Was it for keeps?.. AnuPre OS

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Priya

@priyanvs

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Nice os dear

Loved it

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Anya

@Three.Broomstic

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: priyanvs
Nice os dear
Loved it

Thank you 😊

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Indulekha00

@Indulekha00

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Thank you for this OS. Beautifully penned.

Until the end I hoped they would finally accept each other 😭

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Anya

@Three.Broomstic

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Indulekha00
Thank you for this OS. Beautifully penned.
Until the end I hoped they would finally accept each other 😭

That was the original plan but then it was becoming too long

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Indulekha00

@Indulekha00

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

That was the original plan but then it was becoming too long

Yeah I know how it happens. and I have the habit of scribbling it out first. At times when it is ready to be typed, there will be so many pages to type and sometimes even I won't be able to decipher what I scribbled 😆

May be you could consider adding another part.

Edited by Indulekha00 - 6 years ago

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Soundharya

@Feltonate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Wow! The ending was perfect just like the serial is supposed to be (I hope not 😕) the descriptions upto the point and it had a breezy flow in reading. Till the end I was wondering if they would accept each other, otherwise splendid. Keep writing I would love to read your work:)

Edited by Feltonate - 6 years ago

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Anya

@Three.Broomstic

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Indulekha00

Yeah I know how it happens. and I have the habit of scribbling it out first. At times when it is ready to be typed, there will be so many pages to type and sometimes even I won't be able to decipher what I scribbled 😆
May be you could consider adding another part.

Well like I said it became longer than I expected but I had fixed time of half an hour to finish it.

Obviously I couldn't finish it and then that resulted in a very haphazardly put together end. I don't know how it can move forward from where I left it. So I guess that's it for now, I'm sorry😭

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Anya

@Three.Broomstic

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Feltonate
Wow! The ending was perfect just like the serial is supposed to be (I hope not 😕) the descriptions upto the point and it had a breezy flow in reading. Till the end I was wondering if they would accept each other, otherwise splendid. Keep writing I would love to read your work:)

Thank you it means a lot that you liked it so much. 😊