My First FanFic of all the Vamps!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is my story of Aparna and Komolike and Debonita all making a come back!!!!!!

The story starts after tanisha dies after spontaneously combusting; both parivaars the Basu's and Bajaj grieve and about 5 mins later things are back to normal. Shravan quickly asks Kasak to be his wife and she agrees and both parivaars start the preparations for their wedding.

Everyhting is going fine when all of a sudden all the light go off and some one steps in and we hear "Nikaa, Nikaa," and another person enters and we hear " Issshhhh" ..at this points UD gets mad because "Isssshhh" bumps in to him and makes him spill his drink on himself.

UD: Hey what the hell did you do? Why would you make your entry in the dark and knock thing over!!! Some people!!! –

He's about to leave when some says

KOMO: Beta ….what can I do? I always make dramatic entries but this is all Debo's fault. I told you na Debo this was the stupidest thing you've ever thought up of...

Komo looks around and says: Has anyone seen Aprana….I mean she left the Vamp Cave before us hasn't she come yet????

DEBO: Aunty shes a Vamp not superman ....and besides she must went to Mr. Bajaj's House, after all even we didn't know all the goody two shoes are here!! How would she know?? Man these people ruin our plans before we out them into action..uggghhh koi baat nahi..i'll come up with sumthing better for next time.

UD: Miss Nautanki...please come with sumthing bit more intelligent than walking around in the dark.

Tell me how you all like it soo far and then I'll continue if people want me…be brutal!!! (kidding about the be brutal part)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like it. really different and kewl 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 I love it! You should continue! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I love it!!!Its so diff!!!And im missing Komo and Appu so much..well not Debo that much..Debo is crazy...but anyways Please Write The Next Part!!!!I wanna c indro-Appu-Komo scenes!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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DO U MEAN VAMPIRE? I JUST WATCHED SMALLVILLE SO VAMPIRES R ON MY MIND.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please do not write in caps...as people with think u are screaming and it gets really annoying if u write in caps
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats good plz continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sweet. please continue. komo and aparna are better than tanisha and aditya pratap singh
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good job and can't wait of the next update.

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