manhandled her?
Is someone getting jealous? Drunk Prerna is my favourite. The entire conversation between PreRish was hilarious. I'm glad he clarified that there are no mistresses. Can't wait for the next part. Update soon & please pm me. 🙂

Please update soon 😭

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLIISSSS DO UPDATE SOON

What an awesome story.

You are an amazing writer.

Bro, when you updating this? Please don't tell me you gave up coz IF PM's aren't user friendly. There'll be some other way out. 😛

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Hi,

I know. I haven't updated in a while. I tried sending out pms with the 22nd updates but it massively failed and I was in no mood to try again. I have completely lost inspiration since then because of the complete mess they've made of RB arc. I stopped watching the day they began showing his feelings for Prerna. Christ. It makes no sense. NO SENSE! How do you take a cutthroat grey character and turn him into a paltu kutta in a few episodes? I just don't get it.

Anyway, hopefully inspiration will strike again but I'm for now I'm just meh.

Originally posted by: Sohali19

Note:

Hi,

I know. I haven't updated in a while. I tried sending out pms with the 22nd updates but it massively failed and I was in no mood to try again. I have completely lost inspiration since then because of the complete mess they've made of RB arc. I stopped watching the day they began showing his feelings for Prerna. Christ. It makes no sense. NO SENSE! How do you take a cutthroat grey character and turn him into a paltu kutta in a few episodes? I just don't get it.

Anyway, hopefully inspiration will strike again but I'm for now I'm just meh.

Heyo sorry to hear your muse has been suffering - I feel that hard. Good luck, I hope inspiration can find you again because this is an incredible story and you are an incredible writer! ❤️ But I can't blame you because lol same @ all the suck this show has produced 😆

Originally posted by: Sohali19

Note:

Hi,

I know. I haven't updated in a while. I tried sending out pms with the 22nd updates but it massively failed and I was in no mood to try again. I have completely lost inspiration since then because of the complete mess they've made of RB arc. I stopped watching the day they began showing his feelings for Prerna. Christ. It makes no sense. NO SENSE! How do you take a cutthroat grey character and turn him into a paltu kutta in a few episodes? I just don't get it.

Anyway, hopefully inspiration will strike again but I'm for now I'm just meh.

Hey❤️

Don't worry, can relate! Take your sweet time, I know it's super difficult to write with no inspiration. We'll wait ☺️

-Sanu