The Lift FF P6 Rewritten PG10 05/03/20 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

Duuuddee! This is so damn funny! The part about the elbows and she swinging either way when he asked she was threatening him both were HILARIOUS! And very very well written. Prerna is sooo damn cute ! Seems like Anurag has resigned to giving into her craziness. He seems like the calm kind who would be able to handle her. And they calling each other Basu and Sharma like they are two colleagues. It just adds to their quirk! This is so damn cute dude. Please continue!!

Aw thanks! Im super glad it made you laugh:)
Haha that's just Prerna for you! Aw thank you love!
He sure is, even though by the end of the story im sure she would have drove him crazy!
Thank you so much again!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

Forget Basu, even I would like to hire such a girl as my PA. Full day entertainment package coupled with smartness!

You write so so adorably well. I can almost imagine every bit of it with Erica as Prerna and Parth as Anurag.

She's so damn funny and cute! The realism touches in this story are amazing. Like snapping fingers, breathing loudly and yes, the quick remarks and humour.

Loving it so much!!!

Again, mahogany desk reminding him of her honey eyes. Beautiful pictures you create! ❤️

Funny bones and elbows Hahahahahaha!😆
Too good and lively!!!

Basu Sharma adorable antics 😳😆

Please do update awfully soon! Can't wait any longer!😃

Cheers!

Legit same! I always love a funny person, she's ever so quirky! When Basu is done with her, ill send her your way!
Aw thanks so much love! That means a lot and im so glad you can picture them!

Isn't she just! I think the clicking her fingers thing will be her signature move!

Aw yay im so glad!

Haha he's awestruck already

I will surely try:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

My favourite line -

Are you threatening me?
And the yes no answer.

Literally jumped on seeing Part 1 updated.
I'd advice you to only mention the latest part in the title, something like - The Lift FF, Pt1 Pg2

😃

Haha that was mine too!
Aw thats so cute! I will do:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
Amazing🥳
PLEASE CONTINUE Soon🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: FaizaAndalibC

Amazing 🥳

PLEASE CONTINUE Soon🤗

Thank you love!
I sure will
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part Two~


Anurag looked up from his keyboard at the buzzing sound, pressing the button, he cleared his throat "Hello".


"Heyyy" Prerna waved at him from through the clear panels separating their office.


He sighed, hand smacking his forehead "You're literally a few feet away, couldn't you walk?"


"What and waste energy? No" she giggled, "Anyway, the files are done".


"Well, bring them over then" honestly, a toddler would understand him quicker.


"Yeahhhh" she trailed off, "About that, I was hoping you'd come and get them" she offered him a sweet smile, lashes fluttering as she did.


"Do I look like a slave to you?"


"Uh, if I answer that I may get fired, see the term slave can be very subjective, what you think a slave looks like is not necessarily what I think a slave looks like and-" her jaw dropped when the call cut. "How rudeee" she huffed.


"Damn it" Anurag barged through the door. "Give me the damn files".


"Say please" she instructed, foot-tapping as she waited patiently.


"You don't boss me around, I'm the boss here and therefore I do the bossing" he paused, brows knitting together, "Around?"


"Confused yourself there, didn't ya?" Prerna held out the paperwork. "I have never seen so many spelling errors in my life, for a while I thought I was going crazy".


"Going? Sure you're not already there?"


Scowling, she continued: "I think all your staff need lessons on their grammar, I mean" she flicked through one of the files, "Who spells merger, m, e, r, j, e, r? Stupid" she shook her head in disdain.


Looking down at the mahogany brown desk to control his temper, he noted the similarity between that and the colour of her eyes. Through gritted teeth he growled: "That was the file I wrote" he clenched his fist over the papers so they crumpled, imagining it was her teeny tiny pea-sized brain.


"Honestly, I am as surprised as you are that those words just came out of my mouth, it's best you learn now that I am not Snapchat, what I mean by that is I have no filter, the only way we'll work is if you accept that, in turn, I will try" she did bunny ears with her fingers, "Try to accept your horrid yellow" she choked as if about to vomit, "Shoes".


He hated how she acted like the words pained her to say. "Oh for goodness sake" he slipped his shoes off and slammed them onto the desk, "Better?"


She sniffed "Uh, bit cheesy, don't you think?"


His voice cracked "I'm gonna kill you, I'm honestly gonna kill you" he tugged at his hair, "I can't cope, you're too much, it's all too much" burying his face in his hands, he used all his inner strength not to cry.


"Ooh, death threats, you really are reaching new lows, how low can ya go? Can you go down low? All the way to the floor?" She sang happily, "Gotta love the limbo".


"You are singing THE CHA CHA SLIDE" he thumped his hands on the desk making his shoes jump.


"Alrightttt" she held her hands up, "Sorry, gosh, somebody got out the wrong side of the bed this morning".


Anurag pinched the brim of his nose "You know what, just go, just go home, I'll see you at eight-thirty am tomorrow" he began to walk away when her shrill voice stopped him.


"Actually, that's not going to work".


"Why not? Got a doctor's appointment or something? Because I require a doctor's note for evidence".


"No, that's just far too early, so I'll be in at ten".


He'd given up, it was clear crazy lift lady was the boss now and he no longer had the strength to fight her on it anymore. "Alright, whatever, see you then" he scurried toward the door.


"One last thing, the Kapoor industrials are ripping you off, that was clear from the sales, according to their latest newsletter, they gain about fifteen per cent more than other companies every month, you give them ten per cent of all earnings, they benefit from this more than you do" Prerna stated proudly, let's just say she was a genius and leave it at that.


"I'm impressed" Anurag looked at the files in his hands, "No one else picked that up, I guess you have an eye for these things, I'm willing to forget your previous blunders today if you continue to work as well as you did with this".


Once again, the way her eyes lightened to a caramel colour as she smiled made his insides churn. "Thank you, you won't regret it, Basu, oh don't forget your shoes" she called out.


He waved her away "Keep them, Cinderella is always in need of spares" he winked, then returned to his desk, adamant on finding a bigger project to take on that would distract him from the loneliness that occasionally crept in.


+ + +


Aman was hidden and ready, war paint made with ketchup lined his cheeks and the newest water gun warmed his hands, when the enemy arrived he would take the fatal shot. The sound of keys in the door made him edit his position, then he was on his feet and pulling the trigger.


Prerna screamed, falling forward in a fit of giggles "Amannnn" she grabbed her gun and aimed it his way, chasing him around the dining table, edging from right to left before catapulting herself forward and knocking him onto the sofa. "Say you surrender" she held the gun to his head.


"Never, I will not let my country down" he vowed, afterall he was nothing if not loyal to his cause.


Anjali came out of nowhere armed with two cups of water that she drenched them in "I winnnn".


The siblings looked at each other with an unspoken understanding, nodded and aimed their weapons, took their shots and watched as their friend of many years drowned in water.


"Okay, okay" she held her hands up, dropping to her knees, "I surrender" warm tears escaped down her cheeks with her melodic laughter.


"You know the deal, Anjali" Prerna smirked, "Dinner is on you".

Edited by -Rehanna- - 5 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Oh my gosh you're such a terrific writer! I finished reading all parts in one go! Love all their banter! <3 Looking forward to the next update 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
O dpnt know what to say, it has everything in it. A perfect story for our anupre, you are a great writer...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
Wow...the first part was hilarious!!!
Prerna is over enthusiastic
and very very bubly!!!
Cant wait to read more...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
Thes second part was updated too!!! Great!!
AnuPre banters are so cute...
Definitely a treat to read!!!
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