Subconscious Desires - PreRish Ficlet - Page 3

Originally posted by: najma123

This I guess is the second phase in their story, when he gets over his, I am so cool attitude 😆. Interesting. I liked how subtly you have portrayed his mind, without all his usual artifice without making it emo or mushy or all weird that I can't ever imagine Bajaj do (or cringe if he does). 👏

Edit - I kinda expected this to be borderline steamy with either one of the two, hopefully Prerna feeling something for Bajaj. Idk if you write such stuff but I want you to. Goes with this premise. 😉

Thank you, Najma. Pleasure to know, that you had a nice time reading this.

In reply to you edit, I would say it is because of the word desires right? The word is often taken along romantic and intimate, mostly sexual lines but let's accept, emotional desires are the most intimate ones.😳

@bold - I don't. I don't touch physical romance in writing. Sorry.

Originally posted by: Monali5

This is so beautifully penned. I want to read more on Rishab's perspective .Do continue!

Thank you, Monali. I am sorry but I don't think I will be writing more to this one.

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

This is a first-rate expression of RB's subconscious longing. I loved the subtleties of the emotions prevalent here. The concluding sentence has a haunting feeling to it.

Please continue. :)

Thank you so much.❤️ I am glad to know you liked this piece.

Ah a haunting feeling. Didn't intend to bring it that way but now when you say it, I agree. I am not sure about the continuation. Sorry.

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

This was surprisingly filled with emotions! With the title, I was expecting something more...you know😆

So his heart beats with guilt, maybe just a little bit but still. And she absolutely dislikes him, obviously😆

What he asked was true. How could she love someone so much? And what she answered...was it true? Is it really that hard to love someone that she believes Rishabh can't love and know?

What does the next update hold? Can't wait to know!

I know. I know. Desires seem to have evoked some different feelings within you guys. 😆 Emotions are all that I can write.

What she answered is true, from her perspective. She knows absolutely nothing about him than what he had allowed her to know and what she knows about him, the perception she holds about him... she gets to say what she did.

There is no next update, Sanya. Sorry. Thanks for dropping by.

Originally posted by: Advaymerijaan

That was so good.. 👏My heart is crying already thinking abt the hartred that Mrs. Bajaj is going to display for this man. I hope Mr. Bajaj will give her back as much ads he gets 😃😃. I can tolerate the ruthless and Shartk in business world Bajaj but can never imagine a live sick and devdas Bajaj. Do write more 😊

Thank you so much. Prerna gets to hate him but him giving back to her doesn't make much sense to me. She had told him that she loves Anurag. She had told him that she is carrying Anurag's child but yet, he chose her and with her, will come her hatred and so many more intense emotions for doing what he did.

Bajaj isn't becoming love sick and devdas anytime soon. He is one tough man.

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

There was no point in giving an advance notice when I knew you would find this! You are too active here to miss stuff on your current favorites, I guess?😆

True that 🤣

Sahi pakde hain

You are always first.🤗  Thank you so much for always being biased 😆 but am absolute sweetheart. I am glad you enjoyed reading.

Ayyyyy. I'm not biased you're the best.

You already know, that there is no continuation. New one? Let's see.

Yep let's keep it as 'Let's see'

Lots of love

Muahhhh!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

In the story it seems like PreRish are still settling in..The way you have portrayed and captured Prerna and Rishabh's raw emotions and unhealed feelings is simply brilliant..With no option available for either of them to back out from what they have got themselves in, it looks like the only way for Prerna and Rishabh is the way ahead with Sneha acting as the string holding and tying them together..Very good..👍🏼

Oh they indeed are. Thank you so much.

@bold - So nicely put and that's very true.

What a beautiful write up ❤️esp the last line he says ❤️please write more 👍🏼

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

and am hurt. 😩😖💔💔💔

Sorry is all that I can say. That's why I mentioned this is a ficlet. I would have written TS if I had any intentions of continuing. :(

Originally posted by: fitoori_kudi

What a beautiful write up ❤️esp the last line he says ❤️please write more 👍🏼

Thank you. ❤️